Week 9: evaD (1-1) vs. Hush (1-1) - HUSH WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance

Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:
• I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls.

General Rules:
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more




@evaD
@Victor

[Hush]

This will be fun

[evaD]

Hi

12?

[evaD]

sent 14 @Hush

[Victor.]

u only dope on Opposite Day .. I don’t respect dude as a rapper
Head shot .. they can lay him face down in the casket .. he used to doin shit backwards
U been texting since dialup and use the same concepts .. there played and lame
Funny the way they delivered internet changed but ur style of punchline stayed the same
This pacifist wouldn’t even hit the gym ..noodle arms can’t lift a gat stupid
and This here knife works heavy lifting .. it’s best to put your back into it
I’m swimming in cash - U pissed off cuz ya wife brings home dudes to suck
This fools a cuck and he’s taken more golden showers than Scrooge mc Duck
Beating me is impossible .. u better off flossing using a hand gun
Cuz I ‘blackout’ when rappin.. ur punches lose power before u even land one
U txt rap like it’s 1993..it’s almost like u got the archives locked in ur memory
No typo ..I ain’t hit the space bar by accident when I say u the worst Eva D
Gassed off a little hype in the league til I shoot ur face off and close your tomb
Make sure the buzz will go to your head .. flys love corpses an open wounds

[Blue Bayou]

Oh hey guys

[evaD]

Yo..
Home intruder time, twin glocks with beams, you know the shooter's primed
when two dots come over U and turn your noodle to the Stüssy sign
I approach with stealth and wont be seen until your shit just erupts
So a Silencer wont even be needed to get the pistol to Hush
If Dave's a crazy eastender, then this battle won’t get me hyped long
cuz If i gave a fuck about this Queen Vic id be drinking pints with that Tyke Wand
Im not supposed to win this shit, it wasn't written in the script
so this act of murder'll be off the cuff like Travis Bickle on this bitch
It's a trip whenever Vic wins cuz his rhymes are low level and barely noticeable
so ill just sweep you under the pile of dickriders fallin over themselves to vote for you
When his bird is near it’s like German beer, for real what a slutty sket
I pour out on that hoegaarden then She give head til there’s nothing leffe
I guess ya peeps will miss you, but really the irony becomes official-
when a self proclaimed Million Dollar Man’s whole town is holding Vigils

[Concrete]

Good scrap here, first battler pretty aggressive. 2nd, 4th, 5th and closer highlights here. The rest was cool enough. Second verse not bad at all either, 1, 2 and 6 hardest hittinh while the rest was decent, tho some more statements than punches.

Despite the risk of being swept under a pile of dickriders, a very unpleasant image, I'm gonna vote for Victor. Not read any of you before but in this battle he had the overall strongest verse, tho wouldnt call it one sided.

[evaD]

I think one vote is our lot tbf @Hush. 1-0, congrats man

[Victor.]

Originally Posted by evaD

I think one vote is our lot tbf @Hush. 1-0, congrats man

Lol fair enough


If no one else votes they shouldn’t give you a L

[Barcotic]

Foh

I'll vote now

[Barcotic]

This pacifist wouldn’t even hit the gym ..noodle arms can’t lift a gat stupid
and This here knife works heavy lifting .. it’s best to put your back into it
^Barely quoted this
Beating me is impossible .. u better off flossing using a hand gun
Cuz I ‘blackout’ when rappin.. ur punches lose power before u even land one
U txt rap like it’s 1993..it’s almost like u got the archives locked in ur memory
No typo ..I ain’t hit the space bar by accident when I say u the worst Eva D
Should've used 1970/memory/Eva D but this was still good
Gassed off a little hype in the league til I shoot ur face off and close your tomb
Make sure the buzz will go to your head .. flys love corpses an open wounds

Vs.

Home intruder time, twin glocks with beams, you know the shooter's primed
when two dots come over U and turn your noodle to the Stüssy sign
^LOTFB and possibly lotw (including Summer Classic)
Nasty
I approach with stealth and wont be seen until your shit just erupts
So a Silencer wont even be needed to get the pistol to Hush
When his bird is near it’s like German beer, for real what a slutty sket
I pour out on that hoegaarden then She give head til there’s nothing leffe

Allllllmost quoted Hush's opener

Mvgt Hush via consistency
Close, cool read

[Adverse]

u only dope on Opposite Day .. I don’t respect dude as a rapper
Head shot .. they can lay him face down in the casket .. he used to doin shit backwards
^ pretty good conceptually but didn't hit super hard, solid opener

