01-17-2014, 07:00 PM | #1 |
nok Su kow
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Cuddle farts..
Hi
Dis wise I'm always stuck in sweats- I mean something that's dark They say genius only needs a couple of sparks I do NOTHING with smarts, but Like, HELLLLLLOOOOOOO You're drowning! &..still judging the ark? This the x-ray gallery. Rupturing art Pfft Women? Survival of the fittest. Couples that spar You ever snag a gal, try to cuddle then fart? And act like the chair had a squeaky structure or part? Yeah lol worst case, birth day wishes & dirty dishes & the god, where will my life be at 30 image Yo what's that shit by my lip. It ain't herpes.. Is it? Yeah fuck it, now everyone's getting all wordy, specific Like that's the secret substance for herding your interest Her/he- WHAT IS IT? A dude or a chick? We call them TG's. You stupid or Ig? Oh, Well thank god it look the same, grooving their hips Ewwws, that's just sick. The imagery was gruesome, you. Dictionary's are for faggots who want to seem cool Jk. Srs. That was rude. They're prob's a think-tool Raise your hand if you possess that I wanna do laundry fuel Me neitherz. Going commando when out of boxer briefs rules Oh you spit gross right? That bodily fluids? Well it's probably flu You broke one brick and that karate chi grew Yo hold up. You c dat bish? Butt like a pottery spool? Yeah yeah. Took Molly. Good golly, greed, jewels Ain't wore earings since I lost one down the drain Sometimes.. I..just.. Wear a blindfold. Close the curtains & count the rain But if I know the person. I swear I'll go ballistic Psyche.. My synchronized silhouettes slap shadows that stall Fucking bitch. Argue w/u? MISEWELL SHOUT AT A WALL
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01-17-2014, 08:38 PM | #2 |
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- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
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I sometimes think you're a caricature of yourself being a caricature of yourself. Not saying I don't enjoy, or think you're skilled. Just wish you would apply your skillset to something different without your original influence of self being bound to it. Hard to describe, but oh well. Dope.
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01-19-2014, 01:20 AM | #3 |
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Not really into the religious pun, but the rest of it was okay I guess. I thought there were a few parts that didn't even make sense. For example the dictionary part were you being sarcastic, or literal? Cause you would think people who look words up have a bigger vocabulary and I am not sure how that would make them cool. There were parts that seemed to flow really well though. Although you really could do better though I think. I really expected more from someone of such high stature... Just seemed liked you just threw this one together quick?
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01-19-2014, 02:02 AM | #4 |
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Stupid fucking farts
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01-19-2014, 11:43 AM | #5 |
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i think you should write to a beat, like your next verse. just to see you know? maybe it will direct these thoughts in a more linear way. not to say anything wrong with this style of rap. but, yeah id listen to the beat and read along man just sayin. i liked this
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01-20-2014, 06:49 PM | #6 |
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They say genius only needs a couple of sparks
^^True dat. Pfft Women? Survival of the fittest. Couples that spar You ever snag a gal, try to cuddle then fart? And act like the chair had a squeaky structure or part? ^^Lol. Cool read...flow was straight, content be decent and I got a chuckle from your new name lol...enjoyable little flex man. & thanks for the feed it's appreciated, Stay upwards. |
01-21-2014, 03:38 AM | #7 |
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wtf, thought i fed this already.
anyways i lol'd a few times during this. well i guess not really l o l but like said ha in my own head. im pretty sure u wrote this super fast. but there were still lots of good parts. suuper original as always with the wording the first part hellllooooooo ahahha reminded me of a little kid. the ark line was good. a bunch of good little sections. would be SICK to see one that is straight fire all the way through with no lulls. nah'mean?? scheming, rhyming always awesome. the main reason i always peep ur stuff. really cool there as uj. p.s. ur pic battle thing with the 4 sluts was dope. camera presence line KILLED it. one of the best things ive ever seen from u actually man. keep at it. maybe u can pull of some upsets!
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01-31-2014, 08:42 AM | #8 |
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keystyle crew checking in.
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01-31-2014, 07:11 PM | #9 |
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Yeah lol worst case, birth day wishes & dirty dishes
& the god, where will my life be at 30 image Yo what's that shit by my lip. It ain't herpes.. Is it? Yeah fuck it, now everyone's getting all wordy, specific
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02-01-2014, 09:39 AM | #10 |
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WiZe? that wise?
This piece was different.. I think you have some skill man, i'd like to see something more serious from you, i'd like to see you stick with a topic as well.. sometimes I think you jump around too much with abstract bars an shit. This piece was ight, don't get me wrong. Im just saying I think you a more serious/artistic approach would bring your writing to another level.
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02-01-2014, 03:30 PM | #11 |
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I'd like you to not tell me wtf to do. Topics are for faggots. Well, most of them.
& here's a topical for your needy-ass. Your welcome. http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=44643
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02-01-2014, 03:53 PM | #12 | |
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but this was a fun read and the quoted part was my favorite part. it felt very random and thoughts were going everywhere and it all fit together pretty well. nice drop Whys. Peace. |
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02-01-2014, 04:27 PM | #13 | |
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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02-01-2014, 06:15 PM | #15 |
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You were giving me back-handed compliments obviously. It's fine. I could really give a ton of fucks. Who are you anyways?
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I have worked in an office of some sort for most of my adult life and have developed unbelievable flatulence control.
Dope piece tho...read it a few days ago, then again about an hour ago, killed it. Quote:
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