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Old 01-15-2018, 02:11 PM   #1
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  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

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FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
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Old 01-15-2018, 07:35 PM   #2
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Old 01-19-2018, 12:29 AM   #3
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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,
Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...
They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.
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Old 01-19-2018, 04:37 PM   #4
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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it
ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices
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Old 01-19-2018, 04:50 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,

eh ok

Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,

idk what this is fr

*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,

dope

Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...

nah

They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.

ugh too much going on in this verse idk what the issue is...these concepts are too fuckin muddled I got to stop the verse every bar to sit here and try to understand wtf is happening...not digging it

Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.

this is ok

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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth

lol simple but I fuck w this lol

u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city

eh corny

i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element

fuck w this

ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar

idk the word perfidy

always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it

idk the word versifier

ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices

another weird word lol. a colander is a pasta strainer to my knowledge....ehh fluid in all the orifices I guess could be all the holes....this is kindve a reach ...its not awful tho

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man...I am all for creativity but sometimes u have to draw the line for clarity purposes alone. too many ideas being crammed into bars with poor execution and general disregard for the readers comprehension. usually unfuck is a lot more user friendly so im a little surprised.....I still had him landing one more than hab but this shouldn't have been so close

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Old 01-19-2018, 04:57 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,
Decent
Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
Lol dope
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
Dope concept, but Idk feels like you over simplified the punch
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...
Again way too simple & very predictable
They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.
Decent
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.
Decent, nothing crazy
Quote:
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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
Cool concept, but didn't rhyme
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city
Extremely light
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
Nice
ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar
Good wp
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it
Dope
ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices
Forced
Somewhat of an upset imo, VOTE HABITAT. Hab's verse just had a bit more to offered. Even tho Un was consistent, he seemed to take his opponent lightly & dropped average.
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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,
hmm ok, execution lacking a bit in 2nd Line
Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
very wordy, but decent
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
i liked this, cool shit
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...
you had the concept but this didn’t hit well
They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.
nah
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.
alright

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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
ok
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city
nah
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
alright this was good
ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar
ok
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it
alright Man now you’re really starting to force wps lol. Not bad here
ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices
nah

You both had a lot of obscure concepts this week and I literally had to google almost every line. Not fun. Close battle but I have habitat barely edging this.

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back to basics
views on the tube dope

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chromite dope
colander

close af here, just pref.
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Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...

David Bowie line was slick and that basic line was fire...
wish you worded your whole verse like those lines...
wasnt really feeling the closer and everything else was ok...

i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it

the chromite line was fire and the versifier line was cool but the rest of your verse didnt really do much. The opener was too simple for me and the wordplay was forced in the closer.
Close battle regardless.

Vote-Unfuk.

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Straight up. I didn't like anything in Unfuk's verse -- it was erratic and lacked pop for me.

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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city

Opened well, rest was not too memorable for me.

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Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.

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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
DOPE
ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar


Overall tied in quotes felt Fuks misses were real bad. Hab I've used the verifier before and I like the Pay bills concept just not how you did it. but I got Hab taking this with better misses

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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,
Not feeling this
Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
I don't like this type of punch, with the connection just stated baldly without actually writing it into the punch properly
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
This was nice
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...
Liked this as well
They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.
All the pausing destroys the flow, didn't work for me
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.
Doesn't rhyme
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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
Doesn't rhyme
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city
Seemed like a forced concept
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
Clever
ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar
Nice wordplay
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it
I liked the word choice, had great potential, but the word didn't work both ways
ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices
Concept a bit forced
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I thought this one was pretty close, with both having 2 punches that worked for me. The difference was in the misses, because Habitat's misses were more interesting to me.

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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,

---i f w this---

Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,

---had to google bcuz i dont listen tot hat shit, it checks out/lightning on the face---

*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,

---dope, punch could b could be harsher---

Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics..
They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.
Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.

---pretty good---

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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth
u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element

---all i see is wp on chromite---

ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar

---i def had to check wtf perfidy means lmao, i dont like things like this... @For Battling this is a perfect example of the style they all have that im
talking about bro, wordplay on a big word from the dictionary, and the punch
is always the defintion of the word (perfidy/deceitful/liar)---

always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it

---same concept as the opne above that i just explained @ForBattling
i dont resonate wit this kind of writing---

ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices

---aint it funny that i had to google all these words lmao---

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but if i did write like that, im pretty sure thats good shit. but i just dont really f w that
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Habitat had the chromite line n the pay the bills line.. 2 best punches of the battle imo.

I felt unfuckwitable rushed this.. the back to the basics line hit tho.

Habit took this one

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