01-15-2018, 02:11 PM | #1 |
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Habitat vs Unfukwitable #1 CONTENDERS - HABITAT WINS
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01-15-2018, 07:35 PM | #2 |
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01-19-2018, 12:29 AM | #3 |
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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!, Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie; He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie, *crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin, I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!, Orc.. what's with this matching placement, Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics... They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains, The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains. Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls, The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.
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01-19-2018, 04:37 PM | #4 |
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u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices @For Battling @BROKE LESNAR
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01-20-2018, 12:54 AM | #7 |
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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!, hmm ok, execution lacking a bit in 2nd Line Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie; He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie, very wordy, but decent *crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin, I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!, i liked this, cool shit Orc.. what's with this matching placement, Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics... you had the concept but this didn’t hit well They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains, The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains. nah Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls, The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER. alright Vs u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt ..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth ok u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city nah i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element alright this was good ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar ok always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it alright Man now you’re really starting to force wps lol. Not bad here ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices nah You both had a lot of obscure concepts this week and I literally had to google almost every line. Not fun. Close battle but I have habitat barely edging this. Vote Habitat |
01-20-2018, 07:18 AM | #8 |
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back to basics
views on the tube dope vs chromite dope colander close af here, just pref. v/hab |
01-20-2018, 08:51 AM | #9 |
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Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie; He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie, *crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin, I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!, Orc.. what's with this matching placement, Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics... David Bowie line was slick and that basic line was fire... wish you worded your whole verse like those lines... wasnt really feeling the closer and everything else was ok... i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it the chromite line was fire and the versifier line was cool but the rest of your verse didnt really do much. The opener was too simple for me and the wordplay was forced in the closer. Close battle regardless. Vote-Unfuk. Bye...
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01-20-2018, 09:45 AM | #10 |
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Straight up. I didn't like anything in Unfuk's verse -- it was erratic and lacked pop for me.
vs. Habitat u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt ..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city Opened well, rest was not too memorable for me. Vote -- Habitat -- whoever wins will need a much better showing in the champ match next week
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01-20-2018, 08:55 PM | #11 |
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Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie, *crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin, I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic! Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls, The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER. vs u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt ..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element DOPE ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar Overall tied in quotes felt Fuks misses were real bad. Hab I've used the verifier before and I like the Pay bills concept just not how you did it. but I got Hab taking this with better misses v/Hab |
01-21-2018, 12:44 AM | #12 | ||
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01-21-2018, 06:50 AM | #13 |
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Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad; Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!, ---i f w this--- Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie; He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie, ---had to google bcuz i dont listen tot hat shit, it checks out/lightning on the face--- *crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin, I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!, ---dope, punch could b could be harsher--- Orc.. what's with this matching placement, Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics.. They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains, The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains. Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls, The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER. ---pretty good--- ________________________________ habitat u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt ..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element ---all i see is wp on chromite--- ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar ---i def had to check wtf perfidy means lmao, i dont like things like this... @For Battling this is a perfect example of the style they all have that im talking about bro, wordplay on a big word from the dictionary, and the punch is always the defintion of the word (perfidy/deceitful/liar)--- always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it ---same concept as the opne above that i just explained @ForBattling i dont resonate wit this kind of writing--- ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices ---aint it funny that i had to google all these words lmao--- ___________________________ v/unfukwitable, i f w his style more. im not into the wp/defintion-of-the-word punching style but if i did write like that, im pretty sure thats good shit. but i just dont really f w that STRICTLY PREFERENCE, NO HATE OR BASHING |
01-21-2018, 03:46 PM | #14 |
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Habitat had the chromite line n the pay the bills line.. 2 best punches of the battle imo.
I felt unfuckwitable rushed this.. the back to the basics line hit tho. Habit took this one V/ habit |
01-21-2018, 11:06 PM | #15 |
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Habitat Wins 7-3
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