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Old 07-03-2018, 12:40 AM   #1
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Old 07-03-2018, 09:25 PM   #2
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.
I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops
My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.
ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes
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Old 07-06-2018, 07:50 AM   #5
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Not exactly sure why you didn't just get your HS Diploma but w/e. Hopefully you just didn't "Drop out" because it was the cool thing to do.
Dropped out cuz of depression
Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/
You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/
Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/
Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/

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Old 07-06-2018, 10:14 AM   #6
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.
my only problem is that I have no idea what you’re referring to with the eggs...sounds like a good line, maybe I just don’t get it but yeah as of now I’m not feelin it
I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops
its “top of the morning” I get what you were going for tho so it’s decent
My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.
alright
ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes
pretty cool

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Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/
lol creative and nice
You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/
ehh nah this is blah
Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the street fighters bonus stage/
i type lol at the start of each line I like of yours cause I’m just laughing like damn how does he think of this. Cool line yo
Ya dome get spray. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/
fuckin dope


Jabari is officially a fuckin problem. Might even be a problem for lil ol me lol. Lenox you had 1 Miss and 1 Decent with a pair of ok line, nothing amazing this time around for me tbh. Jabari had 1 Miss as well but his hits were a lot stronger than Lenox’s. Stuck in ya head like a catchy hook is nice af and I need to go find an account to sig it in now smh.

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Old 07-06-2018, 03:04 PM   #7
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.
lol, this was coo...egg(brains) kill him and his boo, I getcha
I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops
hahaha.... Ya this could've been dope but miss for me
My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.
eh..to ok
ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes
kind of cool

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Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/
fire...
You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/
I thought this was dope...
Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/
creative af, cool concept, the punch hit, nice
Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/
simple, effective... reminds me of the stick by ya side line, dope

Cool battle. I enjoy these 4 bar battles sometimes. Lenox did his thing, Jabari went in tho...

v/ JB
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Old 07-06-2018, 07:45 PM   #8
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.
understand what you where trying to do, st8
I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops
nah, using the wrong phase can kill a scheme
My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.
cool
ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes
lackluster





Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/
yep, this a hit
You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/
lol, st8
Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/
line of the battle, fresh shit here
Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/
simple and effective


v - JB fairly easy. Prop for showing up Lenny.
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the boo scramble egg lines aite to..
dope line..
My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist
but most part not that all impressive..

jb:
i think only one couplet fell off 8/10 is pretty decent.. opener was prolly my fav "talk through the wire"

vote = Jabari Black
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Old 07-07-2018, 12:42 PM   #10
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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.

Lol this ight for a opener

I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops

Light jab, but decent

My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.

Wording off a little, but still a dope concept

ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes

Nahhh!

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Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/

Nasssty Opener!

You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/


Lmao funny!

Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/

Fiya!!

Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/

Light jab here, still nice



Props to both here, my votes goes to JB with the overall more better & aggressive verse.

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ya boo gettin face shots. Bro, my gat leave heads mangled.
Pull to ur crib at the crack of dawn, & leave both ya fkin eggs scrambled.

Rhyme wise it's very iffy, the concept is alright though

I get top in the morning.. ya girl left you in 1 week. Plus her heads bomb
only time u get top in the morning to ya, is when u walk into southern sex shops

This is pretty weak imo, the rhyme is better than the last bar but it's still slanted af. The concept itself, I don't understand.

My AK’ll spray and falay ya carcass.
the bullets hold meet and greets. Each one shoots straight lines like waitin for ya favorite artist.

Light but alright.

ur presence is cringy. Pro negus but none of them like you.
a black panther?? That must explain why u always be gettin owned by white dudes

Nah.
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Metal Chord around ya neck. If you yell for help, I’ll pull it tighter/
I’m thinkin Kanye West...let’s see if THIS ‘dropout’ can talk Through the Wire/

Alright, pretty creative.

You falling deep in that depression nigga - after this, I hope you sink farther/
I bet you think about ending it sometimes, huh? Well bitch think harder/

Lmao nice. Personal and funny

Shot’ll be banging off ya whip when the chrome is raised/
The .40 spray....it’ll be ‘Kicking at the car’ like the Street Fighters bonus stage/

Nice.

Ya dome get sprayed. You better book when I let the desi cook/
Or a big blade. This shit’ll get stuck in ya head like a catchy hook/

Not nearly as original compared to other lines, but it's ok.
V/Jabari
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V/ JB
Not gonna do a bar for bar or something.
Feel this ones pretty clear
Len had some misses for me,
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Heads mangled. Eggs scrambled = rhyming is iffy?

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Not gonna do a bar for bar or something.
Feel this ones pretty clear
Len had some misses for me,
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