Utmost vs. Just Rap - {Utmost wins}

08-07-2013, 11:13 PM

NEWBIE 2013
ROUND 1

No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling

Line Limits

-10 Minimum
-14 Maximum

First person to drop can edit only until the 2nd person drops.

2nd person can edit only until the first vote is submitted

DUE: Saturday, 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time

Extensions are available at request until Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time, exactly 24 hours later.

Good Luck

@Utmost @just rap

just rap · 08-08-2013, 02:01 AM

Cool.

Utmost · 08-08-2013, 08:10 AM

check

just rap · 08-11-2013, 12:06 AM

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either

Utmost · 08-11-2013, 02:16 AM

ill have sumthin up for deadline

Utmost · 08-11-2013, 02:55 AM

Who???
Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut

Decibel · 08-12-2013, 10:42 PM

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
Idk.. its like your trying to win and you just dissed yourself
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
cool little jab
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
Okay jab
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
Not really strong
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either
No.. just weak closer.

You need to work on elevating punches to more out of box and creative to hit harder. Setups could use a little ante up too

Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
Good little opener
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
okay jab
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
Again, decent jab
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
LOL.. made me laugh, basic and to point
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut
Not really feeling this closer

Your shits decent, however, not really liking the single-syllable ending rhymes. Your closer was the weakest as it seems you slacked. You took this with consistent hits (aside from last bar).

Vote: Utmost

Flow · 08-13-2013, 05:54 AM

Instrumental

Vs

Data day and just blaze (barely)

Better attempts by just but utmost edged it with half more quotes

Vote utmost

Sharp · 08-13-2013, 08:45 PM

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
tru tru... not a great punch but real shit
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
just a statment... this sorta shit could be flipped for a much better effect
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
not bad, do more shit like this
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
anything dope related is done to hell
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either
cool idea, coulda been done hotter but cool

Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
surgeon/surge in is cool but coulda been done hotter
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
cool nameflip, not done too well tho
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
solid
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
ok
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut
smh @ daytuh.... i'll allow it for art but this was another okay idea that had the same delivery as your opener, coulda been cooler if one of them had some switched up action. still alright

what just rap did right was pretty good, but utmost was more consistent and powerful overall. battle of the round contender, good shit dudes

v/utmost

08-07-2013, 11:13 PM	#1
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Utmost vs. Just Rap - {Utmost wins} NEWBIE 2013 ROUND 1 No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling Line Limits -10 Minimum -14 Maximum First person to drop can edit only until the 2nd person drops. 2nd person can edit only until the first vote is submitted DUE: Saturday, 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time Extensions are available at request until Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time, exactly 24 hours later. Good Luck @Utmost @just rap

08-11-2013, 02:55 AM	#6
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	Who??? Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds & whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit & bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut Last edited by Utmost; 08-11-2013 at 03:15 AM.

08-12-2013, 10:42 PM	#7
Decibel Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed Idk.. its like your trying to win and you just dissed yourself I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well cool little jab You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella' His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella Okay jab They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth Not really strong No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either No.. just weak closer. You need to work on elevating punches to more out of box and creative to hit harder. Setups could use a little ante up too Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds Good little opener & whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag okay jab Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research Again, decent jab Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit LOL.. made me laugh, basic and to point & bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut Not really feeling this closer Your shits decent, however, not really liking the single-syllable ending rhymes. Your closer was the weakest as it seems you slacked. You took this with consistent hits (aside from last bar). Vote: Utmost __________________ ..:: Decibel ::..

08-08-2013, 02:01 AM	#2
just rap Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 111 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 34	Cool.

08-08-2013, 08:10 AM	#3
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	check

08-11-2013, 12:06 AM	#4
just rap Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 111 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 34	Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella' His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either

08-11-2013, 02:16 AM	#5
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320633	ill have sumthin up for deadline

08-13-2013, 08:45 PM	#9
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed tru tru... not a great punch but real shit I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well just a statment... this sorta shit could be flipped for a much better effect You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella' His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella not bad, do more shit like this They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth anything dope related is done to hell No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either cool idea, coulda been done hotter but cool Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds surgeon/surge in is cool but coulda been done hotter & whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag cool nameflip, not done too well tho Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research solid Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit ok & bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut smh @ daytuh.... i'll allow it for art but this was another okay idea that had the same delivery as your opener, coulda been cooler if one of them had some switched up action. still alright what just rap did right was pretty good, but utmost was more consistent and powerful overall. battle of the round contender, good shit dudes v/utmost