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Old 04-21-2019, 01:42 PM   #1
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Old 04-22-2019, 06:29 AM   #2
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Old 04-22-2019, 10:57 AM   #3
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Hi,.


No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
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Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
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Old 04-23-2019, 07:57 PM   #5
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The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
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Old 04-23-2019, 08:23 PM   #6
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Liked the body double and hot yoga lines from orc good shit....

But dyn was nasty....that Westbrook line was whoa...the closer was sick

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Old 04-24-2019, 01:47 AM   #7
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Orc -

No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing

This was cool.

Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double

Cool.


Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery

This was cool.

Been working from home. Stock are easy. Guap on repeat
Your idea of Remote Access is asking your Moms if you can watch the TV

Lmao. Nice.


My sex life gets hype. The way I moves inspiring
If YOUR girl leaves u Steamy Notes.. it's “do NOT forget to do the Ironing”

This was nice.

Salute kid. Carbine gota smooth grip & shoot quick when days darken
Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden

This was cool.

We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga

rofl, nice.

Dynamic -

The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn

Lmao, nice.


Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways

Lol. Nice.

I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt

Lol. Nice.


The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor

Lol. Nice.


U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist

;p cool.


Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey

Nice one.

Overall -

Dope battle, guys.

I'm giving this to Dynamic. He had the slightly better verse here.

V/ Dynamic.
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Old 04-25-2019, 04:51 PM   #8
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Orc the torque

No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
cool & pretty fresh...a solid meta
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
LoL being obsessed with the show prob makes me like this more...good personal hit and current event punch..dig it
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
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this is pretty cool for a swag bar but it's light on impact...crutches for a stick ref, okayyy ya i guess...i think you couldve worded this diff to hit more as it came off more s&f as constructed
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lol, set-up made this pretty easy remote flip very enjoyable imo...funny bar
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lmao, jokes...fresh too this one was fuego
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Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden
nice. i actually didnt like the wording at first but on reread i caught it and it's perfect...nice sports bar here
We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
hahaha... love it


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The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
Nice family member gun bar.. fresh and relevant, solid
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
cool for a nintendo/barrel flip..
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
haha the westbrook/baby rock meta is nice...the set-up tho ugh, even the one syllable rhyme is way off taunt/blunt and the swisher/im gunna get blunt concept shouldve been scrapped as its really played
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
FIRE. bird double scope/trip advisor meta is flames... your lazy multi's are buging me tho
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I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
fifa? tie ins are well on point/natural throughout here but not overdone...corner shot angle is very fresh to me...dig it
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
sorry if i'm missing a tie in here or something...but i dunno i'm not seeing anything more than a basic shot/drink irish whiskey/jameson concept here... cred & orc teamed right so okay i like going the approach, i dunno tho this one just seems a bit too basic



Great read here...TBH i can see why this is prob being avoided for now because its not only a pretty big contrast of styles but its also very tough to call imo... both were pretty consistent, shit i think i have to give the slight edge to Orc... to me he has the worse "miss" and my two fav bars of the battle are the steamy notes vs tripadvisor and orcs was simply delivered much better.. i like Orcs Harden line a bit better then Dyna's Westbrook bar too prob... props to both dope showings by both, can see this going either way due to preference

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Old 04-25-2019, 05:00 PM   #9
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No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery
We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga

Lol, lemme find out everyone gonna start w.that setup on the basic bish line now. Lol.
I like the swag in orc verse a lot. The mask on & body double hit nice.

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The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor

That laquita inn was fuckin sick. That westbrook taunt was simple but nice as well.

Imo, Dynamicz quotes were def stronger, but I didn't care for his misses. Especially the last 2 bars. Orc none quotes weren't the greatest either, but better then dy in this case. If dy took more time w.the last bar he added, he likely wldve edge this imo. I hv or on the w here tho. Great read @DynamiCz @ORC

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Old 04-26-2019, 05:41 AM   #10
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Old 04-26-2019, 10:04 PM   #11
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No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
alright, swaggy
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
loved the wording/execution here
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery
this was cool, it’s refreshing to see a swag n flow verse finally
Been working from home. Stock are easy. Guap on repeat
Your idea of Remote Access is asking your Moms if you can watch the TV
lol nah bit corny
My sex life gets hype. The way I moves inspiring
If YOUR girl leaves u Steamy Notes.. it's “do NOT forget to do the Ironing”
nahhh
Salute kid. Carbine gota smooth grip & shoot quick when days darken
Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden
decent, loved the wording but it’s a played concept
We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
solid closer


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The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
alright solid opener
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
hmm ok
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
fire
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
this shit is crazy af. Wow.
U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
nah
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
nah
Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
The product i pack Theracal.. bullets hit - U'll be enhancing the wrong supplements
decent closer


This battle was mad fuckin close. I loved orcs swaggy take on this verse and like I said, it’s very refreshing. Definitely some of the best worded bars I’ve read in a while. Only quirk is that the bars lacked actual sting, woulda worked better if it were straight up snf...DynamiCz had some bangers here. Had two misses in a row and pretty much a weak ending but his hits really carried.


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Old 04-27-2019, 11:39 AM   #12
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I have to vote dynam here. Orc came off as more Swag n Flow . All love. Vote goes to dynamic
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No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
-This is ok.


Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
-Ok

Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery
-Cool swag, not much impact.


