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Week I: dead man(sub)vs Pent Up[Dead man Wins]
Season 8 Verses are due FRIDAY at 11:59 Voting ends SUNDAY at 11:59 Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words Voting on 3 battles is required. Topic: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3...ExTdzB0TlpINUE Goodluck! Last edited by Inno; 12-04-2017 at 07:18 PM. |
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Delusions of normalcy - skewed by rewards and dreams.
The battle between free thoughts and those soon to be quarantined. Aggressive, agnostic and caustic strewn through our morning reads - From other grim defined and misaligned written styles Met too soon for the worm to treat the bird brained individualized. Objective ulterior - methods synchronized and simplified. Joy from rage - avoid front page Synesthesia synthesized. A dirty weightlessness from information which is like pigeon flight. Form an opinion and practice it, find a victim to babble with, Then shit on them with that rehearsed bit like a laxative. Opposing news sources seem imaginative if it has the script - With a backbone which cant hold a candle stick. Fascists with anarchist puppets who paid to have their own living Are traded as live stock and the practice labeled capitolism. Property, Porsche's, personnel all launder their fortunes. 99 percentile paychecks are hush money, squander your portion. Theyve bought your endorsement for a quantum of solace Idk cant finish
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Dead man verse.
i invaded you, in silence, professionally ghost in a shell. you put your ear to the sea can you hear me? silhouette in a cove. lighthouse illuminate boats let the waves lap your cheekbone to a rhythm unknown solemn groaning. rock and rolling. demons abreast head heavy dragging albatross i tied to your neck you'll never remember me but i'll never forget to attach significance to all the places we went in vain, so it is, the same. as always before you called on me to harbor remorse. crawling ashore your breath is like a local haunt. your heart is a morgue my handprint is the pentagram you carved in your floor we loved each other perfectly in spite of it all fed one another Soma til we sleep or withdraw clockwork clementine, i recognize your choice, retrospective you called on me to die. i only answered your question sentimentalism, capture you and hold. it's the game i've played for many years, suspecting you'd do the same. popped your vein. picked your brain. made you hate your reflection drown yourself in Excedrin. there's no pill for resentment oral fixation, anal retention. symptomatic depression lost your whole perspective just to pay me attention so it was. go and catch your buzz. we're traveling tandem it's funny how we memorize the names of our phantoms, and resurrect in every moment alone. when we're not being a person only being ourselves. 7:30am late for rehearsal you've yet to up and quit. give me final goodbyes let the devil into you. it's time to arrive. dead man |
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