CONT: ill nik-A 7-4 vs Letterman 7-4 - LETTERMAN WINS

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[ill nik-A]

Welcome!
10-12

[Letterman]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

@Letterman u showing?

Yeah

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ill nik-A’s Verse



I don’t need a gun cuz my fists are quicker than u draw, so dude I don’t care
ya punches are no match for mine & i won’t miss the steel while u shootin at air
I got bullets to spare. If I circle ya hood it’s cuz I’m with some, sparking blocks
while letterman’s crew a buncha rich kids in school colors doin donuts in the parking lot
Last week my lines were long & with em Id still give the opposition trouble
But I shortened them up cuz I usually play down to the competitions level
so with that logic; fuck a gun! the machete is how I’m killin this bitch
Drop different pieces of ya body from Miami to Cuba... that’s a dual citizenship
There’s never been a champ match that u appeared in that I could remember
funny, that’s exactly what all ur opponents did for u to be a contender

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Letterman’s Verse



Bring protection cuz my goons rollin up to whip ya ass
So Nik better grab a pump or it’s 5 on 1 like when this bum is getting gas
Ur brain’s fulla dope concepts. Y u throwin all this fake shit at us
Headshot - it’ll put what’s on your mind on the wall like a Facebook status
Aint gotta bring guns. I’ll stick him up then Nik’ll see
Two blades at different angles.. u’ll get both points back & forth like they disagree
Try running up on my block.. it’s a problem & these cans a solution
& this square’ll get lit up when he steps like playing dance dance revolution
This white guy says nigga? I’ll jab-jab-uppercut & punch ur face in
So don’t think ur safe, cracker.. because you’ll get opened up with a combination

[Concrete]

nik; 1, ok opener, a little vague punch. 2, funny insult tho statements-ish.
3, Concept was good but could have been used more creative. 4, pretty cool. 5, decent closer.

Letter; 1, I see it but not a huge fan. 2, kinda old idea but fresh flip. 3, nice. 4, why not. 5, aight personal.

Cool battle, both came with some aggressive shit. Tho Letterman edges it first and foremost for better wording of his attacks, there was little ambiguity in his verse. Nik probably had the best line with that dual thing, however the rest didnt work as well, and not a fan of long lines either.
So yeah, vote Letterman.

[Schadenfreude]

ill nik-A’s Verse

I don’t need a gun cuz my fists are quicker than u draw, so dude I don’t care
ya punches are no match for mine & i won’t miss the steel while u shootin at air
Subpar
I got bullets to spare. If I circle ya hood it’s cuz I’m with some, sparking blocks
while letterman’s crew a buncha rich kids in school colors doin donuts in the parking lot
Average
Last week my lines were long & with em Id still give the opposition trouble
But I shortened them up cuz I usually play down to the competitions level
It's been done
so with that logic; fuck a gun! the machete is how I’m killin this bitch
Drop different pieces of ya body from Miami to Cuba... that’s a dual citizenship
Nice
There’s never been a champ match that u appeared in that I could remember
funny, that’s exactly what all ur opponents did for u to be a contender
Good closer, effective

versus

Letterman’s Verse

Bring protection cuz my goons rollin up to whip ya ass
So Nik better grab a pump or it’s 5 on 1 like when this bum is getting gas
Funny
Ur brain’s fulla dope concepts. Y u throwin all this fake shit at us
Headshot - it’ll put what’s on your mind on the wall like a Facebook status
Average
Aint gotta bring guns. I’ll stick him up then Nik’ll see
Two blades at different angles.. u’ll get both points back & forth like they disagree
Nice
Try running up on my block.. it’s a problem & these cans a solution
& this square’ll get lit up when he steps like playing dance dance revolution
Seen 'light up square' before
This white guy says nigga? I’ll jab-jab-uppercut & punch ur face in
So don’t think ur safe, cracker.. because you’ll get opened up with a combination
It's been hella 'safe/combination' concepts before

Nik's in a weird place or sum'n lol, that verse was uninspired as fuck, but he had to slick bars to finish up the verse. As for Lett, I've always enjoyed his clean wording, the persistent problem is his concepts tend to be unoriginal. Comparing the two, I could give this W to either, but the slightest of edges goes to the old man, VOTE ILL NIKA.

[Jabari Black]

Ill came out kinda slow but the rest hit. Didn’t care for the opener. Donut line was funny to me - I liked it, and playing to comp was cool. The dual citizenship line was dope. Simple but effective. Closer was strong.

Good verse and I thought it would take a really good verse from letterman to top it.

For letterman:

Opener was dope. Facebook status was nice. I thought the back and forth line was extremely well put together. Didn’t waste a word or phrase in either the set up or punch. LOTB to me. Dance dance revolution line was good. Closer wasn’t bad if just wasn’t as good as your other lines.

