07-20-2015, 12:00 AM | #1 |
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07-21-2015, 01:49 AM | #2 |
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fuck it u hoeing shit up. just don't no show like last time when my verse was up 4 a week
Muff vs Sho Shadowboxing Rd 3. <<<I was up 5-4 before the + 3 came into effect . Aka aygo bananas that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRA AND NRA if u fucking stepping Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now" Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question
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He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job! You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it.... Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light... I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment... I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture That's work... Zip Him Up!
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07-25-2015, 01:45 AM | #4 |
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Opener was a cool personal shit nothing spectacular but a good hit to start shit off Dread lock was funny Guns sho was cool Fonzwoth Bentley was dope, set up tied in well n nice way to convert that into a personal Dope dick was cool Touchin the bitch was good Ripple effect was cool Lamp on my street was nice too I go bananas was ok, lol I liked the closer too Murder Same as muffs opener it was a cool way to jump off Didn't really like the didn't want him to hear much Tees under ur shirts was an ok personal shot Been such a joke was nice Click together was ooook Posed to be / post to be was cool Supermarket was ok Don't get robbed was cool Bounce n pat was ok Closer was good Dammit yall, good shit.. Felt both were pretty clever 2 solid verses man, I mean it's almost even in my eyes except the 2 bar from sho I wasn't feeling that much n basically was the only real miss in both verses.. There was some light hits as well from both but yall brought heat no doubt.. I gotta go muff here basically based off the miss or bar I disliked should I say but anyway good read but I got muff barelyyyyy.. Could go either way so GL the rest of the way Muff |
07-25-2015, 12:29 PM | #5 |
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Good battle, nice mix of personals from each, nameplays etc..
i personally liked shos pat at door, cliq together and dohpe kine, fracture closer was cool.. aktho a cpl kinda used lil muffl scream, graphic tees was lukewarm. I liked most of muffs verse. sho guns, ay bananas, ripple effect... the personals were straight too.. Muff went more creative route, while sho went safer. I have muff, but its real close on what u prefer.. Vote- muff Last edited by Saint; 07-26-2015 at 11:13 PM. |
07-25-2015, 04:51 PM | #6 |
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes vs. I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security This was close to me. There were some concepts and lines I liked but I only quoted the stuff that stood out. I would go with Muff just for more attempts at creativity although a few made me cringe. V/ Muff
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes lamp on your street? Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now" vs I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it.... Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light... I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture v/sho close but muff is steering away from the style of his i dig and that i go bananas bar was horrid |
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Muff tried to come super personal but some of that shit was dated/played. or just didnt land for me. Muff was too out there, and to me Murda obv had the stronger lines v/Murda
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07-27-2015, 12:00 AM | #9 |
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light... I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture cool battle but tbh I felt Muff had a few played lines, his Body sho was fucking nice but a lot was over the place, sho had a few better hits. IMO dude used the personals better. don't get robbed was lotb. Good shit guys v/murda |
07-27-2015, 12:05 AM | #10 |
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muff had body sho and wishing well, that was killer.. but some of ur shit was corny lol.. makin the band, jeopardy and aladdin were just bad.. that zip him up line was a great concept but worded poorly.. murda was decent at best.. no bangers really just consistant with ok shit.. i wanna give it to muff cuz he had the two best lines, but his worst was horrible, murda wins i guess
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07-27-2015, 07:45 AM | #11 |
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07-27-2015, 10:56 AM | #12 |
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Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question I liked the concept to the Aladin bar but couldn't quote it since it came out a bit weird wording wise imo. vs He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez? He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it.... Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture liked the verse, But I felt u could scraped the supermarket bar and the muff'll scream couldve been doper to me. v/Murda
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that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b
U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely Okay Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS Nah Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRAANDNRA if u fucking stepping Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons Nah dude I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush Ha Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win .. nah Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch .. you would body sho.. so he should get kicked out if he touched you. Since you showing bodies.. just so you know how im interpreting this.. no Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect Who he wishing well to? You? So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes Weak Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now" No Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question Sick He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez? He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed Im better then you irl though. Remember that. I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear Sick I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job! Sick You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it.... Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent W/e the fuck that means Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light... I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight Ehh What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment... I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin Solid U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u Nah Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed Okay Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security Lazy wording. Okay line. I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture No I was rooting for you muff. Shit was trash though. |
07-27-2015, 11:32 AM | #14 |
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I don suppose my vote matters anymore, but this battle was DOPE
Muff had a lot of shit, the strip club owner thing was HEAT, ripple effect was cool, aladdins wished was dope to me and the dohpe dick thing was a nice idea conceptually too, just not worded to hit as hard as it might have but Muff did his thing here, less references to all around shit and more concise hits. everything after the opening four or so I felt at least landed in some form, the Alex Trebek ish I have no idea on as I'm British so maybe that goes completely over my head but that's no fault of his own Murda Sho: dope as fuck verse here too, loved the love at first sight line that was illy, the shot at Grandeliquent from last week was good, four sin words was dope, this whole shit was fresh at least: What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment... I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security That don't get robbed bar though was KILLER like holy shit that deaded him rest was aight but I didn't like the closer murdas got this
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gotta go with Muff, I knew this was gonna be a good grudge match but it seemed Muff just had more creativity invested with the personals. Sho did his thing proper like and kept the steam going through out his verse with that gritty ish but I've got Muff with a more direct and personal attack approach
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Aiiight, battling isn't my shit so my votes probably won't be quality either but I'll give it a go.
Fav lines from Muff: I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question General thoughts: Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win ^ First line here is a clear filler though, gotta make em all hit. I understand it's a set up and whatnot but this is too basic to miss out on in the wack department at your calibre. You're doper than this. So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes ^ I've read some Aladin/genie rubbing it-concepts way back when I started out battling on CC before topicals won me over, don't know if that makes it played but I thought you flipped it well and it was cool enough for a ''you're a faggot''-concept but ye. Decent opener and I loved the closure for sure as well. Good showing. Fav lines from Murda Sho: I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez? He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it.... Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment... I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog ...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed General thoughts: I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture ^ I didn't really get this one. Guess I've missed out on something but ye, if it doesn't connect with me it just doesn't. Sorry man. Generally I don't really like gunbars and you had a few of them that didn't really connect with me but it shows you can do a little bit of everything which is a good look in general. Overall you got hard hitting personals which I love. From ''What happened to you'' to ''don't get robbed'' was pretty on point imo and shit hit pretty hard line after line without some meh-lines inbetween imo. Enjoyed that quite a bit. Vote - Pretty fucking dope and entertaining battle seeing how both had a solid showing imo in one way or the other. But I got Murda edging it with tougher personals which I think is the main essence in a battle. Muff still had some dope lines and were pretty creative which I love to see as well, specially his closure but ye. My vote goes to Murda Sho.
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