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Old 07-20-2015, 12:00 AM   #1
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Old 07-21-2015, 01:49 AM   #2
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fuck it u hoeing shit up. just don't no show like last time when my verse was up 4 a week


Muff vs Sho Shadowboxing Rd 3. <<<I was up 5-4 before the + 3 came into effect .

Aka aygo bananas

that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b
U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely
Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash
Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS
Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRA AND NRA if u fucking stepping
Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons
I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp
Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win
Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes
Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down
U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now"
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
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Old 07-23-2015, 09:21 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Muff
When I unleash the tek itll make sure you reek of septic
my niggas Old n Faithful. My Geyser Spray When you Least Expect It
He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs
It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job!
You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight
What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture


That's work... Zip Him Up!
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Old 07-25-2015, 01:45 AM   #4
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Muff

Opener was a cool personal shit nothing spectacular but a good hit to start shit off
Dread lock was funny
Guns sho was cool
Fonzwoth Bentley was dope, set up tied in well n nice way to convert that into a personal
Dope dick was cool
Touchin the bitch was good
Ripple effect was cool
Lamp on my street was nice too
I go bananas was ok, lol
I liked the closer too

Murder

Same as muffs opener it was a cool way to jump off
Didn't really like the didn't want him to hear much
Tees under ur shirts was an ok personal shot
Been such a joke was nice
Click together was ooook
Posed to be / post to be was cool
Supermarket was ok
Don't get robbed was cool
Bounce n pat was ok
Closer was good


Dammit yall, good shit.. Felt both were pretty clever 2 solid verses man, I mean it's almost even in my eyes except the 2 bar from sho I wasn't feeling that much n basically was the only real miss in both verses.. There was some light hits as well from both but yall brought heat no doubt.. I gotta go muff here basically based off the miss or bar I disliked should I say but anyway good read but I got muff barelyyyyy.. Could go either way so GL the rest of the way


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Old 07-25-2015, 12:29 PM   #5
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Good battle, nice mix of personals from each, nameplays etc..

i personally liked shos pat at door, cliq together and dohpe kine, fracture closer was cool.. aktho a cpl kinda used lil muffl scream, graphic tees was lukewarm.

I liked most of muffs verse. sho guns, ay bananas, ripple effect... the personals were straight too..

Muff went more creative route, while sho went safer.

I have muff, but its real close on what u prefer..


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Old 07-25-2015, 04:51 PM   #6
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes

vs.

I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security


This was close to me. There were some concepts and lines I liked but I only quoted the stuff that stood out. I would go with Muff just for more attempts at creativity although a few made me cringe.

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Old 07-26-2015, 08:18 PM   #7
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect

So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes

lamp on your street?

Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down
U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now"




vs


I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear


You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight

I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture


v/sho

close but muff is steering away from the style of his i dig and that i go bananas bar was horrid
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Old 07-26-2015, 10:00 PM   #8
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fuck it u hoeing shit up. just don't no show like last time when my verse was up 4 a week


Muff vs Sho Shadowboxing Rd 3. <<<I was up 5-4 before the + 3 came into effect .

Aka aygo bananas

that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b
U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely
ok but this is a statement, so light
Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash
Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS
this is weird and kinda gay so Ima just pass
Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRA AND NRA if u fucking stepping
Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons
this is aight, a bit stretchd and convuluted, kinda weak
I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
this is wack bro, and like a old ass reference, weak.
Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp
Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win
wack, this is bad b
Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
ok this is dope, good shit
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
ok, its really a stretch and a reach, but I like this one, so whatever, fux wiht it
So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes
this sound gay, why u wana jerk sho off smfh, not feeling
Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down
U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now"
alot of gay references and name drops lol. this is ok I guess
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question
this is rough

this verse was ALL over the place. this is what happens when you dont focus ur bars and pick the right ones imho. 2 really good bars but alot of random swings. there was a line in here that seemed directed at someone not even in the battle, it didnt work for me tbh
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He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
four sin words. fire.
I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
this is light, telegraphed, dont donothing for me
I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs
It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job!
huh? this make no sense to me. wack. how we even know what he wore? iunno this a super reach
You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
nice, jab
Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight
don demarco, this shit crazy
What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
nah, this is corny and just really a pitty pat
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
light
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
haha kool personal
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
pat at ya door? naw, never heard tha saying, dont make sense, this off
I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture
cool

