02-13-2016, 07:02 AM | #1 |
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10Senses vs Witty - WITTY WINS
NBL Season 9 Due TUESDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @10Senses @Witty |
02-13-2016, 02:54 PM | #2 |
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I'm good with 12 or 16. Let me know... Good luck.
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02-13-2016, 03:36 PM | #3 |
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12 is cool. g'luck
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02-14-2016, 04:06 PM | #4 |
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Witty, who you kid'n? you ain't got no wits
You're so fuck'n stupid, your puppy teaches you tricks You're the dumbest of your race, your IQ damn near zip I mean, you so slow... In a 2 man race, you still placed 5th You're just not sharp, you could never make the cut You the type to get hit by a parked car... Perfect example of "how dumb niggaz stunt" I would ask how old you are but I know you can't count that high-up the candles on your b-day cake made the earth temperature rise-up This was just a quick lesson, I hope you paid attention cuz the next time you test this, I'll send you to another dimension I'll treat you like a demonic possession, and twist your neck in different directions... When I'm done with this dumb relic, he'll be lucky if he feels any SENSES... -10 Senses (Bryan Ragin)
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02-16-2016, 05:26 PM | #5 |
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can post tomorrow if cool.
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02-16-2016, 11:07 PM | #6 |
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Sure. Its not a problem with me. I want to see what you got.
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02-17-2016, 08:34 PM | #7 | |
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U may have 10 senses, but clearly none are the sense of self worth The case is clear, u gotta meet a girl, talk to her, face your fears Cuz there's plenty of fish in the sea, but u ain't wet ur bait in years You sell property, but ur lonely, u'll never get a hoe as a spouse Only time ur in a bedroom with a girl is when you're showing a house You talk like a hippy, but you should hate nature, this shit is true I mean, I know I would if it fucked ME up like it did to you Just joking tho, please don't be hating God while you're home alone He MUST love u, he give u 5 more senses PLUS an extra chromosome Fuck it, this sucks, I'm drunk as fuck, thinking only hurts the brain But tomorrow I'll be sober, and you'll still be a forever lonely virgin lame Bleh...keyed, sucks, my bad.
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02-18-2016, 02:28 PM | #9 |
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No point doing a bar for bar on this. Witty did enough to win even though his verse wasn't great. Dug the "showing a house" joint most. 10 senses' was really poor. Didn't even know if it was serious.
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02-18-2016, 04:23 PM | #10 |
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Senses how dumb niggas stunt bar was fire. Rest of the verse was kinda corny.
Witty bodied that sense of self worth line was crazy and so was the extra chromosome V witty |
02-18-2016, 04:37 PM | #11 |
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10 senses had a couple workable concepts lil the stunt and head lines, but had too many lows and corny jokes. Obv ya first battle and u haven't been in the game to know what's what..
Witty came w/ a more NC style verse. Just more punch oriented and standard. A few cool lines.. Vote Witty |
02-19-2016, 04:40 AM | #12 | ||
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Not a stellar battle, but there was a clear winner IMO. MVGT Witty
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02-19-2016, 02:04 PM | #13 |
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Witty, shame on you for having the opportunity to leave a crater in this man's existence and almost getting out-barred.
That bedroom line sealed it for you, but def a missed opportunity. 10 Senses. I like your gumption, but your wordplay is about 25 years old and that's not an exaggeration. Some of that shit had me laughing for real, but at you not with you. Try to take a look at how others are wording their shit and the kinda of concepts that get love from the voters and it can help you along the way. Not saying be derivative but there's a certain way of doing things that'll get reaction from voters. Vote -- Witty
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02-19-2016, 02:44 PM | #14 |
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10 senses you have a lot of work to do. It's almost like you're just trolling. Terrible terrible verse
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02-19-2016, 03:03 PM | #15 |
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air balls
vs U never get skirt, so you hiding in the shade every time you net surf U may have 10 senses, but clearly none are the sense of self worth Just joking tho, please don't be hating God while you're home alone He MUST love u, he give u 5 more senses PLUS an extra chromosome vote - Witty |
02-19-2016, 03:20 PM | #16 |
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yeah, witty got this
10 senses was horribad just read some battles, and step ya game up v/wit |
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