Orc 4-3 vs Remy LeBeau 1-1 (PIC BATTLE) - REMY WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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• Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Orc @Remy LeBeau

[Useless]

[Netcees Battle League]

Orc's Verse




he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
&&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction
Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak


Remy's Verse

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keep swagger jacking Conor MacGregor

U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one.
Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude.
I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u.
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.

[iSpaz]

he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
// loll
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
// ok
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
// i see you
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
// ok
&&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction
Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction
// loll
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak
// not feelin

vs

U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one.
// ok
Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude.
I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u.
// cool
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
// i want to like this but idk altogether not a great diss
I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
// nah
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
// lolll this killed me
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.
// lol dead


shittt this battle was funny af. dope shit from both. remy had one more miss than orc imo. but his last two bars slayed me. but then orc had that work the pole and hammer lines that had me loll too. shit i guess i'll go w/the more consistent one

v/orc

[Amen.]

working that pole was meannnn
reflective style was ok
light up head was meannnn
pipe up was ok
hammer was basic IMO but good concept/pic reference I guess
tongue click could have been dope but didn't like your tie in. what does grabbing him have to do with his tongue clickin? (my african language bar in LLL was better tho lol)

vs

jelly had potential fell flat for me
cuban same as above - lazy ineffective execution
didn't like blowin him out the water
ignoring could have been delivered a lot better. had potential
paints too tight was funny tho hahaha - nice
50 shades of gray was meannnn

damn

remy ya verse was very stale bro but your last 2 bars were hot. should have wrote more like that man. what I mean by stale is, you had some decent concepts but your route of execution/delivery on them was weak, wack and/or lazy man. Your last 2 bars were dope imo but not enough.

orc got it on consistency

[Ace]

i'm usually partial to orcs style cuz it almost reminds me of mine.. but some of the stuff was a bit off here.. the first two, hammer and pipe up lines were just too straightforward and basic.. esp in a pic battle, saw it coming.. light up was a heater, lotb, that's more like it.. and tongue click was a damn good concept but felt a lil off
remy had a good opener, set the tone.. illnika/cuba had good placement here but still old.. out the water was cool.. wasnt feelin the ignoring jawn.. pants line was hilarious lol and closer was aight..
overall remy was just a lil more consistant. good stuff fellas

v remy

[sral]

yeah man I had Remy here too tbh

it was fairly even until those last two punches back to back, it was a quick combo that decided this shit for me

pretty much Conor McGregor'd him ironically lol

Orc had the illy light up your head shit but I dunno, I liked Remys 3 piece line and he closed REAL fucking strong

Remy with the slight edge

good to see Orc back tho for real

[Havoc]

he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak

vs



I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.

Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.


lol fifty shades of grey was lotb but orc edged it out with being more consistent. dope battle

[Netcees Battle League]

3-2 Orc

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Netcees Battle League

Orc's Verse




he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
way too telegraphed, way too easy to think of. Its also too statementish my brother
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
u mean reflective in the sense that it makes ppl think? awkward but its creative so aight cool.
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
YES! this is that shit I need from u, salute
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
lol dope. now u cooking
&&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction
Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction
cmon my nigga, this is like 1/3rd of what u was supposed to do with this, way too obv light straightfoward.. its just not creative
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak
and u stopped dissing the pic here.


Seems like Orc phoned it in on over half the verse. The two lines he actually tried on were fire, and would be hard to beat. But the fact the other half was so weak it dragged down the verse as a whole.

Remy's Verse

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keep swagger jacking Conor MacGregor

U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one.
Not feeling, its a good concept but the execution is lazy and really lack sting
Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude.
I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u.
ok cool concept and light pic diss, its relevant cuz the cigar, but the personal is a reach
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
this is fire
I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
this punch and the opening punch is the same punch, same timing, same everything, they both miss and basically are a waste to me personally
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
this is tight, good jab
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.
lol thats tough

Remy had some hard hits too, way harder than I expected. The pic wasnt the easiest to diss and dude had creative flips. Blow out the water and 50 shades of grey was haymakers.


tied 2/2 on fire lines
Orc just lacked on the other half whereas Remy was at least avg with the sitdown line. If Orc dissed the pic in his last line it could of been a game changer


v/Remy

[Junto]

he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
ha... easy one but funny
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
okay
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
I like that
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
haha solid
&&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction
Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction
ehhh too easy
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak
pic reference impact was lost here... not bad, not great though

vs.

keep swagger jacking Conor MacGregor
U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one.
didn't like where you went... he look cheap? idk wasn't feelin the connection
Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude.
I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u.
nik-a / Cuban is real old. diss doesn't work again to me on this one
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
cool association, a little off but decent
I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
ehhhh too simple for my taste
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
not a crazy concept but comedy
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.
nice finish

Damn this was real close...
Orc had light ya head up, that was dope. Stripper pole & pipe up were quality.
A couple concepts on the basic side but decent verse overall.
Remy's last 2 almost got it for him, closer was dope... but the first couple bars were weak man
First angle wasn't workin, nik-A was old and didn't hit, and ignoring was too basic.
Lost on a pier was there... one other decent hit & Remy woulda edged it...
But quotables were pretty close and Orc was a little more consistent in my eyes

