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08-08-2014, 01:07 AM
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Back again.
Join Date: Aug 2011
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Vividlyvague vs. Camp Bell - Camp Bell wins
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08-08-2014, 07:52 PM
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V.V
Join Date: Sep 2013
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hi.
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08-09-2014, 08:44 AM
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Senior Member
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...yup.
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08-11-2014, 03:14 PM
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This bitch jocking the fresh prince like he's getting paid
but a botched robbery the only time we'll see vivian banks
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08-12-2014, 02:43 AM
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V.V
Join Date: Sep 2013
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Campus never for higher learning... he don't even get knowledge from hoes his wallet carries.
This win couldn't be saved by the Bell if this black Zach wifed it like the chick that he married.
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08-12-2014, 08:47 PM
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Back again.
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 2,653
Battle Record: 12-5
Champed - Time to Kill IV
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Vividly was way to stretched for my liking . If ur gonna stretch a bar that much to for te concept it really needs to pop
Camp had a nice simple direct name play that was a solid hot V/ camp
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08-12-2014, 11:17 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,072
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Camp Bell: Your strong point is swag-and-flow writing. Yet here, you have a very clever punchline but don't rhyme.
Vividlyvague: It's good to know that even your 1-2 punchlines are way too wordy. You tried to do too much here, and your lack of cadence meant you didn't really take advantage of Camp Bell's busted rhyme. Vote: Camp Bell
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08-13-2014, 05:41 AM
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CB took this, better connection with his punch & Vividlyvague had very bad wording especially on that setup
V/ CB
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08-13-2014, 12:40 PM
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neckties
Join Date: Jul 2014
Posts: 1,629
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V/camp
Better of the two nameplays |
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08-13-2014, 02:20 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
Join Date: Jun 2013
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I have Camp. That was his best bar so far this season. Vivid, don't use a np in the setup, especially the very first word, unless u have something really witty to follow it up with. It took the excitement out of ur bar.
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08-13-2014, 11:29 PM
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Nasty
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 221
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I was feeling where viv was going but his punch hit stretchy n used a played bar. Camp came played as well, but his punch landed slightly. It was forced but still better.
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