09-17-2014, 08:54 PM | #1 |
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09-18-2014, 01:05 AM | #2 |
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09-19-2014, 08:43 PM | #5 |
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Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin? I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin! I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right ...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked! That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore! Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me ..Ez - Dropped early because I'm going on a trip. Won't be back till Tuesday morning.
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ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim |
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09-22-2014, 05:52 PM | #7 |
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Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin! jk is just kidding, this a stretch I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right ...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! lol ok, cool He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked! nice That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore! ...ehh played but coo np Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me lol weak VS ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs ok decent enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win buildup was dope. weak ending tho, easy win was ehh seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound lol nice so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in niice np. LOTB lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim bang bang nice battle, i figured profit was going to show up, i think he just came up short here. jilti had some nice nameplays plus the LOTB. profit had a decent verse but too inconsistent. vote: jilti
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Zebra stripes and school boy
Vs Brace, pass wind, cross dresser & extended mag I felt this was one sided here. I only got two quotable a from profit where jilti had one miss really. His verse was smoother better word plays Vote jilti |
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3-0 Jilti Wins. Good battle J.
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09-24-2014, 12:25 PM | #12 |
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Thanks man, Good battle to u as well Profit
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09-24-2014, 12:35 PM | #13 |
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09-24-2014, 09:00 PM | #14 |
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I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! vs ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in Profit: You had good direction, I feel you lacked with creativity and execution.. seems you took the simple approach which can work at times when the wording is top notch.. A lot of potential in you just get more creative and step out the box a bit. jilti: Had some cool wording, had 2 solid lines, I feel you need to just keep it more consistent and try to get alil creative also. v/Jilly
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ilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin! ehh joking and just kidding are different I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right ...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! not feeling this He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked! nahh That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore! played Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me weak closer Vs ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs ehh played concept enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win cool seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound nice so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in cool lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim dope Vote jil |
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I already lost, but I'm gonna vote anyways.
Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin? I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin! (1010) -- this got me laughin I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right ...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! (8/10) over all good lines He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked! (3/10) You said "he" and then "you" in the same line. Bad English. The 2nd line was ok. That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore! (10/10) this was a good punch line, set the stage /w line 1 & line 2 killed it. Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me (2/10) 1st line was decent, but the 3rd one kind of went off topic. 35 vs ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs (6/10) 1st line was dope, second line followed it up nicely… but lack of rhymes dropped it from 10/10 to 6/10. enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win (2/10) didn't rhyme, and I'm sure "easy win" has been over-used seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound (7/10) these were good lines, only reason I dropped it from a 10 to a 7 is because Windu dropped some tight lines. Close battles are fun to read. so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in (4/10) I couldn't see why you'd take his outfit if he's a cross dresser, but it rhymed and the second line earned you the 4 points. lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim (10/10) Excellent closer -- best line that you dropped. 29 Close one. /V Profit |
09-28-2014, 07:47 PM | #17 |
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Profit: JK was wack, zebra cakes isn't really hard hitting, a lot of connection in ya third bar but this nice jab, like the connection but the punch was lacking, self nameplay punch came up weak, bad closer.
Jilti: didn't like the rhyme n I've seen a few PG punches.. This one was that good,2nd bar could have been worded better into a dope punch, making a sound was good.. Nice set up, drag lines are played n the execution on this was lacking any how, nice closer. Easy win for Jilti, Profit needs better concepts. V/Jilti |
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