Jianghu (Chinese)

[Lenox]

Originally Posted by Geno

Lol. Nasty, dig it.

This was really quite remarkable, admittedly -i did not finish the whole thing but i got through verse one. Just wanted to kind of touch base on what i thought, i may or may not get to finish this before i forget its here but im a busy guy so probably not tbh

Thought it was packed with visuals and really good deacriptive writing. Flowed nice sullable wise, one gripe would be the monotonous scheme that seemed to hnever switch up or break free of itself. Normally would be a small thing, but normally it would also be a small verse. Im assuming the flow stayed the same for all three verses, but again.. thats just an assumption because as i said i didnt have time to read them all. Enjoyed what i read to be sure though. I hope it doesnt offend you that i didnt finish the whole piece. It was dope tho

Bump my shit u bald faggot