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Old 06-25-2015, 02:03 AM   #1
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in a pair of trainers, all about that base like an umpire
If Life is a bitch, she probably has a gun by her...
sittin' next to Death with a Molotov cocktail to unwind her
came out with my ass this time around like Sun's tired
left the OM too long I thought you fuckheads could carry it..
got me pulling back in with a Pegasus pulling my chariot
the only nice thing about you, is the suit you'll get buried in
shout out @dead man for lending you your style...*but on your frame it looks hilllllarious*
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with my flow coming all over you like a scene in Flashdance
with the body bags coming in now you don't have a Chiraq chance
got me board in your discussion, drop bombs with a funk flex
you in the background with a camera catchin' the social unrest
taking a week to write a line this came up 'cause my connect had success
in deliverin' me the wax that got me spinnin' like a DJ
a Joker in the deck with you detectives hitting replay...
you want to play Batman because Arkham Knight is currently out
so if this monkey is still on my back I guess the Circus is in town
they wanted 12 so I'm guessing there's a judge & jury around
got your 2 cents in the news so I guess I have to deliver Qwarterlys now
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Old 06-25-2015, 12:21 PM   #2
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Old 06-26-2015, 07:52 AM   #3
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lmao at deadman

this was pretty slick for what it was

loved the molotov and quartezrly's lines either end of the verse

i feel like you've found "your" style and this works for you

good to see you get in that groove of writing regularly too

keep than pen moving J!
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Old 06-26-2015, 02:36 PM   #4
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Old 06-27-2015, 04:43 PM   #5
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looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.
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Old 06-27-2015, 05:54 PM   #6
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Ooooo a little emotional are we? Thanks for the bump....






















this 'style' is free by the way so don't treat it like it took me a month to craft this
lol @ ingrate though
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Old 06-27-2015, 06:09 PM   #7
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you're unoriginal and corny.

half your posts are long retired gifs and google image reaction pictures.

emotions on deck. so much emotion. this is why i have some semblance of a personality. you're a bottom feeder, worth less to this website than a worm in Baron's colon.

fuck your face with a crescent wrench faggot.

here's another bump. you're welcome.
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Old 06-27-2015, 08:26 PM   #8
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Someone is taking the internet a tad too serious these days...



maybe its time to hang up the mouse pad until you pull it together bub <3
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shout out to ~12~ for showing us you can try super hard for a long time and still get no better

you're the jojo simmons of this shit

maybe you should hang it up until you find a new outlet for your fantasy life, BUB
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lmao where did this beef come from all of a sudden?!
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Old 06-28-2015, 01:05 PM   #11
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anonymous tags are my favorite! rock on pussies.

baron there is no beef. ~12~ is a good guy.

beef occurs between 2 rival parties of comparable resources. this isn't the case in this situation. and he knows that. so we're good.
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Old 06-28-2015, 02:54 PM   #12
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looking back, i can't believe you would have the nerve to even say that in jest you fucking ingrate.

your "style" now is like a poor man's imitation of the way i was writing 6 years ago.

back to the drawing board big guy. my username was the most interesting thing you've written this year.

dickhead.
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Old 06-28-2015, 02:57 PM   #13
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:D thanks muff!
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I didn't neg u

But ur better than this

I love u.
Stay up

Goddammit u can be a vindictive mfer if need b I see that.

But you saying you two aren't comparable makes me think deep down you think u two are comparabe

Don't get me wrong. Here's ur ego stroke.

I absolutely love what you do. Not only are you a technical genius but your capable of dropping the most poignant shit (i.e one liners n such )

Thing about Mr j is

HIs shit is NEVER technically perfect. But most of the time he says some shit that's really easy to identify w/ n it comes off as genuine. Like he just goes man.


Yall are on two opposite sides of the spectrum

I think ur better n I think he does too

But I bet u ur comments strike him ass odd too

Hence his replies of a jovial nature n he genuinely wishes u the best

Can I get a Amen
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you know what muff

you're a good guy too. i can acknowledge that about both of you. and i've mentioned it before

i am a jovial person on here and in life, for the most part

but it's boring sometimes

so you can go ahead and fuck right off
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Haha no doubt

Disdain is a mfer I feel.u
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i like this side of blacketh

where have you been all of this time

did you somehow absorb TheWerd's soul?
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lol I'd destroy this little nigga, sucked thx
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