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04-24-2023, 02:02 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: Wordz Ahgod (0-0) vs. MV The Demon (0-0) - WORDZ AHGOD WINS VIA NS
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @MV The Demon @Pepino @Wordz AhGod
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04-24-2023, 01:49 PM | #2 |
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sure thing
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04-24-2023, 04:45 PM | #3 |
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Looks like I’m replacing Zuo here. 10 is good.
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04-24-2023, 04:45 PM | #4 |
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@Wordz AhGod is going to be taking my place in this battle
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04-24-2023, 10:41 PM | #5 |
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I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose
you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too. I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank. I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story. I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course. MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head. My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire. we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt.. ..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures. sorry, went 14. |
04-27-2023, 09:44 PM | #6 |
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no ext. show up on time or sign out bruh.
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04-28-2023, 07:42 AM | #7 |
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Words Ahgod Wins via NS, OPEN FOR FEED
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04-28-2023, 08:26 AM | #8 |
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04-28-2023, 08:45 AM | #9 | |
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A few FIRE in there as well...though I believe if you keep honing you could punch out even better...might have been 1 or 2 in there that were avg/meh. Just a personal note, I always grant the 24 hr ext...PPl have families, kids, jobs, yeah it's only 14 lines but you know? Having a battle is better than NOT having a batttle. For the culture. Still your choice, Wordz on exceptions. But I'd argue my side. Regarding your 2011 Track w/ Celph...epic/legendary, man. Too bad it was 12 years ago and now you hate on my epic Wise cover (which I doubt any textcee could match)... Anyway, hope you get a full battle if you're in next week (3). ~ |
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04-28-2023, 08:45 AM | #10 |
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Opener was fire here I thought, great idea conceptually and worded tough. I didn’t get the prank one so I apologise if I missed something there but I’m going to gloss over that one. Origin story was worded really well I thought, blood run it’s course was another fire concept to me. Why aorta was real nice too, fresh as fuck to me as I’ve never seen that done before prior to this, love that creativity though for real. Shame you got noshowed here and some of those concepts went to waste because you turned up for this one. Wordz is nice with it, no doubt, looks like he’s a problem.
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04-28-2023, 02:15 PM | #11 | |
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04-28-2023, 03:36 PM | #12 |
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This line alone floored me..."Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course." Fire for days!!!
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Like really good Stay doing that Not a bad flip on the old uppercut concept as well. You made it appealing again Good shit. Shitty you were no showed Im expecting the same :(
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04-28-2023, 10:02 PM | #14 |
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Clap clap Run it’s course Those were my standouts. Cool verse overall. I’m sure we’ll cross paths at some point. |
04-29-2023, 01:05 AM | #15 |
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I'm not here to mince words, just here to make this bitch lose
you won't need a replacement.. my uppercuts will raise his kids too. nice I liked this I'll see em' at the office, make em sleep when I empty the tank he'll hear a "CLAP CLAP".. n get lifted out his seat like he's expecting a prank. nah didn’t like this I'm here out of boredom, he thinks he'll get clout n some glory signed up to get molested n victimized, those initials became his origin story. nah I mush rappers on tracks, anything from this bum is forced Getting too old to run circles. I'll cut off ur legs n let the blood run its course. this is dope, good shit MV got me acting like an old-school villain, s'why he's knowing he's dead I be like "why aorta".. then I squeeze and stop the oxygen going to his head. lmaooo I’m dead. Cool bar lmao My aim is well known.. your lying if you say your floss higher God'll bury you head first, arms out.. the execution'll be a crossfire. decent I think we have shit in common tho, we both fuck ur girl but I give her pleasure says she likes urs cos the big ones hurt.. ..now ur in the bathroom taking desperate measures. lol funny, quirky little closer. Solid Shame you got no showed forreal, I thought MV would show up but I guess not. It’s all good though. This verse was dope overall, I never really read anything from you but I knew you battled a lot back on RB. Keep bringing this type of heat and I see you champing this shit tbh. Props |
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