Maintenance Man. Verse 1

Geno · 01-16-2014, 04:50 PM

This is crazy intense, I'm still stuck way in my head
Never knew a love like this that would hate me to death
Makes me depressed, thinkin bout her beautiful esssence
Put a hole in my heart that made room for a tenant
And the rent is cheap, but you'll have to take a stand
Cause there's to much damage for a maintenance man
Can't wait to fix what's broken and my hopes are high
But your love's one sided, and my hope's to die
You've got a rope to climb, leaves your arms in knots
You've fallen head over heels,, and its hard to stop
From this awful drop, but I still need you as my wife
I'd do it all again to, even though you've ruined my life
Cause I stay true to my shit, feel we're born to connect
but your killing me softly, and ima keep loyal til death
This world is a mess, hoping you change after a while
If your ever upset, I got your back with a laugh or smile
The physical attraction is wild, the girl of my dreams
When I woke up though, you werent as important to me

Just Write · 01-16-2014, 05:40 PM

This was clean geno. Props

Exis · 01-16-2014, 10:51 PM

but your killing me softly, and ima keep loyal til death
This world is a mess, hoping you change after a while
If your ever upset, I got your back with a laugh or smile
The physical attraction is wild, the girl of my dreams
When I woke up though, you werent as important to me

^^Fav section...first and last line here be tight as my butt hole.

Nice read man... Seems lately you've been droppin' pieces that are full of emotion, I normally hate verses that pull on heart strings and shit but love readin' yours when you have that attached to your work as you always keep it more than solid...now drop some ego pump myself up stuff and watch me drool like a mutt ;)

Enjoyed this G, stay uppity.

01-16-2014, 04:50 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Maintenance Man. Verse 1 This is crazy intense, I'm still stuck way in my head Never knew a love like this that would hate me to death Makes me depressed, thinkin bout her beautiful esssence Put a hole in my heart that made room for a tenant And the rent is cheap, but you'll have to take a stand Cause there's to much damage for a maintenance man Can't wait to fix what's broken and my hopes are high But your love's one sided, and my hope's to die You've got a rope to climb, leaves your arms in knots You've fallen head over heels,, and its hard to stop From this awful drop, but I still need you as my wife I'd do it all again to, even though you've ruined my life Cause I stay true to my shit, feel we're born to connect but your killing me softly, and ima keep loyal til death This world is a mess, hoping you change after a while If your ever upset, I got your back with a laugh or smile The physical attraction is wild, the girl of my dreams When I woke up though, you werent as important to me __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 01-16-2014 at 04:54 PM.

01-16-2014, 05:40 PM	#2
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	This was clean geno. Props __________________

01-16-2014, 10:51 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	but your killing me softly, and ima keep loyal til death This world is a mess, hoping you change after a while If your ever upset, I got your back with a laugh or smile The physical attraction is wild, the girl of my dreams When I woke up though, you werent as important to me ^^Fav section...first and last line here be tight as my butt hole. Nice read man... Seems lately you've been droppin' pieces that are full of emotion, I normally hate verses that pull on heart strings and shit but love readin' yours when you have that attached to your work as you always keep it more than solid...now drop some ego pump myself up stuff and watch me drool like a mutt ;) Enjoyed this G, stay uppity.