V/ Orc

[Sharp]

Orc's Verse


he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking notes
kinda funny
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
cool
NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
ok
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...
alright, good wording
&&&boy loves the Gun lines. Re's the first w/ destruction
Remy alwaaaays keep the Hammer on him... cuz he works in Construction
cool
Put that thing back in ya mouth or i'll Blast it off right, b
I'll faackn grab ya till u hear that Tongue Click like how African Tribes speak
eh


Remy's Verse


U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to purchase one.
nice
Look at u smoking that knockoff, swhy I'm not liking this dude.
I bet it cost a lot to cop that Cuban.. cause ill nik's gotten rich writing for u.
cool pic reference but not much punch
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
not feeling this too much
I spoke too soon, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
nah
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
eh
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.
cool


This is close but I got Orc with most consistent hits. I think his wording carried him here tbh. Good drop from Remy though and I see why this is a split decision. nice battle

v/orc

[murda sho]

Orc

NOBODY wana face Orc. Why's that? the ploys wack
cuz one Touch will Light Up ya Whole Head. i ain't talking ur Boys Hat
this crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...

Remy

U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to PURCHASE one.

I spoke too SOON, there are some ppl behind em tucked in a room.
And they look like they're having a great time!!.. ignoring the fuck out of u.
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.


This was a decent battle... Orc didn't come anywhere near his usual self in pic battles in this one though.. If you woulda dropped like this against me I woulda bodied you brotha haha anyway Remy had a pretty solid verse I enjoyed reading it i think he got this battle with harder/funnier punches.. v/ Remy

[Useless]

@Bags @Knucklehead @Witty @Swerve @Destroyer @Sn00p @Muff @Cred @Tic

[Orc]

let's go first up by two wins.

[El Muffin]

Orc
this concept mega played but I think u worded this nice. its ok
vest was nice
one touch I fucks with this. ppl trip on the light ur boys hat up ploy..im more impressed with the striking the arc entendre. I fucks with this
lmfao pipe up . took it the wrong way was hilarious
closer was ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tho


jelly was ehhhh. just saying turning u jelly is corny. this isn't fourchan faggotry. I hate that word..jelly. its like hearing swag. plz don't do this again.
Cuban was pretty good. I think the whole nika is his gw angle is weak. but considering the pic I think this is aight
pier was ok too
ignoring was a swing and a miss tho.
pants tight was lotb ahahahahahah
fifty shades of grey. whats that some romance hsit? I keep hearing this show or whatever only thing I know about it is THERE WAS AFKN GAY ASS COMMERCIAL on ifc or something. so I use my context clues hat n I can see that the entendre works but the reference didn't grab me immediately. like I had to think on it before I tied it all in. its okkkkk

hmm I got orc on consistency
remy had lotb with the pants tight thing tho.

but the ingoring line and the jelly shit? (niggas still say jelly in reference to jealous? plz no edit: well u prolyl were just saying jelly as in he would be shook but still u left it up for speculation it just did not soun good in my head) were baaaaaaad misses imho

v/orc

[Unfukwitable]

My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
his crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...

vs

I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.

Cool battle, I aint like the hammer bar from Orc at all but that 50shades bar was the finisher here to me no lie, Reasons I like pic battles it sparks some dope creativity. v/Remy

[Flow]

Hard battle to choose a outright winner. I'll be honest I preferred orcs lighter humerous approach until his last two bars though I felt he focused a bit to much in the obvious plays in the pic, remy gets props for working well with that pic and finding a lot of different routes to go down but I just didn't enjoy his verse as much until his last two bars which were killer. That 50 shades of grey creased me.

Difficult choice, but I'm going to go Orc for a more overall enjoyable verse, but tbh it's literally a hair In this, great showing by both.

Vote Orc

[Bash]

Opener, boys hat, pipe up

Vs

Ignoring, pants leg, 50 shades of grey

V/Remy.. Even in quotes but I think the pants and 50 shades line were stronger. The pipe up was the only haymaker I saw IMO the rest were just ok.

[Kill Spree]

he's a faggot thats making dough, ain't actually faking yo
shittt. the rate he's Working that Pole got Strippers rapidly taking note(wordy)
My style is thoughtful. Even the best of kids mail me.
& u only got a Reflective Style cuz ya rocking Hi-Vis vests on the daily
his crook is beyond gay. nobody knows what the fucker is gone say
so his dude told him to Pipe Up... let's just say he took it the wrong way...

vs

U ain't got his hands tho..u wayyy too weak to hurt me son.
My 3 piece will turn u jelly.. cuz u were way too cheap to PURCHASE one
I'm accosting this queer..ur a target, n I'm throwing rocks with a sneer.
My shits blowing em out the water.. That's why he looks alone n lost on the pier.
Take a load off bro, have a seat n kick it with remy.
u got all those chairs around there.. Yet ur pants legs r too tight to let u sit in any.
Now that those threads r bare, it looks like it fits u right my dude.
That suit's fifty shades of grey.. And there's a bitch who loves dick inside it too.


dope showing here fellas i got remy with one more quote and LOTB here. he was more consistent imo as well.

v/remy