That's work... Zip Him Up!
Sho had more work
Muff tried to come super personal but some of that shit was dated/played. or just didnt land for me. Muff was too out there, and to me Murda obv had the stronger lines


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Old 07-27-2015, 12:00 AM   #9
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I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question


Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed

Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture


cool battle but tbh I felt Muff had a few played lines, his Body sho was fucking nice but a lot was over the place, sho had a few better hits. IMO dude used the personals better. don't get robbed was lotb. Good shit guys

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Old 07-27-2015, 12:05 AM   #10
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muff had body sho and wishing well, that was killer.. but some of ur shit was corny lol.. makin the band, jeopardy and aladdin were just bad.. that zip him up line was a great concept but worded poorly.. murda was decent at best.. no bangers really just consistant with ok shit.. i wanna give it to muff cuz he had the two best lines, but his worst was horrible, murda wins i guess

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Old 07-27-2015, 07:45 AM   #11
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Old 07-27-2015, 10:56 AM   #12
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Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question

I liked the concept to the Aladin bar but couldn't quote it since it came out a bit weird wording wise imo.

vs

He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture


liked the verse, But I felt u could scraped the supermarket bar and the muff'll scream couldve been doper to me.


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that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b
U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely
Okay

Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash
Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS
Nah

Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRAANDNRA if u fucking stepping
Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons
Nah dude

I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
Ha

Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp
Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win
.. nah

Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
.. you would body sho.. so he should get kicked out if he touched you. Since you showing bodies.. just so you know how im interpreting this.. no

Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
Who he wishing well to? You?

So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes
Weak

Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down
U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now"
No

Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question
Sick


He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
Im better then you irl though. Remember that.

I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
Sick

I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs
It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job!
Sick

You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
W/e the fuck that means

Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight
Ehh

What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
Solid

U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Nah

Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
Okay

Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
Lazy wording. Okay line.

I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture
No

I was rooting for you muff. Shit was trash though.
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Old 07-27-2015, 11:32 AM   #14
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I don suppose my vote matters anymore, but this battle was DOPE

Muff had a lot of shit, the strip club owner thing was HEAT, ripple effect was cool, aladdins wished was dope to me and the dohpe dick thing was a nice idea conceptually too, just not worded to hit as hard as it might have but Muff did his thing here, less references to all around shit and more concise hits. everything after the opening four or so I felt at least landed in some form, the Alex Trebek ish I have no idea on as I'm British so maybe that goes completely over my head but that's no fault of his own

Murda Sho: dope as fuck verse here too, loved the love at first sight line that was illy, the shot at Grandeliquent from last week was good, four sin words was dope, this whole shit was fresh at least:

What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security

That don't get robbed bar though was KILLER

like holy shit that deaded him

rest was aight but I didn't like the closer

murdas got this
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gotta go with Muff, I knew this was gonna be a good grudge match but it seemed Muff just had more creativity invested with the personals. Sho did his thing proper like and kept the steam going through out his verse with that gritty ish but I've got Muff with a more direct and personal attack approach

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Aiiight, battling isn't my shit so my votes probably won't be quality either but I'll give it a go.

Fav lines from Muff:
I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question


General thoughts:
Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp
Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win

^ First line here is a clear filler though, gotta make em all hit. I understand it's a set up and whatnot but this is too basic to miss out on in the wack department at your calibre. You're doper than this.
So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes

^ I've read some Aladin/genie rubbing it-concepts way back when I started out battling on CC before topicals won me over, don't know if that makes it played but I thought you flipped it well and it was cool enough for a ''you're a faggot''-concept but ye.

Decent opener and I loved the closure for sure as well. Good showing.

Fav lines from Murda Sho:

I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed


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I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture

^ I didn't really get this one. Guess I've missed out on something but ye, if it doesn't connect with me it just doesn't. Sorry man.

Generally I don't really like gunbars and you had a few of them that didn't really connect with me but it shows you can do a little bit of everything which is a good look in general.

Overall you got hard hitting personals which I love. From ''What happened to you'' to ''don't get robbed'' was pretty on point imo and shit hit pretty hard line after line without some meh-lines inbetween imo. Enjoyed that quite a bit.

