Battle Arena Chat - Page 4

Sharp · 06-15-2013, 11:26 PM

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Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

pls eat a dick retard

theres that superior wit we all are clearly afraid of because we can't match

Atomic · 06-15-2013, 11:28 PM

sorry i didn't realize every post had to be text based. ur virginity is astounding

Sharp · 06-15-2013, 11:30 PM

dont be mad

be glad

YDK · 06-20-2013, 06:35 PM

Tyson an my battle's ready for votes

Lecture · 06-27-2013, 12:28 AM

So much estrogen in here.

Objective · 06-27-2013, 01:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Lecture

So much estrogen in here.

Word.. But yo, where does that avatar of yours come from? Shit's dope af. Tell me it's based on a show/movie or somefin'.

Coup · 07-07-2013, 09:40 PM

@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon

Topic

line max 20
due Wednesday the 10th
inbox your verses then I'll create a clean thread with numbered verses: v1, v2, v3 anonymously.

understood ? cool.

07-07-2013, 09:44 PM

Word alrigt

Sharp · 07-09-2013, 04:16 PM

yo @Animosi T

you aren't bad but you're basically doing longbar which went out of style on any good text site awhile back. the only thing you didn't do too well was wording. think of each bar as a joke, setup and punchline, overwording it will make it less effective. hang around, there should be another 101 thread soon or if not i'm adding more assignments to the nameplays one to give you guys something to work on.

Animosi T · 07-09-2013, 09:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

yo @Animosi T

you aren't bad but you're basically doing longbar which went out of style on any good text site awhile back. the only thing you didn't do too well was wording. think of each bar as a joke, setup and punchline, overwording it will make it less effective. hang around, there should be another 101 thread soon or if not i'm adding more assignments to the nameplays one to give you guys something to work on.

I actually posted in the Nameplays thread. I want to learn, I felt like just quitting cuz I kept losing, but I see what you mean. I am getting better at punchlines, but occasionally make the set up weak. I thought people used long bar a lot. I see it often on Rap Royalty

Sharp · 07-09-2013, 09:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Animosi T

I actually posted in the Nameplays thread. I want to learn, I felt like just quitting cuz I kept losing, but I see what you mean. I am getting better at punchlines, but occasionally make the set up weak. I thought people used long bar a lot. I see it often on Rap Royalty

yeah... RR's isn't really good. they have maybe one good battler there. i mean, at the end of the day do you, but looking through the summer classic i feel like that style's a lot more effective than longbar.

I'm gonna add stuff to the nameplays thread, and i'll be more active about giving feedback and examples if i cant get knuck to be in there

Animosi T · 07-09-2013, 09:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

yeah... RR's isn't really good. they have maybe one good battler there. i mean, at the end of the day do you, but looking through the summer classic i feel like that style's a lot more effective than longbar.

I'm gonna add stuff to the nameplays thread, and i'll be more active about giving feedback and examples if i cant get knuck to be in there

Yea, check my punchline in that thread.

I think RR has a lot of good battlers tbh, I think the style just depends on the forum, some like long bar, others like the quick punch. Do you mind if I ever message you for some tips?

Sharp · 07-09-2013, 10:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Animosi T

Yea, check my punchline in that thread.

I think RR has a lot of good battlers tbh, I think the style just depends on the forum, some like long bar, others like the quick punch. Do you mind if I ever message you for some tips?

not at all dude, always happy to help. i know vinny's good but most of RR's top guys couldn't hang very easily tbh. most of the vets here are old longbar heads who made the switch too.

Animosi T · 07-09-2013, 10:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

not at all dude, always happy to help. i know vinny's good but most of RR's top guys couldn't hang very easily tbh. most of the vets here are old longbar heads who made the switch too.

Shiiiit, that would be abandoning everything I've been thought. I see what you mean, I just don't know how i'd write a punch in fewer words. I like to use personals, so the bars always end up long to fit everything lol.

Sharp · 07-09-2013, 10:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Animosi T

Shiiiit, that would be abandoning everything I've been thought. I see what you mean, I just don't know how i'd write a punch in fewer words. I like to use personals, so the bars always end up long to fit everything lol.

its easier than you think, if you want to. i'll shoot you some feeback on your verse in a pm when i get home.

Animosi T · 07-09-2013, 10:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

its easier than you think, if you want to. i'll shoot you some feeback on your verse in a pm when i get home.

Sure that'd be good. Either on my verse in our battle or the punchline I wrote in the nameplay thread, which ever one you have time for :)

07-09-2013, 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Animosi T

Sure that'd be good. Either on my verse in our battle or the punchline I wrote in the nameplay thread, which ever one you have time for :)

You don't seem like a faggot.

Therefore, Meth is happy to help you as well

Spoken · 07-09-2013, 10:40 PM

Meth help me on mine
@Coup and @Rawn MacDon I I hadn't stumbled in this thread I would have never known the topic lol I didn't receive a notification for some odd reason but I'll wrIte now and have it sent you to coup in the AM

Animosi T · 07-09-2013, 10:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Meth

You don't seem like a faggot.

Therefore, Meth is happy to help you as well

Thanks man, very generous of you. Will PM if I have any questions!

Coup · 07-10-2013, 06:23 AM

@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon

..if you got yours send it

06-20-2013, 06:35 PM	#64
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Tyson an my battle's ready for votes __________________

06-27-2013, 12:28 AM	#65
Lecture The Playground Bully Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 33	So much estrogen in here. __________________ creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score

07-07-2013, 09:40 PM	#67
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon Topic line max 20 due Wednesday the 10th inbox your verses then I'll create a clean thread with numbered verses: v1, v2, v3 anonymously. understood ? cool. __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.

07-09-2013, 10:40 PM	#78
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Meth help me on mine @Coup and @Rawn MacDon I I hadn't stumbled in this thread I would have never known the topic lol I didn't receive a notification for some odd reason but I'll wrIte now and have it sent you to coup in the AM __________________ WP Po'ethics

07-10-2013, 06:23 AM	#80
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon ..if you got yours send it __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.

06-15-2013, 11:28 PM	#62
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	sorry i didn't realize every post had to be text based. ur virginity is astounding

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