02-26-2018, 04:32 PM | #1 |
Bags will be avenged
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,622
Battle Record: 85-58
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast
Rep Power: 84181418 |
Let me see if I have this straight...
The style that people like now is just bar after bar of obscure wordplay that must be googled to understand and sort of works only one way if mispronounced?
Just trying to give the people what they want |
02-26-2018, 04:39 PM | #2 |
death to amen
Join Date: Jan 2018
Posts: 1,279
Battle Record: 1-2
Rep Power: 7423715 |
yea this wordplay shit is takin over
I refuse to conform.. nap aint build us like that des |
02-26-2018, 04:39 PM | #3 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 344
Battle Record: 15-11
Rep Power: 374701 |
It’s hard to gauge tbh. It’s like it varies from week to week what people like.
|
02-26-2018, 04:41 PM | #4 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 344
Battle Record: 15-11
Rep Power: 374701 |
|
02-26-2018, 04:41 PM | #5 |
As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
Posts: 8,470
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6
Rep Power: 0 |
Every bar is corny to me but w/e.
|
02-26-2018, 04:43 PM | #6 | ||
yeet
Join Date: Mar 1993
Posts: 3,956
Battle Record: 20-34
Champed - 1-2 Punch League
Rep Power: 17624432 |
Quote:
Nick your style is still fresh for us so you will continue to win by sticking to your guns. Des, write a wordplay verse for NBL next week and we'll see how it goes
__________________
Quote:
like a woolah what it do to one’s medulla oblongata- revenge of Montezuma on a blotter
Last edited by bleak; 02-26-2018 at 04:51 PM. |
||
02-26-2018, 04:51 PM | #7 |
death to amen
Join Date: Jan 2018
Posts: 1,279
Battle Record: 1-2
Rep Power: 7423715 |
ppl got this set image of good punches gotta be either a wordplay or metaphor/simile/catch phrase flip.. n they rlly just limitin their boundaries. a great 12 line verse might have 3 punches tops of them 2 combined.
if they studied more of the actually great battlers muhfuckas might improve more. thats why there aint no more butlers, aliens, cals, hushs, kungfugrips.. everybodys puttin a box on what a verse shuld consist of when this shit was always meant to think outside that box |
02-26-2018, 04:53 PM | #8 |
Bags will be avenged
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,622
Battle Record: 85-58
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast
Rep Power: 84181418 |
I agree
Originality is hated on rather than given props |
02-26-2018, 04:55 PM | #9 |
Bags will be avenged
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,622
Battle Record: 85-58
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast
Rep Power: 84181418 |
Although sometimes it goes over well
For example, I wrote a verse recently with the punchline “Des’ll aim at this clown’s mouth & won’t stop until I win the giant stuffed bear.” That shit is basically nonsense but it went over really well |
02-26-2018, 05:06 PM | #10 |
death to amen
Join Date: Jan 2018
Posts: 1,279
Battle Record: 1-2
Rep Power: 7423715 |
yea good example
I just dropped this in the cypher earlier. aloud it hits hard wordplay after wordplay, shit I guess I better be blunt ur a faggot nigga.. now make them words sound like watever u want personals is where the moneys at. always. If u aint got none then u roast their bitch lol |
02-26-2018, 05:21 PM | #11 |
As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
Posts: 8,470
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6
Rep Power: 0 |
Personals are definitely the way to go unless its the same shit everyone using.
Dissing a bitch isn't cool nor fresh anymore. How many times can you say other dudes hoe is a hoe, sucks dick and gets buttcaked. I mean, those punches are all stupid too me anymore and get no credit from me. I'd rather see creative concepts tied in with recent personals or just creativity flat out. Unfukwitable is good with that. He's always creative as fuck as where Infiltration is over creative and complicated. Wordplay is cool if there 1 or 2 at most in the verse. Every line tho, nah... |
02-26-2018, 05:34 PM | #12 | |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 863
Battle Record: 23-19
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night 2
- Write Week V
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- Winter Topical II
- 1-2 Punch league
Rep Power: 29195060 |
Quote:
__________________
Topical C.R.E.A.M. |
|
02-26-2018, 05:35 PM | #13 |
Super Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,407
Battle Record: 70-25
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Battle Arena
- BA Picture
- Picture Battle Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (3x)
- Netcees Writers League (2x)
- Summer Classic VI
- Fall Brawl III
- Netcees Battle League Season X
- Lyric Olympics
Rep Power: 77164516 |
Yes! I’m done with this place. Lol
__________________
Grumpy old man. |
02-26-2018, 05:36 PM | #14 |
Super Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,407
Battle Record: 70-25
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Battle Arena
- BA Picture
- Picture Battle Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (3x)
- Netcees Writers League (2x)
- Summer Classic VI
- Fall Brawl III
- Netcees Battle League Season X
- Lyric Olympics
Rep Power: 77164516 |
I literally read a vote that said. I googled the word. Punch is really good. Like wtf?!
__________________
Grumpy old man. |
02-26-2018, 05:39 PM | #15 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 910
Battle Record: 4-4
Rep Power: 7502711 |
Somebody link me to an original destroyer line i wanna see something
|
02-26-2018, 05:43 PM | #16 | |
death to amen
Join Date: Jan 2018
Posts: 1,279
Battle Record: 1-2
Rep Power: 7423715 |
Quote:
i respected that verse u dropped this week. best example I can think of for wat were tlkin bout |
|
02-26-2018, 05:47 PM | #17 |
As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
Posts: 8,470
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6
Rep Power: 0 |
|
02-26-2018, 05:58 PM | #18 |
Not Joog
Join Date: Nov 2016
Posts: 769
Battle Record: 9-5
Rep Power: 5907769 |
Yeh all my wordplay worked both ways on the site I learnt at. The only thing people liked there was on site personals.Then went rb and that was when that didn't seem to matter anymore. I think I signed up in 2015 and by 2016 the wordplay that everyone hates here was the main thing. I got pretty good at it but then you come here and people hate that shit. You just have to adapt from place to place.
As much as I hate to agree with amen, personals with a flip/name play/tie in are your safest bet and prob my favourite style. |
02-26-2018, 05:59 PM | #19 |
death to amen
Join Date: Jan 2018
Posts: 1,279
Battle Record: 1-2
Rep Power: 7423715 |
thats those google me wordplays
im not gonna lie 80% of em I dont get n another 10% I figure out thru sumone elses votes |
02-26-2018, 06:29 PM | #20 |
Not Joog
Join Date: Nov 2016
Posts: 769
Battle Record: 9-5
Rep Power: 5907769 |
i thhink with some of those wordplays and gun bars, its a case of there so bad they are good sometimes. I mean most gun bars are tongue in cheek, n they are the best ones.
|
|
|