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08-23-2019, 12:45 PM | #1 |
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Selenite
You gotta raays. No one you know ever fell in light
All in eyes. Soul: beautiful.. Selenite Hearts a costume-maze, starting to get the hang? Shit is dangerous, kissy-faces drip a witch-y fragrance The pen, the pad, the poem. Invigorating. They wanna get him naked and Indiana Jones-switch the sacred Dreams are where visions birthed. Live and learn, breathe and grow from the shit that burns Phenix Soul-blood is shed when love letters turn to kleenex Everyone gettin' rattled in the Serpent's Kingdom Bless the Holy And that's fine to Ben, manifest a Soul-Sync; time to cleanse Peer into the poison of your spiritual void Giving everyone the run around when in the mirror is your voyage This that As You Wish free-4-all- Abracadabra Would ya be a doll and pass the disaster The purest lulls, I cast them in fractals Will never break apart the ancient spark Nor take the charge from this ever-blazing star Diamond melter. My vibe's my shelter I Am Spelling under a light-umbrella designed by Tesla on psychedelics Trrracing as the high develops Flip perspective, alter the magick so I can fall harder laughing Eating tears like salt water taffy Can only knock em down so many times before the dominos break You're gonna wanna escape when the 'love' turns Guantanamo Bay Gaze is ammo. One wave. Hand flow The ominous air's vast Antonio Banderas, Desparado, known to make a mess of a taco. Stretch out the tonsils. My pet when my wand glows
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08-25-2019, 09:57 PM | #2 |
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Thanks for the post. Liked the rattled in serpents kingdom line. Imagery and emotion were coming through a little. Not bad
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08-26-2019, 10:10 AM | #3 |
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Your emotion is second to none...Remind me of someone on RF back in the day, Umm...He was in the Army...Got it, Impolite? He was dope...As are you.
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08-26-2019, 10:41 AM | #4 |
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Impolite WAS dope
This was excellent as usual but there was something extra to this Once I get a spare moment I’ll hopefully be back for a careful read
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08-27-2019, 01:07 PM | #5 |
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I don't fully get all of this but I can tell it was nice
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