Basic M vs WRATH - WRATH WINS

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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[Basic M]

12

[WRATH]

At least

[Basic M]

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer
Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden
Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy
Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at
Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class

[WRATH]

You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash
U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon
Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall
Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'
I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games
I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed

[Profit]

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer

Ok

Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden

Ehh, execution hurt,

Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy

Ehh

Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at

Cool

Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class

Ok




You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash

Ehh

U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon

Ok


Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall

Self hype


Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'

Don't like the execution

I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games

Ehh terrible..


I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed

Ehh


Ok battle, alotta good attempts. I felt wraths I'll let u fuck my bitch bar hurt him cos it was pretty even but i fucked w/ M's misses more so I got him edging this.. vote basic

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Basic M

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer
Concept could've worked w/ better wording
Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden
Decent
Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy
Not feeling this
Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at
Again this attempt could've been hard w/ better wording
Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class
Lack of impact in the execution

Originally Posted by WRATH

You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash
Lol..decent
U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon
Naaaw, good idea, bad execution
Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall
Light
Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'
Lol..better, good bar
I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games
Played concept
I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed
No bro, plain/plane super played

Tough to call this battle - Basic you had some dope concepts, but the way you execute your punches prevents them landing heavy. Whereas Wrath your execution is very clear, but your concepts aren't original as they should be. Idk I'll edge it to BASIC M, this epitomizes 'could go either way'.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Basic M

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer

choppy here trying to mash a lot into this. end product was ok if not a bit contrived....fucking boa constrictor on his mattress lol

Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden

light

Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy

huh? also jesus Christ at your arsenal of bombs rockets and snakes so far

Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at

light

Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class

his grapes get opened up? wtf does that even mean

Originally Posted by WRATH

You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash

lol I can dig it

U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon

so relevant after readin his verse in this battle

Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall

light

Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'

light

I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games

dope...should've said candy crush or something...this was dope tho

I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed

nah not really

I don't want basic m to think im a hater or nothing but yo fr I wasn't really feelin none of that shit, wording was way off and too many ideas convoluted the clarity of the punchlines and contributed to your difficulty in execution. I didn't think wrath verse was out of this world by any means but his misses were better and he had more connections overall for me.


v wrath

[For Battling]

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer
waist trainer played concept, I’ve used like 2 on my own. This was a lazy flip too wasnt feelin it
Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden
wasnt feelin this either
Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy
...nah?
Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at
decent at best & im giving you that
Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class
bout had it with you at this point

Yo Basic, what’s up. What is this? Last week you had the shotty in every room, this week you ran out of shells for it. I don’t know if you just weren’t feelin it this week or what but this verse wasn’t too good Man. And you know I’m not hating because I’ve been gassin you hard so far this season

Vs


You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash
lol cool
U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon
ehh decent
Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall
decent again
Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'
alright
I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games
could have been better but not bad at all here
I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed
miss

I’m stunned. Wrath got a clear win here, I did not expect this but I like coming into battles like this and seeing the underdog out perform his opponent. Good shit.

Vote WRATH

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

basic m

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer

---this was pretty creative and vivid lol, impact could b better, but i f w this---

Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden

---im sick of nba player references lol, decent tho---

Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy

---i like this, pretty decent---

Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at

---i guess your talking bout the way they write bars? lol---

Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class

---decent ender---

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wrath

You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash

---lmao---

U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon

---i f with this, alright---

Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall

---this could be better---

Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'

---could be better imo, but i f wit it---

I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games

---at this point, i feel your lacking full potential in the bars, but the
concepts have potential---

I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed

---dag nabit? lmaoooooo only thing u got goin here is plane/crash landed---

__________________________________________________ ______

V/basic m. my guy wrath has potential though

[Alvin Karpis]

Basic had some concepts but just didn’t feel he executed them well
Wrath had end of the line and a couple other decent lines
overall i just enjoyed Wraths verse a bit more

V wrath

[Kill Spree]

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer


vs


You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash
Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin


OVerall I'll be real when Basic joined RB he was dope and this new style of his i dont feel at all. Wrath had some nice bars and some misses. this battle was light tbh but i got Wrath taking this

V/Wrath


PS that closer wrath was gucci gang gucci gang trash bro. stop that

[Ender]

Originally Posted by Basic M

Boa constricter dropped on mattress. Gat under ur pillow wont favor
left u squeezed before the metals lifted better than any waist trainer
Ehh, had to stretch too far with the set-up to make the punch work
Rocket never falls short. Its dead on, no pardon
Shot draws contact on a nightly basis, stir'em like james harden
Too simple
Bombs blow chunks of ya fam. Family reunions lookin' risky
ill throw up a few ones as they scream, talk about a foam finger frenzy
Nah
Low tier textcee at best. Get clapped & ya boo snatched
Wifey tossed to paranas, classick dehf, somethin really hard to look at
Used a reference but then did nothing with it
Just a yes man & a push over. Women use this fuckin' spaz
S'why The grapes of Wrath get opened up more than any english class
Doesn't come close to rhyming

Originally Posted by WRATH

You ain't gang, in times of trouble buddy become the flash
Yea U be flipping signs on the corner... to promote exchanging gold for cash
Ehh, not real harsh
U a letdown like Ur sagging, I know this nerd aint braggin
Here come another drawn out punch.. Return of the dragon
Didn't do much here
Tec in my draws, i'll punch a ref in the chest for a call
If you really want me to pull up u gon realize that im the Best overall
No hit on opponent
Idgaf if u stuntin, ya flex bars boring and say nothin
You not up next we just want you to get to the end of the line like you cuttin'
I liked this
I'll let u fuck my bitch I aint mad cause bro lame
A couple strokes then u gotta pay more to play... thats some phone games
Nah
I aint no ordinary nigga, yous a regular lame dag nabit
Bet if i use a Basic nameflip it'll come off as plain.. crash landed
I liked the idea, didn't like the execution

Wrath had the only punch I liked and the rest of his stuff was slightly better than what Basic dropped.

Vote - Wrath

[For Battling]

WRATH Wins 5-3