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Apeshit
I pop fools wit the Rugar, crew full of shootas
My G's all ape and we move like a Unit Don't be goofy and confuse it, my goons too ruthless Boot ya in the mouth banana clip'll leave ya toothless You losers getting zooted off a nickel in a toothpick While my niggas blowing Snoop Gorilla Glue inside of Cubans The booth is gettin humid ... ain't no stompin out the flames My boo's ass is stoopid - she got Donkey of the Day Shout out to Charlemagne; I've been knighted by the Gods Ciroc is the name, Diddy boppin in the rain Empire State of Mind - I am Kong rockin Js With Beyoncé on the stage and we never 'On The Run' But stay on a Rampage for them Jacksons gettin paid I'm Goodall day if the cash and Mary Jane is blue Bombay She Baloo me fa the chain, King Louie and champagne I knew she wanted fame, shot a movie and explained Bared necessities of life - popped dat coochie in da frame Uncle Luke her wit the gang? Dude you gotta be insane? Cos I'm too damn fly ... to do a choochoo train I ain't tryna catch a case like my nigga Pac did Or be locked in a cage like a gotdamn chimp I'm a Ceasar on these streets - a Sultan to the sheiks And all a Ge-nies is a flawless ass freak On sum Abu Dhabi sheets (a-ladd-in the East) But I represent the West, where monkeys get greased For beatin on they chest - we'll empty out the clip And leave em sunken with the fishes For tryna throw a wrench - we ain't wit the monkey business "You Mighty Joe, huh?" You might need jo gun Cos the youngins going bongo From McNola slums to jungles of Chicago - M'Baku
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This one right is fire foreal bro.
Love your flow and rhymes in this was crazy .. " my girl ass Stoopid she get donkey of day " was one of my favorite lines in this one |
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charlamagne a ho ass nigga tbh
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I'm surprised to hear you say that.
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09-07-2018, 09:52 AM | #5 |
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notice the 'a' after the 'l' instead of an 'e' - i'm not talking about the ancient king.
this was fun. kinetic rhymes. some interesting spells of wordplay. remind me of chyeah (who is actually good at what he does despite constantly being jawed at). the vibe itself is only really one that catches me when i'm high and (try) freestyling. going bananas. m'baku is a good, if racist, character in the marvel universe. schemes are an interesting thing in of themselves and i find maintaining a string to be very predictable for a reader, but maintaining several strings, or morphing the string, and having it co-exist with content, is interesting. generally just playing with the reader's expectation and its own aural quality. it's a lot more creative to me. even if you dig up old pieces you're a prolific writer, which is cool. something i haven't been for years. keep doing you. Last edited by Eŋg; 09-07-2018 at 09:55 AM. |
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Hey, appreciate the feed ppls. Shoot me a link and I'll rtf.
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he speaks....
lmao you stupiddddd for this Act
when I started reading this Yung Joc's "It's goin down" beat instantly popped into my head and pretty much added to the already awesome cadence of this piece. Eng was right to say what he said cause the aloof and obscure connections that we're known for are only meant for penners & readers like us lol. You got those snickers you were looking for lol. It's the way the slick shit almost gets past you then you quick rewind like "wtf, you sick slick bastard" That's the reward of reading shit like this IMO for ex) You losers getting zooted off a nickel in a toothpick While my niggas blowing Snoop Gorilla Glue inside of Cubans the damn near perfect wording and placement in this was all for the sake of the flow but Snoop gorilla glue = sticky of the icky. It isn't just random words like most would read it, the fucker is leaving breadcrumbs lol I liked it Ciroc is the name, Diddy boppin in the rain Empire State of Mind - I am Kong rockin Js With Beyoncé on the stage and we never 'On The Run' I dunno if you meant Sir Rock but that's what I got from the initial layout. The Kong reference, empire state bldg, rocking Jays....then tie it in to B and the name of her tour. Nice I'll be back to lay more feed in a minute
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I knew she wanted fame, shot a movie and explained
Bared necessities of life - popped dat coochie in da frame ungh.
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nigga tied it in a line earlier with She Baloo me fa the chain tryna fuck with our heads and shit smh, I even forgot about the Jay and Bey Apeshit theme anyways Or be locked in a cage like a gotdamn chimp I'm a Ceasar on these streets - a Sultan to the sheiks And all a Ge-nies is a flawless ass freak On sum Abu Dhabi sheets (a-ladd-in the East) But I represent the West, where monkeys get greased For beatin on they chest - we'll empty out the clip And leave em sunken with the fishes For tryna throw a wrench - we ain't wit the monkey business "You Mighty Joe, huh?" You might need jo gun Cos the youngins going bongo From McNola slums to jungles of Chicago you managed to tie in Planet of the Apes, Jungle Book, Aladdin, King Kong, Rampage, Mighty Joe young. My only gripe is you didn't end with Congo for the closer to make it rhyme lol YOU WENT ABSOLUTELY APE!! my typa shit
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Thanks for the excellent feed, Chyeahhh!!!. You hit everything right on the nose. Glad you liked it, bro. You too, V. Respect.
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10-03-2018, 05:18 PM | #12 |
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thanks for hitting me back with that feed on my last drop!
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i am very good at rap, oh no not first post!?, this piece is my best bar!, time to 'respond' to feed!, time to bump my piece |
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