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06-18-2016, 01:24 AM
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SYRACUSE
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,033
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i thought MMLP verse was ok but i got bored halfway reading through and it felt like a chore to finish. Just not his best work imho like the animal captivity one was dope. Artifice kept my attention throughout and had some cool lines like regal dominion/weaved with opinion and the few lines after were the peak of the verse imo altogether better depth and mechanics this time imo
v artifice
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