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Old 12-30-2013, 04:09 AM   #761
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In love with death n demons, breathless sex with headless divas,
Depth perception's less, It seems as though my feet have left the cement.
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Old 12-30-2013, 04:19 AM   #762
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I was such a beast child destiny was arresting me
Some interesting things are deep in my police files
Opportunity knocks but the demon got the best of me
It's been the cause and culprit to why I reached out
To the parties at the beach house for a sexual feast
Heterosexual wrestler embezzling pussy for weeks
I'd shower rinse then repeat until I was weak in the knees
Depleted of seeds, relieved of having avoided disease
Copulation is a devotion waiting for my next meditation
No hesitation for that reservation cuz that's a wasting
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Old 12-30-2013, 09:01 PM   #763
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What is Repetition? It's the itch inside which only mimics rhythm. Like any written wisdom profaning some theorem of fiction. It's the frontiersmen on a gentlewoman. Would her pregnancy be Christian or are his children victims? Redundancy or Machiavellian? To each his own in this, in this his decision. This instant audition has just arisen, a natural pulse in a paroxysm of opinion. Don't know? Drink then. This superstition serum is a syrup of your own religion? Don't matter much, because the circuits of your worship are called courage...Wired in repetition of Spirit by the unobserved Observant.
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Old 12-31-2013, 02:48 AM   #764
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The gallows await us
Shallow and off our hiaitus.
they bait us.
they fast n' pace us.
they laugh cuz they hate us.
shackles abate, debate, perforate us.
leave us as half of ourselves.
a past someone else.
a rash under the belt.
a brash son in a cell.
he gets his way, lets loose the wrath of all hell.
thats them. torture incarnate.
the fortune of bar fucks.
the orator of hard luck.
the arranger of awe struck.
now come the watchers in awe some.
they stare. point. gawk in fun.
you want reprisal. there falls none.
we are alone in the gallows.
yet they call us.


so lets do something very evil.
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Old 01-02-2014, 11:44 AM   #765
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I'm setting an early appointment with the conjoined twins
Mmm baby let those perfect loins in, rub in the ointment
Pop off the cap, grab the glass of slow gin and gulp it
Rub the lotion on both tits and let's practice our aerobics
One, two, three, stroke the whole Dick, notice the growth
One twin repulsed the other letting her hip hop to poles
Bitch take off your clothes, pose, put on a hell of a show
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Old 01-02-2014, 11:44 PM   #766
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I clicked heels and picked toto out the photo booth
Corset grave, I uhh, I adore the raves- absorbing waves
Morph to paint? Mortal saint. What's her porno name?
I'm more so sane as I always almost never am
Kick this cunt's stomach 4 we get close to Bethlehem
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Old 01-02-2014, 11:44 PM   #767
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I clicked heels and picked toto out the photo booth
Corset grave, I uhh, I adore the raves- absorbing waves
Morph to paint? Mortal saint. What's her porno name?
I'm more so sane as I always almost never am
Kick this cunt's stomach 4 we get close to Bethlehem
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Old 01-03-2014, 05:07 AM   #768
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I'm metaprose. The hover-over-keyboards type.
Get it bro? I know you get it, bro. Crack a smile.
A cracka knows when he gets it right. Teeth so white,
Brush between and make that Dial indiglo. Files load.
Containment breach from Initech to Intertrode.
Get an internship, step your res up, get hired BRO.
Made for meter. Meager rhymes. Sleep or flight,
decision time. Get your sneakers wet,
get on your grind til u hear the cartilage creaks,
spark in the heat, I'm not an engineer yet, b,
but I can freak a desk til its trapped under sheets
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Old 01-03-2014, 09:15 PM   #769
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Old 01-03-2014, 09:26 PM   #770
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Therapys fine. seeing what these rarities find
borderline schizophrenic. they had to bury me twice
Aquemini charity line. southern hospitality
hostile tragedy. in honor of the apostles after me
double cross me at the intersection with Christ
intermingling with a new professional life
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Old 01-03-2014, 09:31 PM   #771
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Cunt lickin' good. Where the fuck to dump witness? Woods
Lung-twisted soot. Does one know where the sun isn't put?
