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Old 10-01-2013, 12:34 PM   #1
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God is Our Protection,
God is our all in all.
God is our light in dark,
God is our all in all.
God is our joy in time of sorrow,
God is our all in all.
God is our Tomorrow,
God is our all in all,
God is the joy & the Strength of our life's,
He erase all stress, worries, & strife's.
He promised to keep us,
Never to leave us.
Because he loves us,
People around the World Struggle.
But they don't give up,
We have to keep life's fresh everyday.
We wanna go with him when he comes back,
we have come to far and we will never turn back.
God is our all in all.

suppose to be story lyrics
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Old 10-02-2013, 08:54 AM   #2
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seems like hymn more than anything. got the preachy vibe goin on here. I've never really been a fan of that. I respect its straightforwardness but it leaves little to the imagination. Maybe if there was more context to frame this out better would I fall in love with this. but as is, it seems incomplete. maybe i'm reading too much into it.
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Old 10-02-2013, 08:57 AM   #3
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Old 10-03-2013, 09:24 PM   #4
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EVERYONE NOT INTO SPIRIT LYRICS BUT THANKS FOR READING GUYS
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