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07-07-2014, 05:20 PM
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(ง'̀-'́)ง
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Swerve vs. King Ra. {Swerve wins 11-0}
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07-07-2014, 06:26 PM
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SDub
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Whattup girl.
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07-07-2014, 10:50 PM
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The Throne, The Crown
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Here.
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Vetwork, bitches.
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07-12-2014, 09:08 PM
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SDub
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You'll leave beaten and battered, burn your body and leave your place charred,
Only way you'll be looking like diamonds, king is after I lay you flatter than a face card.
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No Cap Gang.
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07-13-2014, 03:00 AM
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The Throne, The Crown
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You're no longer ill. Wrote ya off. One punch'll leave you with a broken jaw,
every line you drop is a display of weakness when I expose your flaws.
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Vetwork, bitches.
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07-13-2014, 03:26 AM
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This wasnt even close lol
Ra came mad simplee and I liked swerves card concept . V/ swerve
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07-13-2014, 04:30 AM
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DOHpe since 02'
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King ra`s execution was good...just wasn't much behind the punch
Swerves bar was pretty cool..great wording on a avg concept V swerve
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07-13-2014, 12:39 PM
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can I help u?
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I feel King Ra probably had to key something real quick & mayb didn't have time go as hard as he could've, so Swerve pulled this out since he went harder & included a metaphor that landed.
V/Swerve
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07-13-2014, 04:32 PM
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Tsk Tsk
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Jah you didn't really have a dis Imo bro. Was more gloating and saying he's old. Swerve had a decent concept and nice word play with the laying flat. But the flow was a bit muddled do to wording of closing sentence. Doesn't matter though
V swerve
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07-13-2014, 04:46 PM
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Bags will be avenged
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swerve got this easy with having a concept
Ra kind of just came statementish
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07-13-2014, 07:12 PM
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Guess This One Obvious .. v/Swerve
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07-13-2014, 08:41 PM
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Swerves concept was cool, kinda poorly worded at the end tho. King was a little basic with display/expose. kinda seemed like a setup to something more.
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07-13-2014, 08:46 PM
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Swerve v
Good wp. Ra. No wp. |
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07-14-2014, 11:08 AM
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Tread Lightly.
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I feel the same way about card bars as I so about chess bars. Unless it's sick it won't be better than average. You had a few diff wp elements in there but none of them were fresh and combining them didn't improve it much.
Ra you had a cool swaggyness, esp in the opening line, but punch and/or wp content was lacking sorely. V/ Swerve
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07-15-2014, 04:07 PM
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ghost in the matrix
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swerve got this with a creative nameflip
Ra lacked sting and was more of a statement than punch
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07-15-2014, 08:12 PM
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Kingra like your shit flowed very well, and then wording kinda made me think a dope ass punch was coming but there wasn't one. Word all u gotta do is have a punch in your next match, I bet you'll win
Vote swerve his shit was kinda ill |
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07-16-2014, 04:25 PM
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(ง'̀-'́)ง
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11-0 Swerve wins
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