09-03-2015, 02:13 PM | #1 |
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audio track i did from 3 years ago
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09-04-2015, 03:42 AM | #2 |
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nothin, huh? damn
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09-04-2015, 05:39 AM | #3 |
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I added you on there and you did not reciprocate.
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09-05-2015, 02:57 AM | #5 |
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Oh. You're Badi Alii? Lol.
I like your delivery and timing on this. The bass and strings complement your voice. It's strange cuz I really like this. And I don't mean to sound harsh, but other audio links I've clicked from you I found to be kinda...bad.. IMO But Perhaps some were freestyles or rough drafts or w/e, and did not have a beat that complimented your voice like this Snowgoons thing. So I guess my advice would be write/polish/practice/be on point,like this track.. because when you do those things you sound better, but when you don't I don't wanna hear it. |
09-05-2015, 03:02 AM | #6 |
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the writers block line was cool the way you said it.
a good example of something that if people only saw the text would say 'oh shit that line sucks it fucks up the flow'... but in audio it was my favorite part |
09-05-2015, 08:25 AM | #7 |
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I just peeped it, I thought it was dope.
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09-05-2015, 11:15 PM | #8 |
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Thanks for the feed guys appreciate it
And I agree, audio is probably not for me. But with this track I had, access to a mike and a kid that knew how to use reaper so it was cool. The writers block line was actually improvised and I decided to add it to the track for the same reasons you liked it. I had forgotten one of the lines and freestyled that in so we decided to keep it |
09-06-2015, 01:13 AM | #9 |
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you're misunderstanding. audio Is for you. That track is dope. I'm sayin try to consistently make them good like that.
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09-06-2015, 01:15 AM | #10 |
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Ssthop ittt you're making me blush
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09-06-2015, 01:20 AM | #11 |
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don't blush too much. i opined that some other ones were bad.
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09-06-2015, 01:21 AM | #12 |
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lol. but na. this1 is good, and from 3 years ago? i'm sure you have more tricks up your sleeve after 3 years
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09-06-2015, 06:15 PM | #13 |
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thanks for gettin me on a Snowgoons kick. It had been quite a while.
check out "The Storm". omg such a s1ck beat. my brain wants a song out of that shit |
09-06-2015, 08:10 PM | #14 |
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I just checked this out, & I must say I'm kinda impressed.
Nice style & delivery. |
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