01-14-2014, 07:58 PM | #1 |
White Earl
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UnBeautiful Life: Verses 1-3. AND CHORUS
still rough. but this is the direction/idea of the track. probably gonna tweak it a little before i actually record it. once i find a beat that seems fitting enough i work it a little more
Would sell his soul if he could change the past And a few of these mistakes made over a taste of ass Face the facts, its one of those funnier days he's had Raised his glass, drank until the pain was trashed A brainiac, who stays stuck in his head for days His time bombs tickin over these beds he's made A bitchs feminine ways creates his fetish for hate If he'd of let'er be he'd be a lot better today brought a baby in the world and ain't know for a year The paternity test results what he totally fears Choked on his tears, mixed in with so many beers Over a daughter in his life he ain't know would appear Coke on the mirror, tryina make his thoughts escape Talks insane, afraid his fucking life's been tossed away Another baby gil's on his plate, what she cost to raise Chorus x's 2 i dont fucking need you dad i just love these needle tracks don't know what it means to laugh means to cry, or the reasons why people lie my comfort is being high this is how i equalize, this is how i equalize But the kid ain't mean to ruin his night All she came here to do is live her own beautiful life She grew up despite the hate and despair And laughs when people say her life isn't as crazy as thiers At a young age wanted to run from the storm And away from her parents who fought just because she was born Looked at the pouring rain, afraid, tired of being a burden Feeling the pain, how much could fucking be in one person!? Her demons were perfect, the curses, and the blood in her veins Her fathers addictions, and mothers would uncover her fate The steps she would take to avoid the feelings she fought The feelings of fault, that caused her world to really dissolve building a vault, concealiing the thoughts she wouldn't share Cause it was easier to hide, then to find people who cared Scared, seemed like people were scarce, and nature would hit Like a brick, she gets high, calls it the only way to exist Chrous X's 2 i dont fucking need you dad i just love these needle tracks don't know what it means to laugh means to cry, or the reasons why people lie my comfort is being high this is how i equalize, this is how i equalize Met the world at the peek of her highs, she cried Cause a drug abusive life's one of the weakest designs Peoples decline, the hypodermic needles, the crime The creature inside, that let'er know'er dreams weren't alive but she's just a product of whats broken at heart so many scars, from battles she fought cause her folks were apart nobodies fault but her own -right? nah, fuck that!!! who's fault was it when she wanted to know where the loves at s'why she found out quick where the dopes and the drugs at learned the ropes as a rugrat cause her dad openly does that a young waste of youth, s'what it is when you face the truth turn the volume down, so loud she couldn't face the music headaches, excuses, to catch cases, using, basing, boozing brace for the news when she od's off her favorite amusement this is just a taste of the future, can't let it advance she's still young and needs the world, instead of a chance Chorus x's 2 i dont fucking need you dad i just love these needle tracks don't know what it means to laugh means to cry, or the reasons why people lie my comfort is being high this is how i equalize, this is how i equalize
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01-15-2014, 10:54 PM | #2 |
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Could of submitted the whole thing at once 'stead of 5 times and addin' a bit as you go yo lol...I'll be back in to get at the THIRD verse and hook shortly playa.
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01-16-2014, 09:37 AM | #3 |
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So much energy and feeling put into this, man this was dope. I think I enjoyed the third verse best. Can't wait to hear this on a track man, good shiet.
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