11-25-2017, 09:20 PM | #1 |
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this gun i bought'll send 50 shots.....I'm Effen this nigga up.
If anything I'll 21 this savage for doing cover songs out the writer's mouth forging
you'd cover my art as a dog that bite Without Warning I get swollen Off-sets, you in your car can't even hold the arm rest I Woo bitches off what my Golden Armz rep face value, your mug shot is what my open palm read talk to the hand, you'll talk smack, now my open palm's red holdin' on techs purchased with a Tony Stark's check Im over-cookin this nigga, don't hope the smoke alarm's set Make you bite the curb, you'll get tar (guitar) rock him steady for stringing along this Lunatic... Garth and Nelly Your baby mama felt me, at your apartment with a box of 'rellyz hit it then car-dash...- she - in to me's like the box for Reggie your baby mom was preggie, that was God's son across her belly like that wouldv'e been the best rebuttle, have Nas feelin' he lost already you Big Willie? They'll lock me up when I pop a Willie here for this Slum Dog, they'll toss a Mill in there Shit's meek, Slum Dog Millionaire, your life's on the line you struggle at struggle bars trying to use those "Life Lines" Life and Times of Sean Carter, my words speak volumes dude take that bass out your voice like no Subs to the car in use Lil nigga you liftin' weights and addin' plates? "O, Dog" I fiend for cheese burgers. I'm addin' plates of Mc's ate Get it? fiend for cheese burgers? Mc Eiht? leave you in a Lake uhh in New Jersey for 24 after I empty 8 retire your jersey he not a rapper nor gangsta nigga stick to the script cuz if he bring that drama, on the reel, Imma give him a clip! I've boxed officers, you box office-sir you in a box with your thoughts, I get the box off of her - thots I got matches on hold.. who will I bone next? I'll put a stack on my phone.. before I Phone 'Ex Ill pose with a stack phone and put a stack on ya head ....One Call........and I won't say that through a text then the techs sent, I'll send a emoji, you'll get the picture Nigga I said I'll send a Emo G...a skitzo nigga that got tourettes, so how he'll kill you, he'll explain you that shit more animated than Designner yellin' Panda adlibs Yeah he childish - he well over 30, people He killed over 30 people - he'll yell over 30 people hot boy, don't care if he makin' the spot hot He Tyronne... catch your wife eye (wifi) like radius hot spots I can get ratchet as the current mainstream what's poppin' list you step in to the SPOTIFY need some Common Sense? And I'm with the shits, be best if you use your STREAM of consciousness or imma stream your consciousness for tryin chance the rapper...cap 3 on top of lids and your 3rd eye will be on a acid trip Send a hot one..(Album)I'll bum rush and put out a hit Coloring book.. you get drawn on... all out on a limb Last edited by Quarter O; 11-25-2017 at 09:42 PM. |
11-26-2017, 01:22 AM | #2 |
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Thought this was fire. Smooth flow. Wayyyyyy better suited for audio though and moat of the people on this site will hate this in text format. But this shit would def be raw over the right beat and shit. Wasbt big on the area where u was talking bout meek and jay and shit. The reat was dope tho. On some up north east coast type shit.
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11-26-2017, 12:04 PM | #3 |
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Don't know mate good wordplay again wasn't feeling the title or the concept surrounding the story but yeah some of this was halfway decent at best... Needed more lax shit to be honest felt like you were popping off most of the time... Or too much in general... Just my opinion tho...
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11-26-2017, 09:42 PM | #4 |
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Thought the 50 Cent drop in the title was cool
Didn't read the rest though
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