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Old 10-30-2017, 05:45 PM   #1
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A residual haunt, shes gone, ive been myserably lost
She walks accross the living room, pauses, visually flawless
Then she dissapears, i zone, and sit here alone
Ashtray overflow, her ghost was ciggarette smoke
Nicotine stained walls, coffee splashing my jeans
Another dose of caffeine, grinds trapped in my teeth
12 cup pot brewing, folgers, how i usually do it
To stuck in my ways, ill never switch over to keurig
Besides, its 10 bucks, just for 12 little cups..
Premeasured, and its never to the strength that i want
I like to adjust, but thats the price you pay for convenience
Thank god theres other options, either take it or leave it
Im just sayin', to each his own, i could never conform
Ideas i kick around, my 3rd or 4th cup of coffee this mornin'
The best part of waking up, isnt whats in your cup..
Its my hallucination, that my girl is ready to fuck

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Old 12-11-2017, 11:42 PM   #2
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I drink coffee, but casually. You on the other hand seemed to be addicted to caffeine. I think you did a great job articulating just that. Your flow was in the pocket per usual. Your lyrics were insightful in relation to your habit and entertaining in terms of wordplay and syntax. Dope ish, Geno. It was a short, but highly enjoyable read. Peace.
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