Left Brain.

CrookedWays · 03-12-2018, 11:03 PM

An artist with no particular art
But any art I see I cant help but pick it apart!
I wrote a book Im still at the mystery part
But history has taught us that most misserys dark
Born from a diff-erent spark mission to mars
No bruce banner but turn green when Im liftin a car!
Back then Id rap and people’d have they mouth open
Now its house coat in a house gloatin couch coastin
- I spent enough money for a lifetime
All I got to show is this legacy of tight lines
Im Feeling super you would swear I fight crime
Left brain thinker but Im going out my right mind!
Un shaved and un bathed but in some way
Came out the dragons lair un scathed
My pen game never changed, you did
I have always been the same a fuckin nuisance
You on disability cause your knees hurt
But its your relationships that need work
Which of your life goals you gonna leave first
Morality out the window you don’t give a shit
as long as your cash pressed like a steamed shirt!

Geno · 03-13-2018, 02:16 AM

Ok dope. Glad to.see a new face here. Wel ome to the Om. Stay active and feed others. This was fairly simple i design. Nice introductory piece. Flowed well. Syllables were placed well. Fun content. Good read. Thanks man. Keep rockin"

Elemental P · 03-13-2018, 10:51 PM

Nice piece, decent multi usage, good imagery. Basically just a free verse it seems. Cool content and nice flow. I'll try peeping more work in the open mic section

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-16-2018, 11:15 AM

03-12-2018, 11:03 PM	#1
CrookedWays Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: KW Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	Left Brain. An artist with no particular art But any art I see I cant help but pick it apart! I wrote a book Im still at the mystery part But history has taught us that most misserys dark Born from a diff-erent spark mission to mars No bruce banner but turn green when Im liftin a car! Back then Id rap and people’d have they mouth open Now its house coat in a house gloatin couch coastin - I spent enough money for a lifetime All I got to show is this legacy of tight lines Im Feeling super you would swear I fight crime Left brain thinker but Im going out my right mind! Un shaved and un bathed but in some way Came out the dragons lair un scathed My pen game never changed, you did I have always been the same a fuckin nuisance You on disability cause your knees hurt But its your relationships that need work Which of your life goals you gonna leave first Morality out the window you don’t give a shit as long as your cash pressed like a steamed shirt!

03-13-2018, 02:16 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Ok dope. Glad to.see a new face here. Wel ome to the Om. Stay active and feed others. This was fairly simple i design. Nice introductory piece. Flowed well. Syllables were placed well. Fun content. Good read. Thanks man. Keep rockin" __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-13-2018, 10:51 PM	#3
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507453	Nice piece, decent multi usage, good imagery. Basically just a free verse it seems. Cool content and nice flow. I'll try peeping more work in the open mic section

03-16-2018, 11:15 AM	#4
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275