Overal dope battle. Slightly edged it to Letterman. The both landed almost every line, just letterman’s punches had a bit more sting to them and the back and forth line was special.

Vote/ Letterman

Good luck next week to whoever wins.

[BodySnatcher]

I got Letterman on this battle. Opener and closer were nice.

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I don’t need a gun cuz my fists are quicker than u draw, so dude I don’t care
ya punches are no match for mine & i won’t miss the steel while u shootin at air
I got bullets to spare. If I circle ya hood it’s cuz I’m with some, sparking blocks
while letterman’s crew a buncha rich kids in school colors doin donuts in the parking lot
There’s never been a champ match that u appeared in that I could remember
funny, that’s exactly what all ur opponents did for u to be a contender

vs

Ur brain’s fulla dope concepts. Y u throwin all this fake shit at us
Headshot - it’ll put what’s on your mind on the wall like a Facebook status
Aint gotta bring guns. I’ll stick him up then Nik’ll see
Two blades at different angles.. u’ll get both points back & forth like they disagree


Decent battle here. Idk, nik didn’t have the best lines but he had the fresher ideas. A lot of letterman’s concepts were dated imo, dance rev, combination, pump/gas station. Yeah I’m a have to go nik here

Vote / ill nik-A

[Saint]

Pretty close match

But i've got nik here edgin on consistency.
dual & closer were decent hits, donuts was aight.

Letter had either point & fb lines.
rest were old concepts.....but those 2 were cool.

V -- NIKA. less misses

[Suthaveli]

Nika had the steal bar which was dope. Donuts gotta chuckle outta me

Letterman verse was kinda dope. Shit, first r bars hit imo. I like 5 on 1, fb, points across & dance dance.

Lol, i wasn't expectin this peepin battle.

Mvgt @Letterman

[DynamiCz]

I got bullets to spare. If I circle ya hood it’s cuz I’m with some, sparking blocks
while letterman’s crew a buncha rich kids in school colors doin donuts in the parking lot
Last week my lines were long & with em Id still give the opposition trouble
But I shortened them up cuz I usually play down to the competitions level
so with that logic; fuck a gun! the machete is how I’m killin this bitch
Drop different pieces of ya body from Miami to Cuba... that’s a dual citizenship

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Ur brain’s fulla dope concepts. Y u throwin all this fake shit at us
Headshot - it’ll put what’s on your mind on the wall like a Facebook status
Aint gotta bring guns. I’ll stick him up then Nik’ll see
Two blades at different angles.. u’ll get both points back & forth like they disagree
Try running up on my block.. it’s a problem & these cans a solution
& this square’ll get lit up when he steps like playing dance dance revolution

Damn, this was actually a dope battle...I think that disagree line & facebook status line edged it for Letter. Nik that dual citizenship line was cray! Close af, but I'm going with Letter here.

V-Letter

[Barcotic]

I don’t need a gun cuz my fists are quicker than u draw, so dude I don’t care
ya punches are no match for mine & i won’t miss the steel while u shootin at air
miss
I got bullets to spare. If I circle ya hood it’s cuz I’m with some, sparking blocks
while letterman’s crew a buncha rich kids in school colors doin donuts in the parking lot
bland, another miss
Last week my lines were long & with em Id still give the opposition trouble
But I shortened them up cuz I usually play down to the competitions level
light
so with that logic; fuck a gun! the machete is how I’m killin this bitch
Drop different pieces of ya body from Miami to Cuba... that’s a dual citizenship
decent but semi forced into a concept IMO
There’s never been a champ match that u appeared in that I could remember
funny, that’s exactly what all ur opponents did for u to be a contender
ehhh, lazy verse

vs

Bring protection cuz my goons rollin up to whip ya ass
So Nik better grab a pump or it’s 5 on 1 like when this bum is getting gas
gd concept, wording hurt it a little tho
Ur brain’s fulla dope concepts. Y u throwin all this fake shit at us
Headshot - it’ll put what’s on your mind on the wall like a Facebook status
put what's on ur mind on the wall? forced concept
Aint gotta bring guns. I’ll stick him up then Nik’ll see
Two blades at different angles.. u’ll get both points back & forth like they disagree
i like this
Try running up on my block.. it’s a problem & these cans a solution
& this square’ll get lit up when he steps like playing dance dance revolution
played
This white guy says nigga? I’ll jab-jab-uppercut & punch ur face in
So don’t think ur safe, cracker.. because you’ll get opened up with a combination
cracker made this concept work & not be played. decent jab. it was also ur only bar without the word "like" in it lol very uninspiring verse but u still won somehow

2 jabs vs 1 gd punch n 2 jabs
v/letterman