It hung. Dripping. Look. The beauty in death.
You know how they build up the movie. In steps.
The rise. Her eye's grow a fungus tree
Slow & comforting. The glow of a summer breeze
Rummaging clones of under streets; add a dose of coloring
Just another soul for smothering..
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Old 01-03-2014, 09:47 PM   #772
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When Why's ways pries strength from inside a cage.
Those muggin at him sideways will get denied a grave
You get dumped on the highway and fly away without a say
While he drives off and enjoys his friday out on the lake
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Old 01-04-2014, 05:44 AM   #773
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the poetic inticed, but never been nice.
why sharpen steel, better to slice.
baretta n' knife fare better than Ike.
pair a paree n strike n get buried off-ferry tonight
a porshe carrera lost the merriest life.
rest in poem, paul, for the good die,
but the skeleton's give your misery life.
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I was born from a chemical splice
Mixed with acid, chloroform, and evilness twice
I was fed lethal amounts of ether as a baby
Beat in the head with speakers while they played me
Explicit snippets of slim shady so id absorb it
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Old 01-09-2014, 03:45 AM   #775
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Its the fuckin hunger games in thunder, rain, or calmness to be
We run the game with unrestrained dominant steeze
H.G. will abolish the weak with flawlessly methodical free's
We'll demolish the strong with our most polished lawless emcees
So off of the chain we could have been in django's release
We're throwin flames at a thousand degrees & its melting ya brain
Got the mod's investigating multiple homicide, sweet!
But all they gonna find is the body's of mutilated beef
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Old 01-09-2014, 12:30 PM   #776
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Adios. I write for audiophiles of sonograms. The soma type mesomorph. So Zygote like. Problematic. A liar. Evolved from the phylum 'Reich', my matriarch was the fire. Imagine Nagasaki. Maddening. Let the refuse burn off of me. Pancake, as a body. The fraud shell you shape as a hobby is to mine a copy, a xerox'd, wobbly, cartoon mockery. Derivative. I'm Han Solo in a dirigible, coasting over Leonidas' troupe in Thermopylae whistling Figaro. Stunning. A diamond. Catch a whiff of one wisp of my air in my stand alone jalopy. The DeLorean. Born again Jedi, in the nadir of irony. I'm rare. A mountain. You simian, you diminutive louse. I'm triple your midichlorian count. Its over 9000.
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So here i am again. Blank pad and a pen, deciding whether to write about something sad, or try blending the mix. Or would it be better to clevery create a plot in the middle? I could make the main character get shot and hobble a little, maybe make him walk with a cane that has a knot in the middle. It's important to be decriptive, imagery's key! But sometimes im too picky, too finicky when i key. Woe is me, i guess i just think about it hopelessly til it takes over me... sorry, i get a little over emotional when trying to envoke you to read.. something beautiful. Ive been told It's crucial to say something useful when you write, not the usual hype. That Make it "hit the audience" type til they feel a rush like peruvian white. so for who do you write, Yourself? Or to appease the crowd? The same faggots in the disc. Board trying to keep you down? I used to write to let my demons out, but that's all i see when im sleeping now. So i write to stay awake. It's gives me a sense of accomplishment, like ive finalized mistakes. it's a more peaceful route, keepin me calm n shit. you ever feel that way? Fuck it, 29 now.. let the dirty years begin. Ima write a bucket list worse than these last 30 years of sin... like Fuckin a model bitch named rhonda while tokin on a spliff, sippin a fifth of vodka in a broke down honda off route 66. Might pop in a disc of mickey avalons greatest hits and play that song jane fonda, then drive off of a cliff.. long live the abyss.
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whatever you said it doesn't matter for shit…..faggoty bitch
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Raggedy stitch smile crawls along walls
Actually it's wild. Vanity-kiss bile
Sellin' stolen sanity w/style
No bodies on it. Coke, Molly, oranges
Don't peel, just bite & suck juices
Flash in a pan. Sup? Deuces
What's stupid? Not an ounce of person
Swallow ring & wash down w/bourbon
Rain's iffy but the clouds are certain
Stay w/me, slut. Lol ur flounder's squirtin'
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