Levitate

Bad Lieutenant · 08-16-2021, 09:41 PM

What do you know, if all you know is shows and Prada
Only what they feed you and that's propaganda
We lost in the follows and the likes
It's all about the fame and the lights
Can't even see ourselves no more
There's no visionaries anymore
Sheep in suits and shiny shoes, the turmoil is apparent
You in the margin, spiraling in a current
Rich in currency and poor in consciousness
A tragic hypothesis
And it's deja vu out here
The concepts are all the same out here
It's all smoke and mirrors
Everything's for figures
TV is brainwashing society
Reality shows are substituting reality
Food for thought, the world's starving
Neurons aren't sparking
Educate yourself, that's freedom from these borders
Do you sink or swim in these waters

JustRap · 08-31-2022, 03:28 AM

This was ok rhyme wise but a little on the simplistic side.
Conceptually, that is if my interpretation of it is even accurate
Is dope but I think you could have expanded on it a ton more went farther deep down the rabbit hole as it is it feels very short and incomplete more like a quick scribe of thought than a fully fleshed piece but aye keep scribing bruh peace

08-16-2021, 09:41 PM	#1
Bad Lieutenant BARS Join Date: Jan 2021 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Levitate What do you know, if all you know is shows and Prada Only what they feed you and that's propaganda We lost in the follows and the likes It's all about the fame and the lights Can't even see ourselves no more There's no visionaries anymore Sheep in suits and shiny shoes, the turmoil is apparent You in the margin, spiraling in a current Rich in currency and poor in consciousness A tragic hypothesis And it's deja vu out here The concepts are all the same out here It's all smoke and mirrors Everything's for figures TV is brainwashing society Reality shows are substituting reality Food for thought, the world's starving Neurons aren't sparking Educate yourself, that's freedom from these borders Do you sink or swim in these waters

08-31-2022, 03:28 AM	#2
JustRap Member Join Date: Jul 2022 Posts: 54 Rep Power: 0	This was ok rhyme wise but a little on the simplistic side. Conceptually, that is if my interpretation of it is even accurate Is dope but I think you could have expanded on it a ton more went farther deep down the rabbit hole as it is it feels very short and incomplete more like a quick scribe of thought than a fully fleshed piece but aye keep scribing bruh peace Last edited by JustRap; 08-31-2022 at 03:29 AM. Reason: Rabbit