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Old 06-01-2015, 04:08 PM   #1
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Economic growth, toxic smoke, I swear under idiotic oath..
the products shown .. bright nights, darker days..
harder ways to say I'm often broke when one martyrs fame
A lot of ho's, a lot of pimps. but their suits arent the same.
Business is.. and it mirrors itself in every marketplace.
Id choose to walk away, but what happens when you want to stay?
The prices are too damn high, its hard to change..
that's what my pockets say..hypertension what the doctors say
leukemia, anemia, and other reasons to get me off to day..
only to realize your behind a month..suddenly binded up
I know times are rough, but Ill hit the club, bottles when I'm riding up
Rent a pent house for the night but I ain't high enough
these boulders make me feel like Atlas but I need to lighten up
a hospital bed is twice as much as I would like to touch
They used to say I didn't work my ass off but can't do half my pace
some days you have to feel sorry for this bastard race...
it's making me anti social, anti hopeful, a man to ant high promo's
I stand beyond what they trying to sell as the truth
but they would buy into anything if they tell you it's true
I wish I was selfish as you, but I could just relish in my youth
and give you an idea of all that I have embellished to you
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Old 06-01-2015, 11:19 PM   #2
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this shit was dope as fuck... and would be even doper to a beat... i was listening to feds watching while I was reading this and it started going to the beat.. shit was cool. Your flow and material is nice keep it up b
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Old 06-11-2015, 12:32 AM   #3
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