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i've got
chips on my shoulder and a bug in my eye telling me ESCAPE before becoming alive scratching me awake since late 2005 oblongata hivemind hornets buzzing inside organizing space and time / corrupted refinement spent a year in suit and tie. recovering fine paperback spine. disc slip out of alignment Marshall Mathers LP blazing in my old Honda Pilot cruise control communication, powerful silence truth socials aint hitting quite as hard as the lie in the Winter i miss Summertime. we're opposite sides of an argument we'll never see resolved in our lives SO IT GOES. end all be all. philosophical graze corpos chewing on the cud of what our family raised swing a hammer nail a stud and build a hospital, great farm commodities, list our sweat & labor on an exchange build a product, launch it on Solana and wait until persona non grata sweeps us off of the stage often i sit wondering: nobody can change however often consequences called us by name laughing while i listen to these promises made for a brighter life tomorrow if we darken today once upon a time, they told our fathers the same sacrifice to reap rewards for all of your pain funny how it works out. how we rationalize Draftkings parlay moneyline a chance to survive NCAA at 8pm for future endeavors if we never win at least we'll all be losers together cocaine nostril drip the mucus ejector, translucent specter screaming at an empty room, no students to lecture AR-15 trojan brand, we're using protection uploading photos of our newest adventures, to whom in question dead man still refusing to settle, for viewing pleasure self obsessed, purview obsession collapsing under the pressure want to raise a family, because nothing is better. but there's nothing in my bloodline save for drugs and depression psychotherapy and alcohol. heretics, we passed it on devil in our organs whispering that we can have it all there's power in the tongue, ya know my youngins talking Tagalog lumpia for road trips to the new old-fashioned babylon Olympia, we marathon. Pheidippides style running in circles until we figure it out living life in integers that make up eternity discrete temporality meets latent modernity basically fucked. kill everybody, make you a buck stuff it in a pillowcase for safety to clutch that much will always save you til the dollar collapses buy bitcoin study mandarin and lie on your taxes there's honor in hard work. psyops got us relaxing short-form continent crash, nation caught in the backswing carcinogenic carbon-based car-fire lost in the sauce duck & cover firing squads while walking the dog freedom aint as glorious when all of our gods have died and resurrected as the pawns of Mossad Black helicopters used to be conspiracy tied now they knock commercial flights right out of the sky whatever happens, let it be. REDWHITEBLUE the effigy sniff the magic 8-ball up and reckon with your destiny content is all we wish to be core the rotten industry make a way for something new grassland in the mezzanines TSLA US embassy SpaceX NASA in-between they'll have property on Mars before earthlings get our equity be safe out there dm
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This went stupid hard
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What can I say that I haven't said a million times before? Somebody needs to create some new superlatives ASAP.
Here you're holding a mirror up to a vampiric society. Incapable of seeing itself even if it cared to look. Determined to keep shouting the truth in the ears of the willfully deaf. I really felt despair, or anguish, maybe anger even, for what is going on, and also reluctant acceptance that it isnt going to get better any time soon. Or that's how it came across to me, at least. The helicopter/plane reference indicates that you didn't spend long on this one. The ability to write something this good in a short space of time is rare and it was, as always, stunningly good. Thank you for the read my friend, I hope you're well.
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