TTT06 FINALS - jayk vs Nahmed (Topical Text battle)

God Of War · 01-24-2013, 02:56 PM

Topic - God and the Apocalypse, Storytelling.

(tell a story about the end of the world from God's perspective, he realises he can't do anything about it. Who's behind it? How is it possible that God cant stop it? What happens?)

You can twist the idea of the topic anyway you want, the only requirement is that the world must end by the end of your verse, no heroes, just agony.

Nahmed

Tabula Rasa

They say I..
created the world in six days, relaxed
on the 7th day of Sabbath- imagine that claim is factless
See. Let me take you back to Genesis, the sacred passage
I invented men, and faced a challenge from a great imbalance
me rest in Heaven's gates? a pure statement of fallacy
It was me versus HIM for the fate of the galaxies.
separated light from dark, sky from earth, land from sea
left the seventh day to seperate San From me
put a wall between my equal and opposite
'cause I believe in being, he DOESN'T. he's even anonymous.
anything i could EVER build - he could destroy
see he even creeped in the Garden of Eden and toppled it
in revelations armageddon befalls man- I knew. it was all planned
the culprit at the root of it called San
the barrier was impossible. the apocalypse is due.
to philosophers who pondered- it's the Rock I couldn't move.
they say the greatest trick the Devil ever pulled
was convincing the world that he didn't exist
an embodiment that contradicts things that men know
NONEXISTENCE. possessing Satan's evil - ten fold.
So to him, I'm evil. I'm the villain meant to hate
For making something I KNEW he was built to desimate
NONEXISTENCE he makes. we've never spoke his name.
But we both have our flaws. say we're both to blame
I brought this upon you, you're just a product of my weakness.
I'm ashamed. I'm inept. and i've got to be defeated.
I created life with no way to protect it.
created man in my own image and can't face my reflection
You're all about to die- there's nothing left to run through
It was just a matter of time. Death becomes you.
Again.

vs.

jayk

kneeling at the altar, but jayk never goes to church
on the ceiling is the martyr, tethered to his perch
sent to do the worst, i felt the burst of God in me
in my head i hear the words, calling me the Beast
the carnage i release will rip apart my friends
annihilation of the populace, it's time to start the end...
i step to the metropolis, fits and kicking as i pass
blood jets from the nostrils, they physically collapse
i giggle as i pass, women dripping from the gash
i raise my fist and laugh, sizzle the city into ash
it was a fitting path, that Los Angeles was cleared
stricken from the map, the angels vanished, disappeared
crying with the pleasure, there's a cancer in my tears
that finds and binds the rest that managed to get clear
there's proof around the earth the power in me rises
magma shoots from out the dirt, showering from geysers
the doom is now for sure, and as the burning smoulders
i zoom about the world, wings bursting from my shoulders
could you hazard to guess, if you'd seen me in the past
this actor'd get possessed, the creature of God's wrath?
but what is at issue is i've been sent to shred the vile
corrupt officials, violent men, and every pedophile
and as i slay society, there's panic in the streets
we've strayed too far from piety, humanity must cease
all robbers that stole, every husband beat his dame
must be swallowed whole, in the sudden heat of flame
as i publically declaim the judgement in His name
all this sudden destruction finally has begun to wane
every person became tinder, they had sinning in their hearts
the earth is now a blackened cinder... spinning in the dark

Winner, and Topical Text Tournament Champion

Nahmed

sral · 12-06-2017, 08:46 AM

Kind of cool how me and Jayk have a similar style with our rhyme patterns and whatnot. I beat him at AOR or UA, one of them, but we never topical battled it was straight up text battle.

I just came across this and realised how similar our styles are. Pretty crazy.

01-24-2013, 02:56 PM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	TTT06 FINALS - jayk vs Nahmed (Topical Text battle) Topic - God and the Apocalypse, Storytelling. (tell a story about the end of the world from God's perspective, he realises he can't do anything about it. Who's behind it? How is it possible that God cant stop it? What happens?) You can twist the idea of the topic anyway you want, the only requirement is that the world must end by the end of your verse, no heroes, just agony. Nahmed Tabula Rasa They say I.. created the world in six days, relaxed on the 7th day of Sabbath- imagine that claim is factless See. Let me take you back to Genesis, the sacred passage I invented men, and faced a challenge from a great imbalance me rest in Heaven's gates? a pure statement of fallacy It was me versus HIM for the fate of the galaxies. separated light from dark, sky from earth, land from sea left the seventh day to seperate San From me put a wall between my equal and opposite 'cause I believe in being, he DOESN'T. he's even anonymous. anything i could EVER build - he could destroy see he even creeped in the Garden of Eden and toppled it in revelations armageddon befalls man- I knew. it was all planned the culprit at the root of it called San the barrier was impossible. the apocalypse is due. to philosophers who pondered- it's the Rock I couldn't move. they say the greatest trick the Devil ever pulled was convincing the world that he didn't exist an embodiment that contradicts things that men know NONEXISTENCE. possessing Satan's evil - ten fold. So to him, I'm evil. I'm the villain meant to hate For making something I KNEW he was built to desimate NONEXISTENCE he makes. we've never spoke his name. But we both have our flaws. say we're both to blame I brought this upon you, you're just a product of my weakness. I'm ashamed. I'm inept. and i've got to be defeated. I created life with no way to protect it. created man in my own image and can't face my reflection You're all about to die- there's nothing left to run through It was just a matter of time. Death becomes you. Again. vs. jayk kneeling at the altar, but jayk never goes to church on the ceiling is the martyr, tethered to his perch sent to do the worst, i felt the burst of God in me in my head i hear the words, calling me the Beast the carnage i release will rip apart my friends annihilation of the populace, it's time to start the end... i step to the metropolis, fits and kicking as i pass blood jets from the nostrils, they physically collapse i giggle as i pass, women dripping from the gash i raise my fist and laugh, sizzle the city into ash it was a fitting path, that Los Angeles was cleared stricken from the map, the angels vanished, disappeared crying with the pleasure, there's a cancer in my tears that finds and binds the rest that managed to get clear there's proof around the earth the power in me rises magma shoots from out the dirt, showering from geysers the doom is now for sure, and as the burning smoulders i zoom about the world, wings bursting from my shoulders could you hazard to guess, if you'd seen me in the past this actor'd get possessed, the creature of God's wrath? but what is at issue is i've been sent to shred the vile corrupt officials, violent men, and every pedophile and as i slay society, there's panic in the streets we've strayed too far from piety, humanity must cease all robbers that stole, every husband beat his dame must be swallowed whole, in the sudden heat of flame as i publically declaim the judgement in His name all this sudden destruction finally has begun to wane every person became tinder, they had sinning in their hearts the earth is now a blackened cinder... spinning in the dark Winner, and Topical Text Tournament Champion Nahmed

12-06-2017, 08:46 AM	#2
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Kind of cool how me and Jayk have a similar style with our rhyme patterns and whatnot. I beat him at AOR or UA, one of them, but we never topical battled it was straight up text battle. I just came across this and realised how similar our styles are. Pretty crazy. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)