06-21-2013, 08:59 PM | #1 |
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Beware All Ye Who Enter the Limegreen (NC's diss)
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06-21-2013, 10:19 PM | #2 |
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Fuck
Edit: will be back Alright im back lol This is the best diss I've seen so far, and its guna be hard to beat. You went for a straight bar approach and it was very consistent. I mean, nothing felt like a reach here. It was obviously just all fun especially with that diss to your own crew (sorta) that was tight to see. I think naq nigma and strikta caught the worst burn damage here. Lolz though at the detour and DG lines. Some of your best moments came when the complexity of references was turned up i.e. Chyeahhh and Nigma lines. Tight af Vulgar. Im glad I made it out of this alive
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06-21-2013, 10:25 PM | #3 |
stokely carmichael of rap
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Churn out visions the people will like when I speak into mics
Outta this world between the grey lines… While Nigma the Nephilim is caught photographing Roswell creatures at nigh ^dope reference.. I used to like Chyeahhh despite his complete disregard for scanned information Changed his name to Edgar cause he’s black… and is always rantin’ and Raven They planned the invasion. Illuminati pledged the anthems, u just kept the ransom When I get mad I see red… ya’ll see pink, like il-nika’s temper tantrums ^lol Trust me I will blow the nitro on you pedophiles and villains Chronology of events: trap disses Masai Bey, I sigh, Bey starts eyeing some children ^loool , ^that flowed so well too Psychiatrist with pizazz bumping the tribes of Shabazz, a fuckin’ tyrant with an axe ^loved the tribe of shabazz ref.. But yo, I’ma let uh oh grab the tooleys… and Joe Metts (Captain Boobies) Rawn’s entire resume consists of unrealistic screenplays rejected from action movies ^leaned me.. That’s a classic doozey. I’m like a starved wolf the way I’ll attack and decapitate em I joined Above the Rest solely to spread vulgar doctrines thru the crew collaborations ^lol cold blooded I saw Masai at the chicken spot. Then I took a detour to Tourettes Street. Orc is the revamped portrait of Dorian Gray: Donovan Frailminded with compressed cheeks. loooooooooooooooooooooooool @ Tourettes Street and Donovan Frailminded compressed cheeks. that was LOTV to me. overall this was pretty hilarious i think. well written, with a good balance of comedy and soft jabs and pokes. well done sir.. you're a beast 1
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06-21-2013, 10:39 PM | #4 |
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Lots of dope lines in here, good shit. Hopefully this will spawn some more disses
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06-21-2013, 11:37 PM | #5 |
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You don't like me no.mo?
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06-22-2013, 12:59 AM | #6 |
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Haha good stuff man
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06-22-2013, 02:26 AM | #7 |
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good shit
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06-22-2013, 03:18 AM | #8 |
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This was dope man, well written...
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06-22-2013, 03:21 AM | #9 |
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Still left me out, fuck you
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06-22-2013, 08:03 AM | #10 |
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I had to scry these forms on tablets, a knowledge Hobbit. Bilbo the Psycho.
ROFLZZZ. I wonder who unearthed the unnatural filth known as Kyzo lmao i wonder the same shit every day the diss was dope there was some really clean lines But yo, I’ma let uh oh grab the tooleys… and Joe Metts (Captain Boobies) Rawn’s entire resume consists of unrealistic screenplays rejected from action movies lmao rawn the last action hero , that movie popped in my head when i read ur bar here this was dope vulg |
06-22-2013, 10:37 AM | #11 |
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Yo. This was ill as hell.
Kind of had a rough beginning to me but once I got about 1/3 of the read over this shit really picked up and got ferocious. Dope shit vulgar. Guess I gotta drop a site diss next lol
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06-30-2013, 02:32 PM | #12 |
White Earl
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01-24-2019, 11:40 PM | #13 |
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Lol
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01-26-2019, 12:35 AM | #14 |
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Lmao, this was pretty dope..I could dig this in a way. I'm glad you went on about shouting out people on this website..with good multi-syllabic rhymes..and schemes..I could dig this for the most part man..had a good feel to it..I enjoyed this..you're a dope writer..niice one..good work..keep writing!
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