04-21-2019, 01:34 PM | #1 |
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Dominate (0-0) vs. josh s (0-0) - DOMINATE WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE! COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091 @Dominate @josh s Last edited by Zaddy; 04-21-2019 at 08:34 PM. |
04-21-2019, 08:46 PM | #2 |
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Check, how many we going dom
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04-21-2019, 10:06 PM | #3 |
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Just 10 man. I only signed in to help the league get the numbers it needed, got zero time this week.
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04-23-2019, 12:48 AM | #4 |
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
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04-23-2019, 06:26 AM | #5 |
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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star Last edited by josh s; 04-23-2019 at 07:43 AM. |
04-23-2019, 02:46 PM | #6 |
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners lol ok He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out butch or ease out? I want to understand but don't have the time Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc good grief @Barcotic I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did flames Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free liked the delivery here. good wp Josh S Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me lol I see what you did but this was silly dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash had to look up strewth, australian word I dig it.. wp is ok aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time hardy wp is just lazy kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody dont get the reference but I get the gist dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star lol aiiiight man MVGT Dom. Dial back and pop you'll arise did it it for me __________________
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04-23-2019, 03:12 PM | #7 |
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners cool misdirection He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out nah Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc fiiiire, and DAMN at that double diss I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did not feelin Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free pronounciation of Glasgow varies, only anglo outsiders say glass-go from my understanding, but I'll roll w/it here vs Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me not sure where the witty concept is here, maybe I'm missing something dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash eh... looked up strewth and still, nah aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time this is decent kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody meh dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star this could have been so much better.. OK wp but doesn't hit hard v/ Dominate but aside from the dial back that faggot shit, not much to really be impressed with. Just a weak battle all around tbh. That one bar was HEAT tho |
04-23-2019, 03:26 PM | #8 |
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Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc good lord doms whole verse was good but that was something else hardy jesus no v.dom |
04-23-2019, 03:45 PM | #9 |
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners lol funny, good fresh open He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out butch or he's out...works perfect in slang..set-up well, tbh i think this is jokes Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc ether I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did yup...fresh, pretty smooth...nice Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free pretty cool...not tied in as well as your usual construction of bars but the Scot free angle you took here has good swag to it vs Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me okay okay, this was cool havent seen grand scheme done like this dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash its strewth, ehh probably works if i say it in Zelph's lisp voice...cool concept aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time cool effective wordplay...like this kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody lol, dece site play dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star sure he can in slang? sorry im not familiar with the word so i dunno if ive got it right...if so pretty fresh wp that is smooth in slang Fun read i thought this was good short battle... Josh you were pretty fresh and had some enjoyable stuff, but i prefered Dom's concepts and wordplay on the whole... dial back was just a killer, first two bars funny and fresh....casper/pop u'll arise yup ... awesome concepts Props to both.... Vote Dominate |
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04-25-2019, 09:58 AM | #11 |
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Dope verse. You had your own style added to this. Very nice pen'. Good work. Josh S - I have to give you props. That shuriken line was bar of the battle. Very good work. Overall - Dope battle, but Josh S edged this... V/ Josh S |
04-26-2019, 04:59 PM | #12 |
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners ok lol He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out ok wordplay, decent bar overall though Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc lol ok, more of a shot at barc but still made me smirk I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did not feelin this Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free ok closer Vs Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me theres not really a punch in this bar dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash what? Lol I’m trying to give you the benefit of the doubt and be liberal but idk what this is aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time nah kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody fire af lol loved the wording/execution dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star nah man Dominate didn’t have a wowing verse by any means, it was really just a bunch of wordplays that technically “worked” but none of the bars had a haymaker feel to them. He definitely came consistent though and only had 1 clear miss. Josh had LOTB with the Joe Metts bar but the rest of the verse I really wasn’t diggin. If josh had more sht along the lines of that Joe Metts bar he woulda won, but dom gets it for consistency. Vote Dominate |
04-26-2019, 05:14 PM | #13 |
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Nothing crazy from Dom, but he didn’t need to do much. I didn’t get the Barc reference but popularise was dope and lotb for me. Everything else was good. Butchery was clever. Glasgow was good. Dom’s tie ins after the wp are always dope.
Josh s. had a better verse than I thought after I read through it thoroughly. Grand was too simple. I googled strewth and still didn’t get the trash connection. Waste lands/Hardy was ok. Didn’t get the Joe Metts line. Shuriken wp was a force to me. Josh’s verse had some ok spots but just wasn’t polished or creative enough to hang with Dom. Vote-Dom |
04-26-2019, 07:23 PM | #14 |
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Vote Dom
I feel like dom was more original, his lines were more clever....Josh was either over my head or just wack because I didn't understand a lot of it...I'm sorry if I am just to dumb to understand..but hey guess it's my vote so it's on you Vote dom |
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