03-19-2018, 08:23 AM | #1 |
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Destroyer 6-2 vs Habitat 8-6 - DESTROYER WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Destroyer @Habitat |
03-19-2018, 08:54 AM | #2 |
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03-19-2018, 11:06 AM | #3 |
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03-20-2018, 10:40 AM | #4 |
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?" our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position 10
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03-21-2018, 11:39 AM | #5 |
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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop. But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it |
03-21-2018, 12:22 PM | #6 |
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"stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?"" "our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit" "this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice" Destroyer: "don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica" "faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread" Overall was a good battle here felt that Des messed up with wording here and there. I understood the concepts, maybe the execution and wording was off, just made it not all flow together that nice imo. Habitat on the other hand felt that his verse flowed together better. And maybe to other people its played but that Jump the Gun line I liked a lot, if it wasn't for that I think this would be pretty even. Think Habitat got this one, was pretty close. Props to both. Decent read for sure |
03-22-2018, 07:01 AM | #7 |
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One of the things that is sticking out to me a lot is wordplay and how its executed.
2 examples: because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around Deserter/des hurt her. Phonetically this works, but reading it in the bar it should work 2 ways. As it is written it's just a gibberish sentence. Low level wordplay. but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse I can read this sentance using hab n aero, or habenero and it's a proper sentence in both instances. Higher level wordplay, much trickier to pull off. Not the only reason for my vote, but an important factor. Vote: destroyer |
03-22-2018, 11:48 AM | #8 |
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around Nice Opener our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit Lol this is coo this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice Nice ------- u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse Ah, this was nice don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica Lmao faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread Nice Damn this was a coo read on both ends, this is actually close as hell in my eyes, I honestly have to go with Hab on this one. I think the moments notice line got it for him. V-Hab
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03-23-2018, 03:03 PM | #9 |
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around I haven't seen the nameplay before so this was cool to me stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?" nah, a miss for me our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit hmm, I guess it's comical and works if the guy has long hair ... cool this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice cool, solid attack line u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position stand/fetal been played... not enough of a creative twist or flip here for me vs. u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse lol dope wp.. this was a strong open don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica cool current event punch faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread lol, like this u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop. But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk mehh, okay I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it okay close Cool battle props to both. Ive got destroyer taking this one, both had cool openers but I liked Des's more and he had the next 2 bets bars of the battle... good showing Vote - Destroyer |
03-25-2018, 10:49 AM | #10 |
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around np came off a bit force to me. had great potential tho stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?" okish our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit didn't care for this this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice meh u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position this was okish as well Imo, Hab has concepts & came across creative. I guess i just didn't rly care for how his lines were use? idk, i can't quite put my finger on it, cuz i def see the concepts there. like the Des hurt her line could've been dope, it just sounds for when i say it. dunno where ur from but it doesn't sound like that to me, but the crazy thing is i can see where it was going. although i had to say it to myself a few times before i figured it out. vs u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse I pronounce his name w. long 'a' but pronounce Habanero w.a short 'a'. but heard country people say it w. a long 'a' so this actually wrks for me. bit of a different situation from Hab's first bar don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica this was cool faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread facts. but just ok u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop. But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk this made me chuckle I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it ok swag. didn't care for the line tho des had a cool verse imo. maybe its just me & i typically try to steer clear of lopsided battles from my standpoint because u don't want the losing side of the spectrum to feel u're pickin w.them. but i will say @Habitat it is about preference, & im just one opinion. maybe im not seeing the full pic of ya potential. I hope to read more from u. infact after this i might go do some homework on ya earlier battles. but as for now mvgt-@destroyer . felt he had the comfy better verse. Last edited by Suthaveli; 03-25-2018 at 04:40 PM. |
03-25-2018, 02:26 PM | #11 |
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Des edged, it was extremely close tho, Hab was definitely more creative, just not as harsh, so that took away from the impact of his punches. Des was solid in every bar except 'drawing board' I hated that lol. Anyway tho good battle gentlemen.
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03-25-2018, 03:58 PM | #12 |
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around okay start stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?" its not bad but its not good our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit clean but meh to okay this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice nice u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position okay closer vs u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse its okay but i used a habenero play a few weeks back so hhmm don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica this was decent faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend... so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread dont ged it u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop. But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk this was alright I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it meh des prob had the best two bars with chalkboard and Cambridge closely followed by jump the gun by fresh. After that prob fresh's opener, des's opener and fresh's closer. After that i def preferred fresh's worst two to des's. In the end i prob got fresh just edging to fresh this time on consistency. Good battle though. |
03-25-2018, 03:59 PM | #13 |
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this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice Vs u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse Idk, I expected more from this battle. Was a bit underwhelming. I feel like Des had the better punch that landed with habanero but even that had lazy wording on it. I got Des winning v/Destro |
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