12-10-2017, 07:15 AM | #1 |
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12-10-2017, 09:45 AM | #2 |
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12-10-2017, 11:56 AM | #3 |
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12-14-2017, 10:21 PM | #4 |
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One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee! “Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month Last edited by For Battling; 12-14-2017 at 11:24 PM. |
12-14-2017, 11:17 PM | #5 |
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Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you. Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip. And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds |
12-15-2017, 04:35 AM | #6 |
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Had no idea what Hooters was so googled it and got lost in the web for 2 hours. Cartoon love was nice, killing his kids was nice, not feeling the eiffel tower line, I like the garage line thought it would be played but its new to me, wasn't feelin the closer Innovator First line was really poor, no payoff and very wordy. Shadow line was nice but wasn't too hard hitting, I liked it though. Grocery line didn't have anything to it really, and using geez to complete a multi was poor. Rubber grip was ok. Finisher was meh. You seemed to re-use the words lips and seeds alot, like it became noticeable. I got For B taking this with a better verse and hard punches, Inno I think your style isn't really setup to hit hard. Its nice in places but I wasn't feeling anything hit hard. |
12-15-2017, 06:15 AM | #7 |
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Got For Battling in this one. Apart from the last four, overall better punches and thorough/clever concepts, where Innovator seemed rushed which resulted in forced lines.
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12-15-2017, 06:44 AM | #8 |
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FB - hearts in the air was cool delivery lacked a bit though, lol'ed at toys by the tree that's silly but good, automatics was good..
Inno - groceries was cool, pulled the rubber grip niiiiice wish I thought of it Entertaining battle I like both styles. I've got FB here slight edge. FB explain chopper bar to me later
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12-15-2017, 07:21 AM | #9 | |
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Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you. Statements. But keen observation. Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip. Coo imagery, clunky setup And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries Nah I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe Its cute. Havent seen it. Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds Too wordy here. Inno- improved from last week, hope u take thé crit & keep on V- FB |
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12-15-2017, 08:40 AM | #10 |
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LOL I think he meant he was opening up the toys/guns by the tree.. not actual gifts bruh? @Infiltration
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for battling was all around stronger here but I always enjoy a good punchline about zelphs mangled lip v fb |
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For the record, I'm going to read For Battlings verse in For Battlings way of reading.
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12-16-2017, 08:28 AM | #13 |
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One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters Didn't like this I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love Dope It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee! “Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree Niiice! Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy Nah I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors Dope! Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month Ok Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you. Nah, Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip. Lol, And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries Set up nice punch weak I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe Cool Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds Nah For landed a couple mire here plus I he had the better ones so I got for battling taking this.. |
12-16-2017, 05:18 PM | #14 |
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One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters ^^ok good opener I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love ^^^nice It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee! “Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree ^^nah came off corny as fuck lol Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy ^^^nah super corny I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors ^^^solid bar Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month ^^^nah l ready use a Spotify line 3 yrs ago, this pretty played Vs Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you. ^^^ehh bland tbh Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip. ^^^Lmfao good And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries ^^^nah I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe ^^^decent Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds ^^^nah V/lip pratt, this was a cool lil battle, inno is gettin better i see him being pretty good at the end of the season if he does more bars like the spark the fifth. lip had solid verse acouple of good lines. props to both.
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12-16-2017, 07:00 PM | #15 |
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Zelph: hooters lol
Vs Innovator: not feelin anything here mane Overall: shit battle Vote: for battling |
12-16-2017, 10:17 PM | #16 |
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Jesus Christ I have to vote for zelph?
Fuck u inno for doing this to me lippy got this one tho opener, nina, garage doors were decent Inno had lip shadow which of course is lolz, think your execution killed the 2 lips line, it had potential, but disappointed cause I’m sure you’re capable of beating zelph V/sippy cup |
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