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Clutbuck · 05-29-2015, 09:21 PM

Nvm

CopyPat · 05-31-2015, 12:31 PM

ahahahahahah fuck this was dope.
how has no-one peeped this?

fuckin great man. so so so original. really nailing ur topic very impressive. rhymes were good, flow was smooth, vocab was spot on for this type of piece. had a really fun vibe to it. like anyone could enjoy it. had some humor too. i havent looked but im guessing this was from ur topic in the tourney? if so good luck to the other guy haha really dope man. nice to see you posting again homie we need to collab soon. drop something in the cypher spot too eh? and check my new shit im bout to post!

Clutbuck · 05-31-2015, 05:32 PM

Ayooooo!

I'd already finished with my topical ish, just wrote this up randomly after I was done with it to keep my pen moving.

Tryna think of some out of the box ish

ill nik-A · 05-31-2015, 06:33 PM

This was dope, flow was on point... Details were great
First time I read your stuff, I'm impressed, definitely different from what I see here

Props man

Mr. J · 05-31-2015, 07:02 PM

I already commented on this. twice in fact...
just letting you know you did work breh.
keep writing

05-29-2015, 09:21 PM	#1
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	FleaBay.com > Transport > Time Machines Nvm Last edited by Clutbuck; 09-25-2019 at 06:17 AM. Reason: using for a track

05-31-2015, 12:31 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	ahahahahahah fuck this was dope. how has no-one peeped this? fuckin great man. so so so original. really nailing ur topic very impressive. rhymes were good, flow was smooth, vocab was spot on for this type of piece. had a really fun vibe to it. like anyone could enjoy it. had some humor too. i havent looked but im guessing this was from ur topic in the tourney? if so good luck to the other guy haha really dope man. nice to see you posting again homie we need to collab soon. drop something in the cypher spot too eh? and check my new shit im bout to post! __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

05-31-2015, 06:33 PM	#4
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	This was dope, flow was on point... Details were great First time I read your stuff, I'm impressed, definitely different from what I see here Props man __________________ Grumpy old man.

05-31-2015, 07:02 PM	#5
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	I already commented on this. twice in fact... just letting you know you did work breh. keep writing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

05-31-2015, 05:32 PM	#3
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	Ayooooo! I'd already finished with my topical ish, just wrote this up randomly after I was done with it to keep my pen moving. Tryna think of some out of the box ish