07-13-2013, 12:11 PM | #61 |
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07-13-2013, 12:14 PM | #62 |
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You're gonna want to make 3 punches like you were actually text battling those 4 dudes. The entire OP has in-depth instructions worth checking out. Storytellers punches toward dirty Harry, Simon cowel and dirty Harry is a good model to use Edit: damn you and your more concise posts, knuck |
07-13-2013, 02:47 PM | #63 |
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Dirty Harry Simon Cowell Eric Foreman Zero bitches for you!!! - lie, cheat n steal to get a floozy to fall & still we wouldnt see a 'Dirty pull'... EVEN with a roofie involved Ur ballin atta snails pace - broken jalopy that lookin the pits I mean, just watch S. car go... hes behind it pushin the whip Wet limbs w/ the shotty, then aim to ya brim n say sorry i'd air ric for kicks, then watch House try to breathe life back into his body |
07-13-2013, 04:39 PM | #64 |
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Lol..... @Sharp Nine Knucks always precise
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07-14-2013, 02:05 AM | #66 |
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Exstacy, LD50, have eric dumb ass thrown out the house
Cant handle his shit, only thing E Foreman is foam at the mouth Coward wit a weak bladder, dude wouldnt take one gun to scare Fighting style dirty, harry saw arms n soiled his underwear Dude creates wack shit, wit a crowbar still couldnt get win leverage If a bitch wants TC cock, tail trynna buy that gin beverage This American Idle, Cowell too daft for a challenge - fact: Any bitch that Sim pull would have to be exactly that Last edited by Ronic; 07-14-2013 at 10:28 PM. |
07-14-2013, 11:15 AM | #67 |
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Your shittyname wont make you popular,better of cleanin it b
Only people who heard of dirt reached for a sponge immediatel/ you ain't openin eyes wide as owls, cuz your lame ass more colon than powell assumed ur A lazy jamaican farmer cuz "Si,mon, cow well"/sigh mon cow well Beef I cook up and put to the grills quicker than a manhattan doorman Especially since your name explains your views on sexuality since eric foreman |
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07-17-2013, 05:10 AM | #71 |
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You didn't get back to me so here's 3 quick uns. Dirty Harry I don't take - I give; cus unlike you I aint no faggy twat! So if im in a Hurry..... its just to get the dirt of my back Tyler the Creator His concepts are wobbling...his wording is a slur of shit! at text im a Typist < an we think this when you write bitch Eric Foreman I got mad game, bitches love my moves when I attack Hes got no game yet Foreplay with no experience of that
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07-17-2013, 09:47 AM | #72 |
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I thought your first two came off forced, really disliked Typist and I dislike even more that you capitalise the first letters of them. I get to the point of the wordplay and just know where it's going, almost instantly, I don't even need to get to the end of the line to get the punch, in my head I've already riddled it which ruins them completely for me. They're too predictable I think.
Maybe don't word them all the same way? Maybe keep the wordplay until the end of the line? I dunno. I'll need to think of examples to better explain. Foreplay was your best though of those I read.
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lol @Beyond you claim your not bitter on that vote but have literally hounded anything of mine you can give an opinion on - dude let it go
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Too late. You're the Sharp Nine to my Pancakebrah at this point.
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07-17-2013, 10:26 AM | #79 |
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I'll allow the nameplay thing, still not a fan of the capitalisation though, anyone with an I.Q above R!can Theoryz could work out the intention.
Typist doesn't even work both ways though, WTF Bey?
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I was reading it Ty pissed, ain't that the slang y'all use for getting drunk? lmao And yeah, I tend to not capitalize my concepts like that anymore other than proper nouns |
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