Week 3: 2Tripple0 vs. InsaneVillain [IV 6-0]

Sammy · 01-08-2017, 10:24 PM

IV, my Man U did a verse on the election and social landscape? Because not enough of those has been scribed already. Read this yesterday and I was hoping with another perusing I can pick up on something new but alas it was just as boring. First off I hate "ion" rhyming. Nothing personal it just annoys me lol. It's cheap. Flow wasn't as smooth due to lack of transition imo. I do like some of the scheme employed.

2trip/ from RB to here I see unintelligible nonsense is still something ur doing. WHAT THE FUCK IS YOU TALKKNG ABOUT nigga? Tone was al over the place. Image made no sense. Rhyming had the swag of someone who started yesterday. Trip I like u bro for ur thick skin but come on son.

Vote IV because his made sense.

01-08-2017, 10:24 PM	#1
Sammy Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 103 Champed - Write Week 7 Rep Power: 3415773	IV, my Man U did a verse on the election and social landscape? Because not enough of those has been scribed already. Read this yesterday and I was hoping with another perusing I can pick up on something new but alas it was just as boring. First off I hate "ion" rhyming. Nothing personal it just annoys me lol. It's cheap. Flow wasn't as smooth due to lack of transition imo. I do like some of the scheme employed. 2trip/ from RB to here I see unintelligible nonsense is still something ur doing. WHAT THE FUCK IS YOU TALKKNG ABOUT nigga? Tone was al over the place. Image made no sense. Rhyming had the swag of someone who started yesterday. Trip I like u bro for ur thick skin but come on son. Vote IV because his made sense.