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Old 01-26-2013, 08:37 PM   #1
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at least I know what I’m preaching, now watch me practice
hard to figure like the wardrobe of your favorite actress
Control dreams to the point of being a mattress fascist
Enroll teams to anoint, they seeing your tactless magic’s
In the ring I mold facts from clay, I’m cashius tactics
The phoenix rising from the land of Manasseh’s ashes
Leave you bowing like catholic masses
Crawling like Velma dropped her glasses
You only balling at the crass jackass bashes
your life is stalling for lying and tryna amass cash stashes
I preach this world is a lie, to help you pass classes
I march to the finish line, ignoring their mad dashes
these toads tryna battle like pimple zit and rashes
Maturing occurring, in the lion’s den fit and matchless
Think about why you slow down to watch traffic crashes
This cat got nine tails whipping with abject lashes.....

Take a breath: to begin again from the beginning...

Spirit from space, feet on the dirt, balance, a just weight
Mortals talking bout all their earthly talents, sorry I just ate
Under the sun is a lie, and if it is life, then trust u must fake
Can't keep it real if you forgot the mission, the steps u must take
Know No flesh is perfect, so empty your pockets of rocks weight
And the secret sin of envy which festers in jesters as king hate
Duh. Destiny is my roll dog, obvious sign that it's my job to bring fate
Maybe, just maybe with the proper motivation your choir will sing straight......

That sounds so good

I can't prove my identity, this is faith's agility
Never been a hater always praised other's ability
Always listened and showed respect to the nobility
But bled with the peasants,to breed seeds of virility
So far out of your comprehension, a soothing soliloquy
Make sure u get a mention, heaven tested u , feeling me?
Your connections were wicked, you chose bill and Hillary
While I progressed cuz I am blessed and tithe the size of Italy,
Yes I have changed, real responsibility brought humility.

Remember the future. Make better choices next season.
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Old 01-27-2013, 09:45 AM   #2
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Surprisingly bad.
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Old 01-27-2013, 01:42 PM   #3
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sorry, I'm not feeling it. you need to work on ur flows, complexity, creativity, enjoyment,.. trying to add more multis.
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