11-09-2014, 09:38 PM | #1 |
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Greed vs Mercules {Mercules wins}
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Greed @Mercules |
11-10-2014, 05:52 PM | #2 |
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11-12-2014, 03:56 AM | #3 |
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Wtf is a mercules, and why I gotta be the one to dead this gay Name sounding like adolescent mexicans trying to spell Wednesday Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine Your whip a piece of shit, I dont even need bars to murder ya Bet if Ikea car it'll look cheaper then they furniture See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines How you figure you king mandingo? I put them hoes to sleep bro Anytime your bitch say gimmie so more she dont mean dick she mean dough I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle You're a bore. How could you sit there n say it aint true I mean its so plain and simple, its basically you |
11-13-2014, 05:57 PM | #4 |
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@Sharp Nine post this fools garbage verse thx
I'm putting you in the ground after my clips dispersin' n it wont take fucking Veritas to tell "U MIGHT BE A DIRT PERSON" Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed! Im taking whatever the fuck I like, it dont matter what you want son the minute you Object, ill splatter ya head in with a blunt One your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me The church just flipped its stance on faggits thanks to Pope Francis but you've held that stance for years...the one where ya holding ur ankles I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him.. the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven Im brutalizing u kid! aint nothing clever bout ya rap Claim u sharp as a whip? well try outsmarting the lashes I put on ya back BODIED Last edited by Mercules; 11-13-2014 at 06:00 PM. |
11-13-2014, 07:36 PM | #5 |
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greed had
mercedes ikeas played arts n crafts playyed i.like menstraul cycle closer was cute. not powerful but cute merc had opener was worded kinda ehh polishing lol lotb ankles. pope francis ankles dsnt rhyme to me whip maybe? two baaaaad misses w/ object n collumn. they r ollld concepts n the flips are elementary close battle. 2 quotes vs 1 lotbesque quotebn two "iffys" ill go w/ Greed by a hair
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11-14-2014, 09:01 AM | #6 |
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Wtf is a mercules, and why I gotta be the one to dead this gay
Name sounding like adolescent mexicans trying to spell Wednesday See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle your best bars. wordign was smooth and executions were nice on the concepts. vs Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me pretty cool bars here. I'd say the setup really helped the 1st punch land a little more effectivelty. this was a pretty even match up, imo. I got greed taking this with just 1 more quote and his misses weren't as bad as mercs. Merc needs to focus on using more effective and harsher concepts/executions and he will be straight. Some of the bars greed dropped were played as hell but flipped well, I suppose. v. greed |
11-14-2014, 12:53 PM | #7 |
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Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry vs. Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed! Im taking whatever the fuck I like, it dont matter what you want son the minute you Object, ill splatter ya head in with a blunt One your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me alot of the wp merc dropped is played but he obviously put more effort into his verse than greed i quoted those bars because of the work he put into the concepts im sure mercules has seen the nameplays greed used on him before seeing out he from way back when text was at its pinnacle if i take out the played column and object line its tied at 2 bars a piece i give the tiebreaker to mercules mvgt merc |
11-15-2014, 07:28 PM | #8 |
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Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine Your whip a piece of shit, I dont even need bars to murder ya Bet if Ikea car it'll look cheaper then they furniture I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle vs Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed! I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him.. the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven Im brutalizing u kid! aint nothing clever bout ya rap Claim u sharp as a whip? well try outsmarting the lashes I put on ya back tough more quotes by merc. I loved greeds merges and mercedes concepts, thought merges was a bit short and the whole bar didn't flow very well together. one more decent bar and more polished wording and greed would have won. v/mercules, close call though |
11-15-2014, 08:14 PM | #9 |
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Greed had Mercedes and nothing else lol fell off hard after that.
Merc had columns and polished. Rest was ok. Merc had wayyyy better misses tho so he gets the W. V/Merc |
11-15-2014, 08:17 PM | #10 |
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Vs Loss column, seduced by greed Seems Mercules is a little rusty but he had some ok lines here. Greed had some played concepts and he had a couple good ones but he was lazy with the execution. I got merc taking this one. v/Merc |
11-15-2014, 08:30 PM | #11 |
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Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine Vs Loss column Seduced by greed Vote mercules |
11-15-2014, 08:37 PM | #12 |
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vs blunt object I dunno I got greed here. mercs shit just felt infantile v/greed |
11-16-2014, 01:06 AM | #13 |
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Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes
I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines I have broads cream in they jeans before I even pull out the rifle Anytime merges with bitches its syncing their menstrual cycle vs Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me One just had some better hits, The other had some potential in concepts but lacked the execution .. v/Greed
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See when I set a goal, I dont think, I just ride
When mercy what he want he just curl up and cry You're a bore. How could you sit there n say it aint true I mean its so plain and simple, its basically you vs. Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece your mechanics are way off while I'm renowned for flowing nasty so when it comes to being polished, not even ya pretty toes could match me I'm getting it in with deadly sin now watch me behead him.. the way I'm murdering Greed, you'd think I was Kevin Spacey in Seven I have Mercules taking this with one more quotable. That Column line was pretty dope. I've never seen it before so fuck y'all if you have. V/ Mer |
11-16-2014, 11:02 AM | #15 |
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Greed had that Mercedes wp which was dope
Rest was eh Closer was ok Merc had that opener which was lol Closer was cool too So was the stance bar Felt dated with his wording but it was still fresher than what greed had V merc
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11-16-2014, 11:55 AM | #16 |
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11-16-2014, 12:04 PM | #17 |
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Dont come around talking like you the coldest with rhymes I promise if Mercedes words around me ima run over him with mine This herb whole life is a lie, why rap when you n cool dont coincide Your arts and crafts consist of finger painting and coloring in the lines Not a bad verse just too simple at times... Mercedes line was dope... I'm putting you in the ground after my clips dispersin' n it wont take fucking Veritas to tell "U MIGHT BE A DIRT PERSON" Ive champed multiple leagues on win streaks. my record is beast meanwhile, you got a loss Column that could support buildings in Greece Gold diggers always talking about how much dough they need But with a face like yours...no bitch will ever be seduced by Greed! The church just flipped its stance on faggits thanks to Pope Francis but you've held that stance for years...the one where ya holding ur ankles dirt person line was dope... Your verse started off good but fell off a bit at the end... Mercules was more consistent... Vote-Mercules... Bye...
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