Vote - Pretty fucking dope and entertaining battle seeing how both had a solid showing imo in one way or the other. But I got Murda edging it with tougher personals which I think is the main essence in a battle. Muff still had some dope lines and were pretty creative which I love to see as well, specially his closure but ye.

My vote goes to Murda Sho.
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fuck it u hoeing shit up. just don't no show like last time when my verse was up 4 a week


Muff vs Sho Shadowboxing Rd 3. <<<I was up 5-4 before the + 3 came into effect .

Aka aygo bananas

that shadowboxing match? thought that was a fix for sure, b
U Brag about that? Bitch you only won coz Hush shut that shit down Prematurely
where's the flip?
Youd tell a different story. A dreadlock girl whos dumpin his trash
Truth is u only Dread Lock^ because if u do? ud BE THE 1st ONE GETTIN FUKD IN THEASS
i see the wp, but i can't get past the wording.
Muff is a spaz. ill GO IRA AND NRA if u fucking stepping
Coz if its Guns Sho? Im Raiding n Handing out Explosive Charges like u running weapons
liked the running weapons angle but the execution is a lil off
I left SS tbh. see if I disagree? the contract will crumble simply to dust
See I was Apart of Making the Band. You just a Mfkn Fonzworth Bentley to Hush
haha this was nice
Honestly bro. you look gay AND u act like a wimp
Plus you been on DOHpe Dick so long I think u may Climax IF you happen to win
this is ok
Hush the owner. Cred the bouncer. N u the one sucking the dick
Id Body Sho. But I knew id Eventually Get Kicked Out the Club for Touchin the Bitch
not bad. liked this.
Im equipped with the best. 'Metal' plated strap str8 rippin his chest
If sho wishing well. I pull that Nickel out n Splash his SHirt just to see the Ripple Effect
cool.
So Cred aka "Chiraq" wants you to slap me? That Iraqi lookin Fag was whiffin
You Lamp on My Street n ill make sure You get Rubbed Out for Alladin's Wishes
meh
Saw ur alias. ur a fag who sux slabs wen pants are down
U stay sayn Zip Him Up! Hush looks down like "I know why dey call you 'I Go Bananas' Now"
i think you could have done more with this. still ok.
Call my gun Alex Trebek. i have morbid aggression
Your Lifes in Jeapordy if we Ask Where the Dope Is n u Answer in the Form of a Question
i want to like this but don't think you set up the dope part well enough for it to hit
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He does terrible gun bars! What the fuck has this man did wit my steez?
He's just forcin words more than gluttony wrath envy and greed
didn't like this concept tbh
I don't bargain with queers so i'll run up on him, let it spark in his ear
Then 'Muff'll scream' like when i'm with his mom & we don't want him to hear
slick. cool. probably played but i like what you did with it
I blast the tom so keep frontin i'm hurtin u faggot slobs
It'll get more graphic than the tees under ur shirts when u had a job!
ok personal
You're passed fixing bitch, it's sad isn't it....
Since Dohpe u've been such a joke there's teeth marks on u from Grandiloquent
nah
Damn u Muff! You were swift and clever as fuck then turned light...
I'll shoot guns at u till they click together like love at first sight
eh. ok.
What happened to u!? You lose to votes & to employment...
I mean u was 'posed to be a legend but nowadays u just post to be annoyin
nice flip
U get banned then spam names, a slew of log-ins acquired dude
Registered so much u'd think atleast a supermarket would hire u
haha this is mean
Stop complaining! cause outside they jack u and provoke u dog
...shit this site really might be the only place u DON'T get robbed
ok.
Come to my town & ask for some war we drive up & pull the heat
Shots would bounce & pat at ya door like nightclub security
ok.
I am bound to clap ya, silence clowns who used to write & now they actors
Ima break his legacy so bad Andrew couldn't lie about the Fracture
light jab.


That's work... Zip Him Up!
this was a cool battle. both of these dudes have bars so i gotta take my hat off especially in a battle this long. fonzworth bentley, dohpe dick, body sho, ripple effect for muff. muffl screams, graphic tees, post to be annoying, registered for sho. muff had wording issues on a few bars, which gives murda an advantage, because he was on point with phrasing and was pretty consistent. i think looking at the misses i gotta give it to sho.

Vote: Murda sho
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