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01-19-2014, 09:26 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,072
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In other words, oats will not be voting on trap vs. Nigma.
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I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws. |
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01-19-2014, 09:30 PM
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nok Su kow
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,507
Battle Record: 1-1
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MOTHERFUCKIN HAWKS
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"black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" |
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01-19-2014, 09:37 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228
Champed - NWL Season 2
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PRECONCEIVED MISCONCEPTIONS DISTORT HATERS REALITIES
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01-19-2014, 09:39 PM
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nok Su kow
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,507
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I THOUGHT FRANKS VERSE WAS THE FUNNIEST SHIT IVE EVER READ CREW CHECKING IN AND REPPING THE SHIT HARD
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"black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" |
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01-19-2014, 09:53 PM
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nok Su kow
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,507
Battle Record: 1-1
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HAWKS
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"black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" |
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01-19-2014, 09:56 PM
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Robin Williams of Fallen Victims
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,502
Battle Record: 25-11
Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame
Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x)
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Ugh@at the game
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01-19-2014, 10:02 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228
Champed - NWL Season 2
- Art of Writing League (5x)
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- AOWL Season 6
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Rep Power: 3853343 |
IM THE BEST CORNERBACK IN THE GAME
I JUST LOST 300 DOLLARS AND A RIGGED TOPICAL BATTLE
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01-19-2014, 10:11 PM
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SOBER
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 13,052
Battle Record: 2-5
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Matches will be going up now. Mag will be posted Tuesday or Wednesday night.
Props to @Certain for closing the matches and getting the necessary votes.
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If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me? |
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01-19-2014, 10:17 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,072
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
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Rep Power: 85899402 |
This sequence of tags, though: "frank mad, go fuck yourself, i lol'd at tag placement."
I had nothing to do with those, either.
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01-19-2014, 10:25 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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im about to get some sweet and sour garlic chicken by a big titted waitress so i can nuzzle in hooters
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01-19-2014, 10:28 PM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night LIV
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Split Eight - I broke this down in my notebook but it's written in Zygotian Sanskrit so I don't feel like translating that right now. In reality, it's in another room and I'm laying down nursing a sore Achilles. I thought the verse was good, you are slick with words. The highlight for me was the infinity line, though infinity was an odd word to use for it. Kingdom of Wrath was fresh. Overall, it was a little predictable, the act of using the tiger literally in the story of animal confinement. At times it was a tad exuberant for my tastes, poetically speaking.
VERITAS - This may sound condescending in tone, but it's not meant to: I think your ideas and imagination place ahead of your current writing abilities. You formulate well, that's not the issue of your topical impact. You are just spreading butter over a too large piece of bread. First read I wasn't feeling the ending completely. After letting the thought process sink in, I'm fond of it. I just think your level of writing needs work. Vote - sPlit8 @Split Eight @VERITAS |
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