Been working from home. Stock are easy. Guap on repeat
Your idea of Remote Access is asking your Moms if you can watch the TV
-Cool


My sex life gets hype. The way I moves inspiring
If YOUR girl leaves u Steamy Notes.. it's “do NOT forget to do the Ironing”
-Cool


Salute kid. Carbine gota smooth grip & shoot quick when days darken
Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden
-Ok


We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
-Ok

Overall, the wording in this verse was so good. Concepts were ok, nothing crazy. Didn’t really come at his throat.





The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
-The son/sun thing is obviously super old and the flip wasn’t enough to carry it.


Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
-Pretty obscure...trying to picture it but not really getting it.


I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
-Cool


The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
-Dope


U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
-I don’t play 2K sonthis was lost on me. I can get the idea but doesn’t hit for me personally.


Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
-Ok


Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
The product i pack Theracal.. bullets hit - U'll be enhancing the wrong supplements
-Not feeling this.


So, I have Orc here. His verse didn’t have a ton of aggressiveness but it was concise and to the point and worded very well. Dubs prolly had LOtB with TripAdvisor but he had more misses. His concepts are always kind of all over the place to me. He seems to have a lot of attempts at connections throughout the concept, which is cool, but sometimes it becomes too much and they don’t always enhance the bar. I also would like to see him have more multi’s in his verses. When you have longer lines you have to try to increase the amount of syllables your rhyming to make it flow better. Just my 2 cents. Props to both.

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No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
solid punch, set up was just ok
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
ur silly af haha, arya got ned stark hair cut the whole show lmfao
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery
cool rhyme scheme and wording
Been working from home. Stock are easy. Guap on repeat
Your idea of Remote Access is asking your Moms if you can watch the TV
hot fire
My sex life gets hype. The way I moves inspiring
If YOUR girl leaves u Steamy Notes.. it's “do NOT forget to do the Ironing”
flip was creative
Salute kid. Carbine gota smooth grip & shoot quick when days darken
Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden
there ya go, dope punch good flow and rhyme scheme
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The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
nasty, hot fire
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
damn.. cap double size out the head. haha
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
god damn
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
u just looking at logos or what? fire
U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
nice flip, (edited in after reading other votes: this went over heads, 2k/ badge for vet/ greenlight / aim gold side angle. sheeeeeesh
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
this was nice, i don't get the cred reference tho
Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
The product i pack Theracal.. bullets hit - U'll be enhancing the wrong supplements
word play was a bit obscure but it works good, punch was a lil lite not bad tho


over all: fucking great battle. nothing more to say on either side. consistency, creativity, fire bars. orc excelled with the rhyme schemes and humor. dynamicz was hard hitting and used visuals to tie into the punches. i mean, the visual of toad side ways double barrel shit added to the enjoyment; i don't get the cred reference and the closer seemed lite. if we discount the big battle between blue and zelph this has to be the best battle of the week. impressed with both. if any battle deserves a tie it would be this but i gotta be honest with my self, dynamics got real reaction out of me when I read that westbrook line, the corner specialist line, the fucking mario line, trip advisor... then orc got that closer and harden shit which was pure fire. fuck. shoulda went more bars to make this easier on me but i gotta go with my gut and say

v/ dynamicz
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Vacant look body double... double sticks was just swag... remote access was dope. Steamy note was slick hot yoga was cool



Dyn - opener was dope toad was fire trip advisor was dope. Felt you could have done more with the irish whiskey tbh....wasn’t feeling that closer tbh


I got orc here with more hits tbh. Felt he would have really had this without that swaggy self hype post surgery bar but he did enough to take this
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U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor



V/orc, damn this was a dope battle both had fire, tbh can go either way, had to
re-read it acouple of times an come back to pick a winner, i got orc by one quote imo.
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Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
this is cool
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
lol fuck you, this cool tho
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
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lol this is nice, I see the comedy approach
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not bad but i've done a harden scheme before so it takes a bit away
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Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
2nd yoda reference this week, kinda funny closer


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I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
dope
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
lol, dunno if everyone got it but this is good
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
fire
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
fire
U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
as a 2k advocate, i love this
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
decent
Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
The product i pack Theracal.. bullets hit - U'll be enhancing the wrong supplements
st8 bar, cool wordplay

This battle DID NOT disappoint, we had the swaggy juice from Orc and haymakers from Dyn. LOTB for me from Orc were Body double & Ironing.....Dyn LOTB were Westbrook & Tripadvisor & 2K. I got the slight edge to Dyn in BOTW so far that I've read.
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I liked Dynamicz Westbrook & Tripadvisor lines, dopest concepts of the battle to me...
the setups aren't smooth to me tho, but that's a nitpick
corner was cool too tho

Orc had Hot Yoga, Body Double,
Steamy Notes was cool
Vacant. was coo but seen it...wording was better overall
Misses were better than Dys to me..

V ORC - for less misses here/better worded hits. Solid battle overall.
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This was a dope battle boys.

Orc - vacant look, body double was dope but even you admitted the bad wording so...2 sticks, remote access, James harden and spiced latte all were good in my eyes.

Dyna - dope opener, both lines and as a bar, Westbrook, trip advisor, Irish whiskey were all pretty fire to me.

Like I said, I enjoyed both of these, but I feel like orc had an extra solid diss or two more

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