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12-10-2017, 07:14 AM
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Alvin Karpis vs WRATH - KARP WINS
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16. If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! @Alvin Karpis @WRATH |
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12-11-2017, 09:09 PM
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12-12-2017, 04:19 PM
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12-13-2017, 09:23 PM
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fuckin 16 lol
Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay... You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then |
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12-14-2017, 01:06 AM
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Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog |
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12-14-2017, 05:48 AM
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karp had wrat to us child proof skip ahead ugly sweater lmao lotb 2020 vision damn ikno I was rusty too but where was this shit last week? straight verse, pretty consistent. bitch in kar was coo but self hype so I didnt quote wrath had bandits which was pretty good but not much of a diss so it was on par w/ bitch in kar from alvin steel beam was dece rest was either forced wp or corny ideas, wrath ur definitely improving tho, keep at it. the perfect blueprint kinda verse to study/elevate off of is ironically ur opponent's here v/Alvin Karpis props to both |
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12-14-2017, 07:50 AM
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Make my day
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Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us -I like this All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop -thought this was light Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope -cool Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade -lol this was good coulda had something more to indicate he's weak or something in the first line but i still thought this was nice Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay... You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ -not feelin this All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot -not a huge fan of this For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex -lmao nice I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then -nice.. vs Idgaf about this shit This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner -not feleing this one U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok -not a fan of this either Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you -this is a reach. I assume u were going for "alvin sigh, man the odor" You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra -thought this was nice Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan -not diggin this Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator -this was aight U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena -i ties in with dance in the first line but other than that nothing witty about this. can't give this one too you... wording was nice tho Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog -not feelin it Alvin had a really nice verse with only a couple misses. Wrath had a decent verse too but just didn't do enough to take on Alvin here. Cool battle v/ Alvin
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12-14-2017, 09:21 AM
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AK - child proof was cute, ugly sweater was aight, rest were ok. Ugly sweater I couldn't give props to bc I've done it. Didn't like the west line.
Wrath - haha @ Alvin Theodore line doesn't work but nice try, bandits line was tough, lot of references in this verse should tone that down, steel beam nice. I enjoyed Wrath's verse more but his misses were worse. I have to go Alvin here with the better verse. Mvgt AK
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12-14-2017, 06:22 PM
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Karp had the better overall verse. Wrath surprised though. But that chipmunks shit was bad even if u did thee. Not good. Steel operator was good. Al had opener and the two last bars
I got Karp
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12-14-2017, 11:57 PM
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Wrath
Had some decent stuff the orchestra line was ok and so was The lil xan line too thought it flowed well. Good vsrse bug you had more Misses than hits bruh. Karpis I can’t you picking up speed already lol. First 4 lines where nice and crisp That spree spree replay combo was just dope. Thot line ugly sweater And the closer all nice. Vote karpis |
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12-15-2017, 01:45 AM
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Karpis was way more consistent, clean verse....opener was ok. skip was ok. sweater been done, 2020 vision feels done but cool to me....but yo that PJ line latrell sprewell? loool how old is that? Lol.
Wrath had steel beam which was coo, bandit ive seen done so it aint fresh to me but one of your better hits. Alvin Theodore stretched asf but showed creativity. v- karpis |
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12-15-2017, 04:58 PM
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12-15-2017, 08:24 PM
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this was a no brainer should of battled aero stop with the easy comp bullshit v-karp
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12-15-2017, 08:25 PM
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this was a no brainer should of battled aero stop with the easy comp bullshit v-karp
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12-15-2017, 08:51 PM
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Double posted cause you know you wrong
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12-15-2017, 10:34 PM
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I dug Wraths vs, had a lot of dynamic and creativity.
Karp's attack for the most part was consistent and effective. A few misses I got Karp with a more direct verse and less misses than wrath
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12-15-2017, 11:09 PM
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fuckin 16 lol
Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us Nice All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop Nah Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope Dope Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade Ok Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay... You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ Fire, All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot Nice For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex Dope I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then Cool Idgaf about this shit This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner Ok U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok Nah even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you Forced You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra Dope Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan Nah Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator Nah U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena Nah Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog Coulda been good, light as is Karp was solid af. Wrath had one dope bar n some cool concepts that would been cool if worded better.. karp got it __________________ |
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12-15-2017, 11:40 PM
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All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay... You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex Vs you can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator V/Karpis, this was a cool battle but ak went in here tbh...had some dope shit that ugly sweater line was fire. wrath had acouple of dope lines steel beam was fire, props to both.
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