Incredible vs R!canTheoryz - R!CAN WINS

Sharp · 08-02-2022, 09:40 PM

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 6

Due Friday, August 5th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Incredible @R!canTheoryz

Incredible · 08-02-2022, 10:18 PM

Yo 10

R!canTheoryz · 08-03-2022, 04:08 AM

10 is fine.

R!canTheoryz · 08-05-2022, 02:00 PM

I need the small ext I’ll post soon as I get off work.

Incredible · 08-05-2022, 09:48 PM

Sent 10 to Sharp VIA PM.
@R!canTheoryz

R!canTheoryz · 08-06-2022, 03:37 PM

I’ll split ya Ear ever met a scared retired graffiti artist? You’ll Quit in Fear,
This like Magic Markers the way one swipe’ll make INK disappear.
I’ve been flexible. To build a crazy bond wit ya ppls never inseparable,
I’ll kill Your credits bold out Anythin you’ve said & still wouldn’t come out incREDIBLE.
Better run south. Having a hoe for a wife ain’t reslly some clout,
Because Your girls pussy been sitting on miles & that’s why we call her Fun Couch.
Imma bout to do Herb Badly. Right after I expose This Nerds Hobby,
You can sing all the ja Rule you want Ink will still get murder faster than IRV gotti.
This stupid bitch never raised it always been apart a group of lies,
So don’t stick ya hand on a touchy subject unless it’s a ceiling fan while the power on high.

Incredible · 08-06-2022, 04:10 PM

Sharp noticed I had to do some digging on my last opponent, but your a known loser
Vote-Rican?? He thinks it's a joke he's in on, not laughing with you...were laughing at you, stupid!
Said he'll post after work, guess the live battle scene ain't poppin
Stop n check with us?? Stfu, that's just the store you go to cash your weekly profit.
dgaf about your live battles, that we've never seen video of
You see the gif? That's just your gang of lames tryna get into the club
NC for sure the only time you'll catch rican with a Poll and it gets clicked proper
Strap is stitched to my shoulder so when I 'Terminate', naturally I'm 'gettin the choppa'
I hope your moms caught a toliet roll from the Donalds hands, B
I'm lying...honestly hope that storm a few years ago wiped out your whole fucking family!!!

evaD · 08-07-2022, 11:37 AM

Thought Rican had better ideas and smoother writing but a couple like Murda Inc bar could’ve been done better. Incredible I think your closer was strongest but a few at the start barely even rhymed to me

Vote - Rican

Wanderer · 08-07-2022, 11:52 AM

Rican delivered a harder hitting verse. Nothing was knockout but the wording / multis helped it land. Opener was LOTB despite the simple wordplay. Inc, ideas were there but needed more time taken to polish

Vote Rican

Sinacog · 08-07-2022, 08:49 PM

V/RICAN..

Adverse · 08-07-2022, 11:09 PM

Rican threw around some decent concepts although nothing was exactly hair raising, I think the attacks were definitely one dimensional focusing on just his name and nothing more. Would like to see some variety.

Inc was a little more variable with concepts but the execution wasn’t there. I think Inc needs to put more thought into making his concepts sting. I gave the same sort of advice earlier to Defiant, you’ve got to actually say something that’s going to do damage sometimes being clever isn’t enough. Go for the throat

V/Rican both could have used some rewriting but he was better this week

UserName · 08-08-2022, 10:12 PM

This was… interesting.

The ink lines from Rican are maybe the best things in his verse, and the stop n check line is probably my favorite from Inc. This was close.

Going with Rican on the strength of 2-to-1.

V - Rican

Blue Bayou · 08-08-2022, 10:15 PM

Rican

Opener an okay ink/Inc obvious name flip
Second nah
Fun couch... huh? Is this a funk ouch wordplay?
An ink ja rule punch in 2022... Jesus Christ
Closer makes no sense... touchy subject and a fan ref?

Vs.

Opener is poorly worded but the punch is ight
I assume Stop n Check is a mkneymart kind of store... okay third no
The random Arnold movies with no mention of Arnold is interesting
Storm probably an old personal... worded bland and straightforward

Seen both drop better before... i have Inc edging it with the stop n Check line and a couple okay personal attempts vs easy and played nameplays

08-05-2022, 09:48 PM	#5
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	Sent 10 to Sharp VIA PM. @R!canTheoryz Last edited by Sharp; 08-05-2022 at 10:42 PM. Reason: @ing r!can

08-07-2022, 11:37 AM	#8
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	Thought Rican had better ideas and smoother writing but a couple like Murda Inc bar could’ve been done better. Incredible I think your closer was strongest but a few at the start barely even rhymed to me Vote - Rican __________________

08-08-2022, 10:12 PM	#12
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	This was… interesting. The ink lines from Rican are maybe the best things in his verse, and the stop n check line is probably my favorite from Inc. This was close. Going with Rican on the strength of 2-to-1. V - Rican __________________ First Class

08-08-2022, 10:15 PM	#13
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Rican Opener an okay ink/Inc obvious name flip Second nah Fun couch... huh? Is this a funk ouch wordplay? An ink ja rule punch in 2022... Jesus Christ Closer makes no sense... touchy subject and a fan ref? Vs. Opener is poorly worded but the punch is ight I assume Stop n Check is a mkneymart kind of store... okay third no The random Arnold movies with no mention of Arnold is interesting Storm probably an old personal... worded bland and straightforward Seen both drop better before... i have Inc edging it with the stop n Check line and a couple okay personal attempts vs easy and played nameplays __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

08-02-2022, 10:18 PM	#2
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	Yo 10

08-06-2022, 04:10 PM	#7
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	Sharp noticed I had to do some digging on my last opponent, but your a known loser Vote-Rican?? He thinks it's a joke he's in on, not laughing with you...were laughing at you, stupid! Said he'll post after work, guess the live battle scene ain't poppin Stop n check with us?? Stfu, that's just the store you go to cash your weekly profit. dgaf about your live battles, that we've never seen video of You see the gif? That's just your gang of lames tryna get into the club NC for sure the only time you'll catch rican with a Poll and it gets clicked proper Strap is stitched to my shoulder so when I 'Terminate', naturally I'm 'gettin the choppa' I hope your moms caught a toliet roll from the Donalds hands, B I'm lying...honestly hope that storm a few years ago wiped out your whole fucking family!!!

08-07-2022, 11:52 AM	#9
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	Rican delivered a harder hitting verse. Nothing was knockout but the wording / multis helped it land. Opener was LOTB despite the simple wordplay. Inc, ideas were there but needed more time taken to polish Vote Rican

08-07-2022, 08:49 PM	#10
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,156 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	V/RICAN..

08-07-2022, 11:09 PM	#11
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,739 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446142	Rican threw around some decent concepts although nothing was exactly hair raising, I think the attacks were definitely one dimensional focusing on just his name and nothing more. Would like to see some variety. Inc was a little more variable with concepts but the execution wasn’t there. I think Inc needs to put more thought into making his concepts sting. I gave the same sort of advice earlier to Defiant, you’ve got to actually say something that’s going to do damage sometimes being clever isn’t enough. Go for the throat V/Rican both could have used some rewriting but he was better this week