U been texting since dialup and use the same concepts .. there played and lame
Funny the way they delivered internet changed but ur style of punchline stayed the same
^ kinda statement-ish but i can rock with it

This pacifist wouldn’t even hit the gym ..noodle arms can’t lift a gat stupid
and This here knife works heavy lifting .. it’s best to put your back into it
^ alright decent

I’m swimming in cash - U pissed off cuz ya wife brings home dudes to suck
This fools a cuck and he’s taken more golden showers than Scrooge mc Duck
^ lmao okay

Beating me is impossible .. u better off flossing using a hand gun
Cuz I ‘blackout’ when rappin.. ur punches lose power before u even land one
^ don't know if the concept is super fresh but it landed for me

U txt rap like it’s 1993..it’s almost like u got the archives locked in ur memory
No typo ..I ain’t hit the space bar by accident when I say u the worst Eva D
^ not too hard of a punch but okay

Gassed off a little hype in the league til I shoot ur face off and close your tomb
Make sure the buzz will go to your head .. flys love corpses an open wounds
^ decent closer

David:
Home intruder time, twin glocks with beams, you know the shooter's primed
when two dots come over U and turn your noodle to the Stüssy sign
^ damn alright hot opener

I approach with stealth and wont be seen until your shit just erupts
So a Silencer wont even be needed to get the pistol to Hush
^ good concept delivery fell flat

If Dave's a crazy eastender, then this battle won’t get me hyped long
cuz If i gave a fuck about this Queen Vic id be drinking pints with that Tyke Wand
^ okay not really a punch but clever

Im not supposed to win this shit, it wasn't written in the script
so this act of murder'll be off the cuff like Travis Bickle on this bitch
^ not really feeling might just be me though

It's a trip whenever Vic wins cuz his rhymes are low level and barely noticeable
so ill just sweep you under the pile of dickriders fallin over themselves to vote for you
^ ehh awkward wording but decent

When his bird is near it’s like German beer, for real what a slutty sket
I pour out on that hoegaarden then She give head til there’s nothing leffe
^ decent play

I guess ya peeps will miss you, but really the irony becomes official-
when a self proclaimed Million Dollar Man’s whole town is holding Vigils
^ don't know about this one either

Don't think Hush was excellent here but he had consistent jabs and Dave faltered in my opinion, decent bout

V/Hush

[Mac]

u only dope on Opposite Day .. I don’t respect dude as a rapper
Head shot .. they can lay him face down in the casket .. he used to doin shit backwards
mild jab

U been texting since dialup and use the same concepts .. there played and lame
Funny the way they delivered internet changed but ur style of punchline stayed the same
weak

This pacifist wouldn’t even hit the gym ..noodle arms can’t lift a gat stupid
and This here knife works heavy lifting .. it’s best to put your back into it
pretty simplistic

I’m swimming in cash - U pissed off cuz ya wife brings home dudes to suck
This fools a cuck and he’s taken more golden showers than Scrooge mc Duck
hahah funny

Beating me is impossible .. u better off flossing using a hand gun
Cuz I ‘blackout’ when rappin.. ur punches lose power before u even land one
cool

U txt rap like it’s 1993..it’s almost like u got the archives locked in ur memory
No typo ..I ain’t hit the space bar by accident when I say u the worst Eva D
okk

Gassed off a little hype in the league til I shoot ur face off and close your tomb
Make sure the buzz will go to your head .. flys love corpses an open wounds
nice!

vs.

Home intruder time, twin glocks with beams, you know the shooter's primed
when two dots come over U and turn your noodle to the Stüssy sign
shiit this is fire

I approach with stealth and wont be seen until your shit just erupts
So a Silencer wont even be needed to get the pistol to Hush
umm weak

If Dave's a crazy eastender, then this battle won’t get me hyped long
cuz If i gave a fuck about this Queen Vic id be drinking pints with that Tyke Wand
not feeling this

Im not supposed to win this shit, it wasn't written in the script
so this act of murder'll be off the cuff like Travis Bickle on this bitch
i think wording is off here

It's a trip whenever Vic wins cuz his rhymes are low level and barely noticeable
so ill just sweep you under the pile of dickriders fallin over themselves to vote for you
statementish /weak

When his bird is near it’s like German beer, for real what a slutty sket
I pour out on that hoegaarden then She give head til there’s nothing leffe
okk cool

I guess ya peeps will miss you, but really the irony becomes official-
when a self proclaimed Million Dollar Man’s whole town is holding Vigils
okish

Dave's opener was pure fire.. i really liked it, but after that his verse kinda fell off.. I'm going with hush here for more consistency and a better verse overall. v/ hush/victor

[Blue Bayou]

Hush wins