Profit vs Defiant - PROFIT WINS

Orc · 01-15-2018, 02:12 PM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

Profit · 01-17-2018, 03:54 AM

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke

For Battling · 01-19-2018, 09:28 PM

@Defiant you have until midnight pst

Pinot Grij · 01-20-2018, 10:08 AM

Opener is ok.
Diggs is cool.
Robert Griffin line is nice af.

I feel like you watch a lot of football. Fun little read.

For Battling · 01-20-2018, 10:20 AM

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
alright
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
this was cool
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
wasnt feelin this one
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
hmm this can work both ways
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
dope concept, wording could have been a little better but overall I liked this punch
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke
decent, don’t like how you executed this too much

You would have won if he had showed either way, but this was a cool little verse. Diggs and RG3 were both nice

Orc · 01-20-2018, 03:10 PM

Eagles celebration was nice, Diggs was a cool flip. The other football flip was okay too. Liked the swagger in the passionate line although it wasn't necessarily a heavy punch. Thought the verse was pretty consistent as a whole and you've got a nice writing style.

01-15-2018, 02:12 PM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Profit vs Defiant - PROFIT WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

01-17-2018, 03:54 AM	#2
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53065	Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke Last edited by Profit; 01-18-2018 at 06:56 AM.

01-20-2018, 10:08 AM	#4
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Opener is ok. Diggs is cool. Robert Griffin line is nice af. I feel like you watch a lot of football. Fun little read. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

01-19-2018, 09:28 PM	#3
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	@Defiant you have until midnight pst

01-20-2018, 10:20 AM	#5
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration alright U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that this was cool See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek wasnt feelin this one I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers hmm this can work both ways Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III dope concept, wording could have been a little better but overall I liked this punch See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke decent, don’t like how you executed this too much You would have won if he had showed either way, but this was a cool little verse. Diggs and RG3 were both nice

01-20-2018, 03:10 PM	#6
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Eagles celebration was nice, Diggs was a cool flip. The other football flip was okay too. Liked the swagger in the passionate line although it wasn't necessarily a heavy punch. Thought the verse was pretty consistent as a whole and you've got a nice writing style.