Nameplays 101 - Page 2

King Ra. · 05-05-2013, 11:29 PM

I'll drop somethin' after work manana.

Twenty One · 05-07-2013, 04:28 PM

Thnx knuck this helps @Knucklehead

fathead · 05-09-2013, 12:54 AM

Shits So Whack...talent's What Hes Missing
A Broken Toilets The only Thing I Wanna See Wiz in

~RustyGunZ~ · 05-09-2013, 06:32 PM

@King Keith @Split @Innovator @Figurative

Progress?

Inno · 05-09-2013, 07:12 PM

Yah girl on the dick shes an avid call in
She says i go nuts on the pussy, u just Added ball skin

@Knucklehead

~RustyGunZ~ · 05-09-2013, 07:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fathead

Shits So Whack...talent's What Hes Missing
A Broken Toilets The only Thing I Wanna See Wiz in

Pretty cool, the wording is short and to the point. Idk if a broken toilet or not is relevant but word. Flow was a bit choppy for me. The concept was solid though.

Split · 05-09-2013, 09:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

@King Keith @Split @Innovator @Figurative

Progress?

got this later

Fig · 05-10-2013, 12:23 AM

alec baldwin

Your career peaked with a bj, beetle juice da gawd son
now it's in shits creek with no row gain, a testament to how bald won

bleak · 05-10-2013, 02:23 AM

The Wu aint fuckin wit this dumb lame.
If Bonds is diversifying, it's cause you added a glove game

outtie

Ronic · 05-13-2013, 09:52 AM

Wiz Khalifa get bullied, that nigga throw punches like a geek
I'll knock him out five times at school dazin the wk

Ronic · 05-14-2013, 09:12 PM

@Knucklehead or whoever, if you got it son
Thoughts comments queries, drop some wisdom

Sharp · 05-15-2013, 02:32 PM

quick feed on you guys that havent been acknowledged just yet

Quote:

Originally Posted by Figurative

alec baldwin

Your career peaked with a bj, beetle juice da gawd son
now it's in shits creek with no row gain, a testament to how bald won

This was cool and complex, i think my biggest complaint would be that the nameflip itself wasn't quite of his name. tbh i think you could do a lot in battles with some work since you're a good writer, those complex ideas can do the most damage if they're well refined

Quote:

Originally Posted by bleak

The Wu aint fuckin wit this dumb lame.
If Bonds is diversifying, it's cause you added a glove game

outtie

lol i see you

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ronic

Wiz Khalifa get bullied, that nigga throw punches like a geek
I'll knock him out five times at school dazin the wk

Not bad, lot of layers added to the abbreviated nameflip so its less likely to be played. This is just something to develop and word a little harder over time

bleak · 05-15-2013, 02:43 PM

Yo the dyke bitch on the left leans me every time.

She's like... watching to see what she's supposed to be doing rofl

Ronic · 05-18-2013, 11:19 AM

Yo AB's so gangsta he got 6Pac's, and MORE fame
I ain't gon take NOTHIN away from Alec Baldwin - 'cept the last 3 letters of his name.

AB came to the wrong barber, I'll cut his hair with a sword
So when I take the last three letters of his name off him, I leave Alec Bald

same basic concept, two different deliveries

Tryce · 05-20-2013, 07:34 PM

...i got shoes, money & the best benz
so y da fuck wld i need bondz...i got oda investment

Seyance · 05-21-2013, 03:06 PM

so why the fuck would i need bonds, i got other investment..

speak properly.

Flow · 05-29-2013, 07:20 AM

wiz hard? only when hes holdin on some old mans stick
gets him to rub it up n down and promises him its all just part of the magic trick

Lol couldn't help myself

Rap Maestro · 06-10-2013, 04:01 AM

Ok, i'm in like d*ck to a pu**y, so knuckle, what's d challenge 4 me?

Sharp · 06-10-2013, 12:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rap Maestro

Ok, i'm in like d*ck to a pu**y, so knuckle, what's d challenge 4 me?

Reading the 1st post of this thread

Fig · 06-10-2013, 07:43 PM

Are nameplays the only thing we work on forever?

05-07-2013, 04:28 PM	#22
Twenty One Fuck it Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 48 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 137474	Thnx knuck this helps @Knucklehead __________________ S. E. R. E. N. A O. R. T. E. G. A

05-10-2013, 12:23 AM	#28
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,473 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181559	alec baldwin Your career peaked with a bj, beetle juice da gawd son now it's in shits creek with no row gain, a testament to how bald won __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

05-18-2013, 11:19 AM	#34
Ronic Blood and Hunger Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 191 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 412353	Yo AB's so gangsta he got 6Pac's, and MORE fame I ain't gon take NOTHIN away from Alec Baldwin - 'cept the last 3 letters of his name. AB came to the wrong barber, I'll cut his hair with a sword So when I take the last three letters of his name off him, I leave Alec Bald same basic concept, two different deliveries Last edited by Ronic; 05-29-2013 at 09:08 PM.

05-21-2013, 03:06 PM	#36
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	so why the fuck would i need bonds, i got other investment.. speak properly. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

06-10-2013, 04:01 AM	#38
Rap Maestro Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 62 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 34	Ok, i'm in like dck to a pu*y, so knuckle, what's d challenge 4 me? __________________ Reppin My Crib...

05-05-2013, 11:29 PM	#21
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	I'll drop somethin' after work manana.

05-09-2013, 12:54 AM	#23
fathead Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: cresson, PA Posts: 30 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 34	Shits So Whack...talent's What Hes Missing A Broken Toilets The only Thing I Wanna See Wiz in

05-09-2013, 06:32 PM	#24
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	@King Keith @Split @Innovator @Figurative Progress?

05-09-2013, 07:12 PM	#25
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Yah girl on the dick shes an avid call in She says i go nuts on the pussy, u just Added ball skin @Knucklehead

05-13-2013, 09:52 AM	#30
Ronic Blood and Hunger Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 191 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 412353	Wiz Khalifa get bullied, that nigga throw punches like a geek I'll knock him out five times at school dazin the wk

05-14-2013, 09:12 PM	#31
Ronic Blood and Hunger Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 191 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 412353	@Knucklehead or whoever, if you got it son Thoughts comments queries, drop some wisdom

05-20-2013, 07:34 PM	#35
Tryce Da Chroniclez Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 14 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 34	...i got shoes, money & the best benz so y da fuck wld i need bondz...i got oda investment

06-10-2013, 07:43 PM	#40
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,473 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181559	Are nameplays the only thing we work on forever? __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

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