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Old 08-21-2018, 01:02 PM   #1
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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown

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Old 08-26-2018, 02:22 AM   #8
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Aye Friday snuck up on me cool to drop tomorrow night?
Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion

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Congrats to both for making the big show... I'm gunna be a little harsher a critic then usual since it's a final and will score it out


Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
nahh, played out angle & this particular flip has already been done... 5/10
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
BOOM! dope concept that was executed nicely... dig it 9/10
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
this is cool, hate the multi (its off) but not a big deal.. I think I get what ur going for hear and it hits.. 7/10
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
lol, dece smoking/smoking flip... kidve obscure but I think its cool for an attack line 7/10
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
ehhh, I get the attempt but this is a miss for me.. i can appreciate the personal angle here but the Cred/Credit angle has been worked too many times imo, cant give it props in a Finals.. personal helped this since he's calling out al th gun bar guys lately 6/10
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
dig it... fresh & creative concept for an attack line.. 8/10
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
hmmm, I like this... very diff from a lot of other bingo bars... pretty obscure w/ a 'rip ur heart out at dinner punch' lol but pretty creative and a cool fresh take..multi is bad again tho 7/10
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
this was ehh imo... the premise is funny but 'like the floor is lava' is corny to me and a reach ... 5/10
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
cool... don't recall seeing the 'pull the plug' phrase used like this as an attack line.. wording solid, cool 7/10
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
cool idea, obscure meta again but pretty creative & fresh.. works well for a closer.. 8/10



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Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
lol cool open.. wording was solid with the personal tie in... not a banger, but a good solid bar and I like the swag involved 8/10
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
cool np, execution was solid here and made the bar .. 7/10
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
had to look this nerd shit up but this was cool.. like the wordplay, and works well as a 'send u to heaven' attack line.. wordng dope, 7/10
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
hmmm, this is mehh, the plate tie in wasn't great & while ur wording has been dope so far this one is clunky to me... not feelin the homour factor that u were goin for 5/10
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
hmm, this is okay & to the point it just seems easy and non-effective honestly.. & while I don't think it was intentional, the bars were very similar lol, 6/10
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
haha @ 'wife's a pug' ... anyways, dig this.. cool meta and nameplay & the approach was fresh... 8/10
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
cool & effective bar .. 7/10
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
the Knuckle on the ground / caveman reference seems familiar & prob played.. or maybe it was a gorilla... anyways this was a solid nameplay & the double angle was cool, but slight deduction because ive seen the reference before 7/10
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
ehhh, more needed to be done imo here... seems underdeveloped and incomplete 5/10
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion
nahhh this is a reach & feels corny... similar bars have been done 'ive seen I've exhausted all options, and running ur car in ur garage seemed like the best one' and its obscure/light for an attack line imo... seems like a throw in which is bad for a finals closer... 5/10


Niiice battle guys... on the whole both had a couple really nice hits (realllly liked the beer helmet line) & some pretty consistent/solid punches... some definitive misses as well for me with some half hearted flips & played ideas, but it was really neck & neck and I think when you really boil it down it was Murda's last 2 bars that really edged it to Knuck for me (i.e. the exhaust thing was worded corny & has been done)... I think with even 2 slightly above avg / cool bars Murda would've edged this but I've got Knuck with the better verse... ur multi's bugged me a lot of ties but the creativity was impressive...

Could easily see this being like a 8-5 or 8-6 final vote tally, much diff styles... props to both


Knuck - 69
Murda Sho - 65


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Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one

Decent opener here! Skeletons out the closet concept ok

This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat

Niceee here, can beer hat shit was nice

Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body

This was ok, no impact really behind this one. I like it statement wise tho

Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it

This is nice and I like how you worded this right here

U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him

Ok, I like this one too

Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no

Lol, this here was coo...wordng was kinda ehh here....but coo

Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night

This is ok, the bingo night concept is coo

Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava

Didn't really feel this one here

Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC

Ehh, decent

Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown

Coo closer here

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Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week

This was a ight opener here

Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch

Niceee

This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin

This was nice, I like this concept here! Def a hit for me

Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers

Couldn't really get with this one

I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit

Nahhh here

Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves

This was coo here

I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads

Niceee

Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles

This was dopeee, good shit

He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him

This was could have been fiya, think you just rushed and forgot some wording....light jab here cause of wording

Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion

Didn't like the ender here


Props on this read, shit was a good on both ends, after two reads I got Knuck with the more overall consistent verse and less misses. Sho was going tf off as well, but had spots where he didn't have enough wording or he completely missed.

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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
—-concept so old but the flip was cool
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
—-fire
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
—-nah don’t really make sense to me
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
—-these kinda lines are hard to do effectively . This was tight tho
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
—-eh. Not fresh enough
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
—-I seen most these concepts but ur execution on this was tight
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
—-this wack bro
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
—-don’t mke sense
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
—-huh?
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
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Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
—-nah . Not really
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
—-nah
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
—-I watched every episode of dbz gt and super and I still don’t get this
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
—-aight
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
—-ok
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
—-dope
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
—-ok
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
—-eh
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
—-dope
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion
—-ok

Zip Him Up!!
Murda never warmed up. One line I really liked the rest was abt or below. Knuck had some concepts that seemed well tread but his execution was fresh enough . He also had lotb


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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one

Alright, nothing severe here.

This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat

Cool, i liked this one

Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body

Eh didn't like how you worded this one. Like what you tried for tho

Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it

Nice & harsh


U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him

Didn't like ur set up, the punch was cool tho

Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no

Lol, cool

Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night

Eh

Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava

eh

Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC

Dont like this one my lil american friend.

Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
Cool, better than that plug line

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Look punk...

Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week

Light, nice flow tho

Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch

IDK i don't like how the punch was worded. I like what you were trying for. but it just doesn't click well with me

This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin

Nah this was an old dbz concept

Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers

This was cool, liked this one

I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit

Dope, liked how you flipped that whole situation

Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves

Nice

I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads

Felt like the punch needed cleaner wording. Its a choppy execution. Cool idea tho

Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles

This was ok, ur doing to many knuckle name plays & focusing a bit much on his wife. Coming off as redundant.

He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him

nah
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion

Doesn't really rhyme well & it didn't hit hard at all

Zip Him Up!!

v/ @Knucklehead I felt he had the better content. He had different angles wasn't focused on the attack. You both deserve the praise for the work you put in to get here. I just think Knuckle head was crisper, cleaner & hit harder.
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Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines?

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
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Look punk...

Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him

Zip Him Up!!
I thought knuck went in. Felt his concepts were stronger and hit harder. Sho wasn't bad. Good read. Just though his bars were all light throughout.

V/Knucklehead
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